Monday, August 12, 2019

Elise's vacay CH 2 Nadia's Nightmare

Elise had to really assist Nadia in walking, as they made their way toward the exit. The sedated redhead was barely coherent. Her head kept bobbing off Elise’s shoulder like a balloon. Her eyelids were heavy and her glazed green eyes kept rolling back slowly.

When they got near the bouncers, Elise made sure that her doll was turned so that her own red hair obscured her face.

“Is there a problem ladies?” one of the bouncers asked. 

“Oh no. My friend here just had a little too much to drink. I’m taking her home so she can sleep it off.”

Satisfied, the guards nod and let them pass.

After getting Nadia in the car, Elise puts her pale complected hand, over the conniving redhead’s mouth and nose and leaves it there until the girl completely passes out, then immediately removes it. After all, she didn’t want to kill her new doll.

The bus trip to Elise’s home was a long one. Once there, Elise laid Nadia on the bed.  She retrieved the girl’s phone. “Well… while you’re napping, we may as well find out what goodies you have on here.”

After cracking the password and poking around on Nadia’s phone for a while, Elise found the videos Nadia had recorded at the club earlier. It showed everything the redhead had done to Elise and everything she had made Elise do, in all the humiliating detail.

Rage built up in Elise slowly, as she watched the events. Her jaw getting tighter and tighter.

Then all at once, her mouth formed a quick smile. Her anger flowed out of her face like some valve had suddenly been released. “Well that wasn’t very nice,” she said cheerfully, as she looked at the still sleeping Nadia. “Oh but hey, I can forgive you. You’re a new doll and don’t know all the rules yet.”

Elise continued to smile playfully, then spoke again, tapping Nadia’s arm as she slept.. “You just continue to sleep there Naddie, Gotta take care of something before we play and break you in. Can’t be too careful you know,”


Nadia began to stir on the bed. She slowly opened her eyes and peered through hazy vision. She saw that she was in a strange bedroom, lying on a bed. 

She remembered she was entertaining herself with some goth looking girl at the Spirals NightClub. She had used hypnosis on the young woman, but for some reason, there was a huge blank spot in her own memory. How on earth did she get here? And where was here?

Nadia cautiously gets off the bed, as Elise enters the room. Nadia smiled, confidence returning to her face. Casually she said “Sleep.” But the strange punk girl didn’t sleep as expected. Instead, she smiled. “Your little magic word didn’t work this time, did it?”

Then, with scary suddenness. Elise pushes the redhead against the wall, intensity filling her eyes. “You aren’t the only one that knows hypnosis bitch! Self-hypnosis and meditation work wonders in removing nasty suggestions.” 

Then a second later, that rage-filled expression vanishes and is replaced by eerie cheerfulness. “Now… Let’s play!” she says.

Nadia is forcibly led to a room with a single chair it has restraints on it. 

She is made to sit in it, too scared to fight back. Her ace in the hole had been taken off the table and Elises volatility and unpredictability terrified the shit out of her. Looking around the room, she saw there was a fancy stereo on a shelf, A microphone rests on top of it.

The psycho girl started her “fun” by tickling Nadia with a feather. She did this on every part of Nadia’s body. At first, it was kinda fun but it kept going and soon she was laughing so hard, she couldn’t breathe.

It finally stopped, as Elise spoke. “You  know. Have you ever wanted something sweet and salty at the same time? I have. I love the contradiction and conflict it causes in my brain. 

She walked over and picked up a vibrator and stun-gun from a shelf Nadia had previously not noticed earlier. “I find you can amplify this feeling with pleasure and pain. Who knew huh?”

Elise used the vibrator to bring Nadia to a euphoric climax then immediately jabbed her in the side with the stun-gun sending searing pain shooting through the young woman’s body. 

She repeats this process for several minutes, circling around the chair, like a tiger stalking it’s prey. She then took a break and danced in front of Nadia. It wasn’t casual faux dancing either. The girl had real talent and natural rhythm.

Elise was in full Shadow songstress mode now. She revealed a flute that had been behind her back. She stared at Nadia, whos body was shaking.

 Sweat was beginning to form on the redhead’s forehead, as she sat in Elise’s fun chair. The goth smiled mischievously and said,  “I think you have received enough punishment. It’s naptime now.”
With that, the punk girl slowly put the flute to her lips, as though she was preparing to molest the musical instrument.

A sweet melody then began to come forth. It was soothing. At first, Nadia could only focus on her predicament and the pain. But soon she was drawn in by the soft, sweet sound. Her body began to feel like it was floating. Her green eyes grew heavy, as well as her head.

She quickly began to doze in and out. Her head lazily rolling on her shoulders. Her heavy eyelids kept fluttering but managed to remain open, while the melody continued to play.

The drowsy young woman fought and fought her sleep. Elise stepped closer, still playing the flute, dancing seductively. Her fingers moved on it, slowly, gently, almost like she was fondling it.

Elise eventually stopped playing. She grabbed Nadia’s face and said, “I think you need a little help taking a nap. You are being stubborn.” 

With that, she planted a gentle kiss on the fire-haired girl. 

Her sweet Nadia then went completely out, with a cute mumble and sigh. It was unclear whether it was the kiss itself that made her do so or just her overall drowsiness. 


Nadia was drifting in a dream. She felt the sensation of being embraced. Water was peppering her skin and flowed down over it. It felt warm and she heard distant humming. She groaned, then heard a gentle shhh. 

Soon after, she knew nothing, unconscious once again.

Sometime after, Nadia drifted back to semi-consciousness. She tried to say words but only mumbles and slurs came out, though to her, they sounded like words. Her body felt weak and heavy when she tried to move.


Elise loved listening to her doll moan and mumble, as she washed her down in the shower.  The way the young woman’s body was limp and heavy, as it is held.

The gothic psycho watches Nadia’s green eyes roll and her head nod and loll around, as she finishes up her dolls shower. The water runs down both of them, hot and soothing. 

It eventually puts the drowsy Nadia into a deep sleep.

Having re-dressed Nadia, Elise has put the redhead into a rental car and drives the long drive back to new Chicago. She repeatedly uses several methods to knock out the slumbering girl when she would start to come to.

Finally arriving, Nadia pulls up alongside the front of the Spirals Nightclub, opens the passenger door and pushes the comatose girl out of the car. Just before doing this, she said. “I hope you learn from this experience my dear. Perhaps next time we meet, you will play nice with me and we can have fun.”

Nadia’s limp form fell out and rolled onto the walkway/sidewalk. Never stirring at all. Patrons and walker-bys look on shocked and stunned.

This is a fan-made story written by DL77 and posted with permission! 

The story involves Nadia biting off a bit more then she can chew... which sounds exactly like Nadia!

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