Wednesday, July 24, 2024

Dragged Along - Spirals - Part 2

Dragged Along - Spirals - Part 2


Key: MD, MF, MC

Description: Siobhan and her friends try to settle into the club, but wouldn’t you know it the most adventurous of the bunch finds herself landing in a bit of trouble…

Cover Image made by Heroine Art Ai

        Siobhan slouched in her chair as the music in the nightclub thumped around her. Having just seen her friend, Nicole, end up hypnotized and taken backstage had left her feeling more than a little confused. On one hand she was concerned for her friend’s well being. Nicole was, after all, prone to charging headfirst into things and not thinking any of them through, and that could get her into some trouble, especially in a place like this. But on the other hand, watching her friend slowly succumb to the hypnotist's words and actions…watching her normally playful and energetic face slowly become more relaxed while her eyes glazed over like that, it was…it was exciting. 
        Of course, she had absolutely no intention of letting anyone know this was the case. As the others laughed and danced next to the table, Siobahn looked around, trying not to let the confusing emotions show on her face.  
        “Lighten up!” The sound of her co-worker's voice snapped her out of her thoughts. 
        “What?” Siobhan looked over to Amanda, who was leaning over the table with a smile. 
        “I said,” She began while rolling her eyes. “Lighten…up! It’s a nightclub, have some fun!” 
        Siobhan just stared at Amanda. “You’re not the slightest bit worried about Nicole, are you?”
        Amanda chuckled and shook her head with a playful smile. “Nicole is fine! She’s just backstage with the hypnotist. It's all part of the act, part of the mystique of this place. Like I already said, you need to lighten up!” she finished, smiling at her friend. 
        Siobhan sighed and nodded. “Maybe you're right.” 
        “Of course I am!” Amanda said with a playful giggle. “I'm always right!” 
        Their other remaining friend, Megan, came over to the table and yelled over the loud music. “The waitress is coming, you need a drink!” 
        Siobhan rolled her eyes but cut that short as the waitress arrived, she didn’t want to be rude after all. But before she could relax she noticed that there was something…different about the waitress. She was dressed in what she assumed was appropriate attire for the club, wearing a form fitting bodysuit that seemed to have a holographic pattern hidden within it. The pattern gave off an almost rainbow appearance, that made your eyes just…follow the pattern around her body until you got to the young woman’s breasts. At which point it finally became clear that all of the various holographic lines were joining together to form a spiral swirling down to the center where the woman’s nipples would be. And although they weren’t exactly on display, they were clearly pressed against her attire. She also had a serving tray and a notepad which, if nothing else, was a helpful hint that she was a staff member and not just a random clubgoer with very confident tastes in clothing. 
        But what really stood out to Siobhan was that the woman’s eyes seemed to be extremely glassy, and her face was more or less expressionless. She was staring off into space, almost as if she were daydreaming or…hypnotized. “She’s hypnotized!” Siobhan thought to herself as she looked around the club and, for the first time, really began to notice the staff. Everyone was dressed in a form fitting bodysuit of some kind with the same holographic pattern that would stand out in the light but was otherwise invisible. And every single one had the same blank expression, the same vacant stare. Every single one…was hypnotized. “Holy shit!” she whispered out loud, although not nearly loud enough to be heard over the music.
        “I’ll have a rum and coke please!” The sound of Megan ordering a drink brought her attention back to the table. “Siobhan, do you want anything?” she asked, glancing over.
        For a brief moment she thought that she wanted nothing more than a good, stiff drink. But then she thought about Nicole and the staff, all hypnotized, and an uneasy feeling crept through her mind. “No thanks, my stomach’s a bit upset. I’d rather just wait a bit!” She said with a fake smile. 
        Megan rolled her eyes. “What do you recommend? Do you have any house specials?” Amanda chimed in. 
        The waitress replied instantly, the vacant expression never leaving her face. “Yes miss, the house special, one UnZipHer coming right up.” The dazed waitress spun on her heels and headed in the direction of the bar before anyone could respond.
        “Did she say Unzipher?” Megan asked, confused. 
        “No, she said unzipper, you know, like unbutton. It’s probably just a play on loosening up. Maybe we should order one for her?” She said, giving Siobhan another sideways glance. 
        Siobhan sighed and rolled her eyes as she started to look around the club again, paying more attention to the people, to the staff, to the patrons. Everything here suddenly seemed more dangerous than she had assumed. But what really scared her was how much that excited her at the same time. 
        Siobhan was so preoccupied that she didn’t notice the waitress return, setting down the rum and coke on the table for Megan, the UnZipHer on the table for Amanda, and another one near Siobhan. “Compliments of the house.” the waitress said, staring ahead at them. 
        Siobhan just stared down at her drink, genuinely nervous for the first time. “Ummm….”  
        Her friends simply laughed at her. “You don’t have to drink it.” Megan said, giving her a reassuring smile. 
        “Yeah, I’ll have yours too!” Amanda said as she picked up her drink and took a long. slow sip. “Oh wow!” she said looking at the drink. “It’s actually really good!” She took another, longer, sip this time. “It has a bit of a warm feeling to it, too.” 
        Megan and Siobhan watched as Amanda downed more of the mixed drink, more quickly each time. They also couldn’t help but notice that the more she drank, the more she began to sway her hips in time with the music. Except there was a strange sensuality to the way she was moving, one that hadn’t been before she had gotten hold of the drink. She slammed the glass down on the table and started to fan herself. “Wow! That thing has a kick!” Without even realizing it she started to run her hands up and down along her neck as her whole body swayed with the music, becoming more sensual with each passing beat. Soon her hands were sliding along her legs and up along her stomach, propping up her breasts before raising her hands above her head and spinning slowly, almost wildly. 
        “Mand?” Megan asked, sounding a bit confused. “You ok?” 
        “Completely…” Amanda replied. But Siobhan couldn’t help but notice that her eyes had the same glazed expression of the waitress that had delivered their drinks. “This is…wonderful…” she said, sounding dazed and far away. 
        Megan and Siobhan continued to watch as their friend, who was by no means shy to begin with, started to dance in a much more alluring fashion than they had ever seen before. With every sway, every spin, and every thump of the music her eyes became more glassy, more unfocused. The wide, excited smile on her face morphed into a more subtle, playful grin, until finally it was blank and expressionless. She stared into space as her hands continued to slide along her body while her hips swayed in time to the beat. 
        Without acknowledging her friends, Amanda began to dance her way down the stairs and towards the dance floor. Every step made it seem as if she was gliding instead of walking. Once she made her way to the floor she joined the mass of people who were simply dancing their cares away, swinging and swaying to the music. She joined a group of two young men and a woman and started to grind her body along theirs. The woman in the group looked equally as dazed as Amanda and both men appeared to be very pleased with their states. 
        Siobhan felt the same excitement that had bubbled up inside of her when Nicole had been hypnotized as she watched Amanda’s inhibitions disappear on the dance floor. Her body grinded along the body of the man she just met as his hands roamed her form, in places that probably shouldn’t be explored on a person you just met, no less on a public dance floor. But no one else seemed to mind, no one else seemed to care. And that was what scared her the most. 
        Without realizing it she brought the glass up to her lips and realized what she was holding just as she was about to drink. She looked down at the drink with a mix of fear and excitement, and slowly put the glass down and pushed it away. “No, that isn’t me.” she said to herself. But she didn’t quite believe herself either. 
        Siobahn looked around the club at all the people moving and dancing, noticing how they all seemed so carefree, how they all seemed so…hypnotized. She couldn’t help but shiver at the thought. Amanda and Nicole had both ended up under the effects of one kind of hypnotic control or another. She looked out at Amanda, rubbing her body up against the stranger she didn’t even know. Siobahn couldn’t even really say she had just met him, because they really hadn’t “met” at all. More just…hooked up. A hypnotic hook up. 
        The idea echoed through her mind. A hypnotic hook up. The idea of simply being hypnotized in one way or another to just loosen up, and let go, to just give in to the experiences that would come and not worry about the consequences. She couldn’t help but stare out at the club and wonder just how many of the people there, men and women, were in some way, shape or form hypnotized. How many were under the control of another person, willingly or unwillingly, unknowingly doing things they had never imagined, or only thought about in the back of their mind, alone in the dark hours of the night.
        But what really scared her was that she wasn’t entirely sure that she was scared. The way her body shivered wasn’t from terror, it was from excitement, arousal. From the idea that, in this place, all of those dark, devious little fantasies might simply come true. If only for a little while. 
        Then as if on instinct, as if a warning bell had gone off in her head, she shook herself out of the day dream and tried to hide a blush for fear that someone might have heard her own thoughts. 
        “You ok over there?” Megan asked with a smile and a chuckle. “You look like you just saw a ghost.” 
        “I’m alright, just…thinking.” Siobhan admitted and then instantly regretted it. 
        Megan perked up with a smile. “Oh? Thinking of having that drink,” she said pointing to the other UnZipHer on the table. “or thinking of seeing if that stage hypnotist is done with Nicole and available for another…demonstration?”
        Siobhan blushed but managed to keep her composure. “I don't think that would work for me.” she said, a hint of disappointment in her voice.        
        “Why's that?”  Megan asked with a smile. 
        “Well, you know…” she said, thinking about it for a while. “I have way too analytical of a mind to fall for a simple stage hypnosis trick, and I’m not keen on whatever the hell just happened to Amanda, being done to me. So I just think that I would be…unhypnotizable.” she said,  both reassuring and disappointing herself at once. On one hand she was safe, on the other hand…she would never be able to experience what her two friends were feeling. But that was probably for the best, she concluded.
        Megan laughed and shook her head “Thinking that brain of yours would get in the way, hmm?” she asked, downing the last of her Rum and Coke. 
        “Yeah.” Siobhan said, realizing that she was simply too smart to be hypnotized and feeling a little more proud of herself. “Yeah.” she said with a smile. “Unlike those two, I’m just too smart to be hypnotized.”
        Megan just shook her head and laughed. “Holy shit girl, lighten up a bit!” Siobahn simply folded her arms and huffed. “We’ll see how smart you are…” she said under breath as she looked out at the club, wondering who or what might show up to put her friend into the trance that she so desperately needed. 

To be continued… 

Featuring: Siobhan

There is an alternate version of this chapter in which Amanda is hypnotized by a pheromone spray, instead of a mixed drink. if you are interesting you can find that story here: Dragged Along - Spirals - Part 2 Alt

Thanks to Sleepygirl for doing the editing for me. If you would like to see her editing reactions to this story, and how it affected her while she was editing you can find that here: Dragged Along - Editing Banter.

Thank you so much for taking the time to read this! If you have any comments I would love to hear them! You can follow more adventures at Spirals Nightclub! You can also find bonus content on my Patreon page!

Thursday, July 11, 2024

Dragged Along - Spirals - Part 1

Dragged Along - Spirals - Part 1

Key: FD, MC,

Description: Siobahn gets dragged along to the Spirals Nightclub by her co-workers, but as the night goes on she discovers a little something about her own interests. 

        Siobahn sat at her desk, typing as the sound of frustrated keystrokes filled the room. She enjoyed her job, but she enjoyed it more when other people on a project actually did what they were supposed to instead of creating problems to make themselves seem important. It was frustrating and left her stuck to fix the mistakes that would inevitably happen. 

        “You coming tonight?” A perky voice said, breaking her trancelike focus.

        “Huh?” Siobahn said, looking up to see her co-worker Nicole leaning over the top of her cubicle. 

        “You know!” Nicole said with a smile. “We’re going to that new club by the lakeshore tonight, Spinners!”

        “Spirals.” Amanda chimed in as she appeared next to Nicole. “It’s called Spirals, supposed to have a hypnosis theme to it.” Amanda winked.

Wednesday, July 3, 2024

Mythical Creatures Forest Preserve - SHR

 Mythical Creatures Forest Preserve - SHR


 Key: MC, MD, MF, Sleep, Knockout, Freeze

Description: Sleepygirl and her friends visit a Mythical Creatures Forest Preserve, one where the safety features are a bit lax and some of the creatures are eager to enjoy them. 

[NOTE: These are actual emails written by SleepyGirl, who was hypnotized to have a fantasy/dream while she slept, and then send me a description of it. You can find out more details HERE! ]

Cover Image made by HeroineArtAi

To: Sleepyhypno <Sleepyhypno@Gmail.com>
From: Sleepygirl <REDACTED>
Date: 5-1-20XX
Subject: Mythical Creatures can be fun!

     I had a dream last night that you might find interesting. Knockouts, cavemen, other assorted creatures with the ability to incapacitate unsuspecting females. It was right up both our alleys, in other words. So I'll skip the rambling and get to the good stuff, on that note 

     To start, I was sitting on a bench on the outskirts of a pretty good sized forest preserve. Next to me were a few buildings, but behind them it was just a lot of forest. I was sitting with a (semi) big group of friends - Laura, Eve, Jessy, Klaire, Serena, Siobhan, Trisha, Cheyenne, Jill, and Erica. The group of us got up and went into one of the buildings which, as it turned out, was the only way to get back to the forest. The first...unique thing I noticed was that the building seemed to be part of a preserve for mythical creatures. It was much bigger than it looked on the inside and there were several signs pointing to areas for prehistoric, medieval, Greek, and classical creatures. Each sign had information about the rooms and how to get a sample viewing of the creatures. We all moved toward the Greek exhibit first, where a guide greeted us, and behind him were a number of enclosures for different creatures from Greek mythology. He gave us a little information about the area, warning us to stay behind the red line if we didn't want to find ourselves falling victim to their powers. As we moved over to the enclosure for the gorgons, we caught sight of a woman (well...half woman, bottom half snake) sitting in it, her head full of snakes, not paying any particular attention to us. The guide started explaining that the glass between her and us kept us from turning to stone until we crossed the red line. Serena was the first to step over, turning back at us and making some sort of comment about how none of that could be true. As she joked about the exhibit, the woman started to slide over to the glass in front of where Serena was standing. Serena, of course, didn't notice and finally the gorgon stopped and turned to look at us...for a moment she didn't make eye contact, but then suddenly her head snapped up and she made a jerking motion toward Serena as all of the snakes on her head rose up, their eyes glowing bright yellow as Serena's body made the same jerking motion while she stood completely still. The gorgon stood there like that for a moment before the snakes on her head relaxed and settled back on top of her head while her eyes returned to normal as well. She slithered along the glass, not really looking at the rest of us and slowly made her way back to where she'd been sitting. The guide, meanwhile, stepped over to Serena and snapped his fingers in front of her face, explaining that she was basically petrified and wouldn't remember anything that had happened here. He demonstrated how much of a statue she was by trying to move her arm with no success, and then, of course, Siobhan slowly crossed the line next and tried to move her as well, also with no luck. As she continued trying to move Serena she caught sight of the gorgon slithering back over to her and quickly made her way back across the line. As Serena was gently dragged back over the line by the guide, he told the rest of us that it wouldn't take long for her to wake up once she was back across. While the rest of us moved over to the enclosure with the harpies, I glanced back at Serena and noticed the guard standing her back up and groping her breast in the process. 

     Once I caught up with the others at the harpy enclosure I saw there was the same red line in front of them, however this one also had a small couch on the side where we were standing. The guide gave us some information on the harpies, how they hunt for mates and that their shrieks essentially cause their victims to faint - hence the couch. Laura was watching the harpies, who essentially looked like handsome men with some bat-like features to them. All of the men in the enclosure were completely naked and this obviously had Laura's attention as she moved forward across the red line, partially curious and partially aroused as she continued to look them over. She saw one in particular and inched her way closer to him and the glass that separated them, he looked at her curiously for a moment as he made his way in front of her and smiled for a moment before opening his mouth to let out a loud screech. Laura's body jerked at the sound, probably from the sudden shock of it, but then she simply stood there and swayed on her feet before she started to fall back...landing on the couch gently, her body sagging into it as she went completely limp. Despite the man saying she would be awake in a few minutes, Jessy went over to check on her, crossing the line as she did so. She happened to glance up at the harpy still in front of the glass, too, and before she could step back across the line he let out another shriek. Her body jerked as she wobbled on her feet, falling back onto the couch, instantly unconscious as she slumped against her friend. 

     Having seen that, the rest of us decided to move on to another area. As we walked away I saw the guide leaning over Laura and Jessy, feeling them up while they were still unconscious. Meanwhile, we'd moved on to the classical creatures and found ourselves standing near an enclosure marked for vampires. It was darker than the others and was even decorated like an old castle, at the back of the enclosure there was a fireplace where a man stood in front of it, staring down into it but not looking at us. After a few more minutes of him not acknowledging us, Jill finally stepped over the red line, not really thinking about what the consequences would be obviously. As she did the man tilted his head towards us, suddenly he wasn't in front of the fire anymore at all and stood directly in front of Jill (between the glass obviously), staring deeply into her eyes. She jerked ever so slightly, but after a few moments her arms hung limp at her sides as she stared back at the man, mouth hanging open a bit and completely enthralled by him. The guide, who was still standing next to us, held up a tablet for the rest of us to see that it showed the vampire in front of us, and where the energy in him was coming from - in this case his eyes...as it passed through the glass and into Jills eyes, it also enveloped the area around her body, making sure she was ensnared by it in every way possible. After a few more moments the vampire disappeared from where he'd been standing in front of Jill and she walked over to the guide, almost a bit robotically, once she was next to him she told him she wanted to enter the enclosure, and that she knew she would be safe there. The guide seemed amused by that as he looked over at her and gently patted her on the head as he told her maybe next time...then he pulled out a small device that looked just like a taser and used it on her quickly. Her body shook as the energy that was enthralling seemed to disappear, when it had she slumped to the floor completely unconscious. As I watched him use the device on Jill, I moved across the red line slowly, waiting to see what would happen. No one else noticed me move over to the glass, but as I looked up there was the vampire again, standing silently in front of me and focusing deeply on my eyes as his glowed softly. I felt my body jerk as everything around me faded away and the only thing I could see were his eyes. Soon my arms were hanging limp at my sides and I could feel the energy from his eyes moving around me as well...even though every thought had pretty much vanished from my mind at that point, i heard him inside of my mind like he was whispering in my ear and seducing me...telling me I was safe and at peace, and that nothing would feel better than being in the enclosure with him. And as if that wasn't enough I felt hands over my body, massaging and kissing me, caressing me...and as quickly as he came, he was gone, and I felt the desire to be with him growing even stronger. I moved over to the guide and asked him to go into the enclosure, instead of answering he just smiled and reached for his taser again. The instant it hit me my body went limp and heavy as I fell to the floor, all of the vampire's energy leaving me immediately. 

     While I was out I felt hands running along my body and sliding up my shirt as I was kissed. When I started to wake up a few minutes later I looked around, seeing that I was on the ground next to Jill who was also groggy and looking around as she woke up, neither one of us having any idea of how we ended up on the floor. On my other side was Cheyenne, who was also starting to stir, obviously having been out for some reason but having no idea why either. Looking around, I saw the rest of the group was already ahead of us at the next exhibit. We caught up with them after we'd gotten up and made our way back to the lobby of the building. Laura saw us and jokingly commented that she'd heard we'd gotten a 'whammy' from the vampire in the last exhibit...of course, we didn't remember any of it happening so we just let it go. We decided to head over to the medieval exhibit next and as we entered we saw sections for elves, wizards, and dragons. As soon as she saw the exhibit for wood elves Laura dragged the rest of us over to it. The area was lined with trees and bushes and looked like a section of the forest outside had been brought in just for this particular area. Laura seemed to be peering inside, having seen something, and crossed the red line in the process. She started pointing something out to the rest of us and as she started to turn around her hand went to the side of her neck. She mumbled an “ouch” as she pulled out a small thorn and as she looked at it, she let out a soft sigh and sank to the floor gently, unconscious once again. Near the back of the exhibit a man stood holding a small blow gun that had obviously tranquilized Laura. As we all moved to get a better look at him, Trisha moved forward to help Laura. She wasn't able to fully grab her to drag her away, so Jessy moved forward to help her, but as she did an arrow flew between the two of them and exploded with energy that trickled and flowed over both of their bodies. The two of them dropped Laura, who they'd finally managed to get up off of the floor, and dropped to their knees as they slumped sideways, one on top of the other. 

     Having seen that, the rest of us left them unconscious in the exhibit, figuring they would wake up sooner or later, and moved to the prehistoric area. This one was different in that it was one giant exhibit with some cavemen and women milling around, and there was no glass to separate them from us. The few females that were in there were dressed the same as the cavemen (which is to say, barely) and were already unconscious. As I looked around I saw the same red line that was in the other exhibits, as well as a yellow one a little further back that the guide was standing behind. The rest of us, however, were far past it and were in between the yellow and red lines. As the guide encouraged us to get a better feel for the experience, Eve, Erica and Klaire all moved over the red line. As they did, three of the cavemen turned to look over them and then seemed to start arguing with each other. The three of them didn't move back but kept watching them curiously as the guide explained that they needed to seem less intimidating for them to come over. Eve kneeled down, while Klaire leaned over...Erica didn't seem to move much at all, but a moment later the three cavemen turned to look at them, each one focused on one of the girls very deeply, their clubs extended out. The three girls watched them, but looked more nervous, like they wanted to move away but couldn't...as we watched, the guide explained each of the ranks of the cavemen who were watching the girls intently. Explaining that by looking at their 'prey' they'd caused the girls to basically freeze in place...that the one focused on Erica was the alpha of the group. He moved up to her slowly, still staring into her eyes, and as he did he brought his club up quickly and it came down on the top of her head. She gasped as her head dropped to her chest instantly, the rest of her body going limp as she fell backwards. Next he pointed out the one focused on Eve, who moved over to her but brought his club down a little softer. She wobbled on her feet and fell to the side, half landing on top of Erica. The last one was still staring at Klaire and moved in on her slowly, from her eyes it was clear that she was still nervous and wanting to move away. As he stopped in front of her he raised the club quietly and brought it down on her head, firm, but still much more gently than the others. Her head bobbed a bit as she stared ahead at him, but after a few moments her body started to fall forward and she landed with a thud on the floor. 

     The guide looked over at us as the lights in the room flickered and the cavemen retreated a little. We shook our heads and as we continued to watch we saw one of the females, that was now awake, arguing with the alpha. Cheyenne, meanwhile, was checking on the other three and crossing the line in the process. One of the cavemen noticed immediately and started making his way over to her. She made the mistake of looking up at him and as she did her body froze instantly, as he raised his club to hit her the female came over and pushed him aside, breaking his gaze on Cheyenne and allowing her to move again. She shook herself and moved back a bit, laughing as the two fought and the caveman finally slinked away. Once he had, the female turned her attention toward Cheyenne and sized her up as she closed in on her. As Cheyenne backed away a bit, the female seemed to back off and even motioned for her to come closer...as she did, a bit reluctantly, the female smiled and then threw a punch at Cheyenne. Her body swayed as the punch connected, her face going slack and her eyes even rolling into her head as she collapsed to the ground in a heap...the female made a few grunting noises, seeming pleased with the outcome, and turned around...only to walk face first into the club of the alpha caveman. The hit knocked her unconscious and landed her on the floor in front of the pile of girls already knocked out. The guide tried explaining to us that even if the female tried taking over the male would eventually fight back, but as he was talking we noticed a whirring sound coming from somewhere in the room....Siobhan and Serena were the first to notice it and when they looked around saw one of the other cavemen slinging a rock and looking over at us. I didn't think he was close enough to be able to affect any of us but Serena seemed pretty immobile as she looked back at him...Siobhan and I stepped out of the way as he kept spinning it, finally letting go a moment later and hitting Serena in the head, making her jerk back and fall to the ground instantly. Jill noticed what was happening at that point and turned around to see Serena get hit, meanwhile Siobhan and I were still looking over Serena. We heard another whirring sound and as I looked over to Siobhan I saw that she was falling to her knees and then to the ground, having been hit by another rock in the back of her head. Jill finally asked the guide how they were able to do that and as he was looking down at his tablet trying to figure out the answer, another rock flew past him and into the side of Jill's head...she swayed on her feet for a moment and then fell sideways to the floor, landing in a pile with the others. This didn't seem to phase the guide much and he kept messing around on the tablet...while he did I walked over to the pile of my friends and started looking them over. As I moved between them and the yellow line one of the cavemen looked straight at me...my body froze in place right away as I felt my heartbeat quicken. While I looked at him, I felt a hand on my back gently moving me closer...before I had the chance to wonder who it was, I heard the voice of the guide in my ear telling me that it was my turn for a nap as his hand moved up my back and around to caress my breast. Before I knew it the caveman was in front of me, still staring into my eyes and raising his club over my head and bringing it down onto mine swiftly. My body jerked as my eyes rolled into my head, I wobbled on my feet for a split second before slumping to the floor in a heap. 

     As I laid there with everyone else on the floor, I felt a hand grab my hair and start to drag me away somewhere....at some point I felt my head drop back to the floor as the hands started to move their way up my body and pull off my clothes, little by little. My body was lifted up as my shirt, then bra, were pulled off and I fell back to the floor with a thud and the pair of hands started massaging my breasts and made their way down my body. The man kept massaging and feeling me up as he started kissing me deeply, moving his hands down and spreading my legs as he moved between them and slid into me. I only finally started to wake up when I started to orgasm minutes later...as I tried to get my bearings, I saw everyone else scattered around the room...Serena, Siobhan and Erica were still in a pile, their clothes still on and looking as though they were still unconscious...Eve, Cheyenne and Jill were all in another pile, completely naked...Laura, Jessy, Trisha, and Klaire were all naked and unconscious as well, but with their own men and in the middle of being used. When I looked up to see the man above me, still rocking deeply into me,  he just smiled and leaned down to kiss me gently...breaking it after a moment and placing a finger on my forehead, pushing it back against the floor and knocking me out yet again. The next time I woke up I was in another room, surrounded by everyone else again - although this time everyone was naked. As we started to get our bearings back and sit up, the lights in the room began to flicker and strobe as a low hum followed them...our minds weren't nearly coherent enough to resist them yet, and it didn't take long before the strobing, the hum, and a voice that was coming out of some speakers in the room (what it was saying i don't remember, ironically enough) started to drop us all into trances...i felt myself standing up and getting dressed, next, as the voice told us we would forget everything that had happened, and to only remember being knocked out by one of the exhibits. The lights strobed and flashed one last time as it told us to sleep, and everyone's eyes - including my own, slammed shut as we slumped back to the floor helplessly.

     And fade to black? That was when I woke up, although it seemed like a fitting place for it to end. So that was interesting...and definitely pushed some buttons...although I'm not sure which buttons were pushed more. Between being knocked out multiple times by the cavemen, and frozen too for that matter, and controlled by the vampire...although i don't know, watching the others basically become living statues because of the gorgons kind of pushed some buttons too. I don't know...don't mind me, just musing out loud. In any case, that was an interesting one. I'm kind of curious if the forest part had anything in it or if it was just...you know...the actual forest part of the forest preserve. Which would probably make more sense. Anyways, now it's time for me to forget.

Thanks to Sleepygirl for doing the editing for me. [and in the case of this story, writing it]

Thank you so much for taking the time to read this! If you have any comments I would love to hear them! You can follow more adventures at Spirals Nightclub! You can also find bonus content on my Patreon page!

Featuring: Laura, Eve, Jessy, Klaire, Serena, Siobhan, Trisha, Cheyenne, Jill, Erica and Sleepygirl


Wednesday, June 26, 2024

Trance Night Out

Trance Night Out - SHR

Key: MD, FD, MF, MC, Freeze, Sleep, Chloroform

Description: During a night out at a club, Sleepygirl and her friends find themselves being ensnared by a stage show. 

[NOTE: These are actual emails written by SleepyGirl, who was hypnotized to have a fantasy/dream while she slept, and then send me a description of it. You can find out more details HERE! ]

Cover Image made by HeroineArtAi

To: Sleepyhypno <Sleepyhypno@Gmail.com>
From: Sleepygirl <REDACTED>
Date: 3-13-20XX
Subject: Trance Night Out!

     I had to email you about this while it was still in my head, no random musings this time but I did have an interesting dream last night that I thought you'd like to hear about. Strangely vivid, too, almost a little more so than the others, at least it seems like it in hindsight. Anyway, I know you'll appreciate it. 

     I started out in a dim lit environment, it almost looked like a dance club until I saw that there was a stage very clearly meant for entertainment at the front of it. I was in the back of the room just kind of observing the crowd, looking around, when I noticed three men walking along the stage at the front of the room. They looked like they were talking with one another and then they split up to move through the crowd. I started watching one of them as he moved through the people and stopped at a girl that I realized shortly after was Julie. I couldn't hear anything but I saw him start to talk to her, and as he was doing that he started to slowly wave his hand back and forth. She seemed kind of distracted by it but kept trying to keep her focus on him. It seemed like every time she would glance back over to him, though, that she would get distracted by his hand again. After a few moments it looked like he wasn't even saying anything anymore, but she was still following his hand and her face seemed to have gone slack. Her eyes could barely stay open, too. Didn't exactly take a rocket scientist to see that he was trying to hypnotize her. He didn't really do much after that, but he did take her hand and start to lead her back to the room alongside the stage where he and the others had come out of a little while earlier. I got up and started to follow the two of them to see what was going on, but as I was moving through the crowd I saw another man clearly in the middle of hypnotizing another girl who turned out to be Laura. It looked like he was holding something in his hand and, once I was able to get close enough, I saw that he was holding a cell phone with a spiral on it (shades of the app you have on your tablet, actually). She was, at that point, very focused on it. Her eyes were starting to glaze over while her body was slowly slumping forward. The man took her hand and started massaging it while she was watching and her eyes began to flutter, then he pulled her arm and she fell into him like a ragdoll. He gently straightened her and began to slowly lead her to the back, just like the other man had done with Julie. 

     I started following them and, again, as I got about halfway through the crowd I saw the third man from the original group talking to Krissy, Eve and Jesse. I could see he was hiding a pocket watch in one hand but he wasn't doing anything yet. They were talking and laughing, he seemed very...animated. Kind of reminded me of you, actually. I moved a little closer to see what he was planning on doing, and he started to move like he was going to do a magic trick or something, but instead of doing a trick he let the pocket watch drop down and started to let it sway back and forth slowly. All three of them were watching it with curious looks on their faces, but Eve seemed to be dropping faster than the other two. Krissy and Jesse weren't even showing signs of starting to slip yet and she was already limp and dazed as her head tilted to one side. Her eyes were barely open and they seemed to be drooping more with each swing until finally they just slipped shut. At that point I noticed Krissy was resisting a little and was struggling to keep her eyes open. Next to her Jesse was starting to fall and was pretty much almost out, so the guy started using that to try and bring Krissy down. Once he started doing that she seemed to start falling a little faster, and within a few minutes both of them were out. In hindsight, this club kind of reminds me of Spirals. Anyway, not long after he had the three of them under he snapped his fingers and they woke up laughing and followed him to the back, too. So naturally, me being me, I followed. Again.

     But, again, before I could get anywhere I saw Julie come out of the room she was being led to earlier. Except now she was dressed in a skintight waitress uniform, right as she came out she saw me and came over and asked if I wanted to order a drink. So, clearly, she had no idea who I was. When I said no thanks she went back out into the club and started walking around like she was...well, serving drinks and being a waitress. Go figure. I decided to let her "work" for now and go back to follow the other three, but before I could do anything (can we say "curses, foiled again" yet?) two other girls snuck in ahead of me. Looking through the door, I saw that Krissy, Jesse and Eve were asleep with headphones on. Krissy was naked and had clothes sitting next to her that looked like a very short mini skirt and halter top, and one of the men was dressing Eve in a skintight leather dress (doesn't that dress actually exist? or am I remembering things wrong? it would at least explain something from this dream if it did), and Jesse was being dressed in a skimpy red dress. 

[Hypnotist’s Note: The dress in question does in fact exist and is a dress my wife, whom Eve is based on, wore some years ago.]

     At that point I noticed the two girls that had snuck in ahead of me were Nicole and Klaire. They didn't notice that there were two men walking up behind them, one of whom had a rag in his hand. And before they had time to notice he snuck up behind Klaire and slipped the rag over her mouth. She was taken by surprise, of course, and didn't struggle much so it was a quick chloroform. Nicole was oblivious to it all, which I found highly amusing, and the other man started moving up behind her and held up the spray can he was holding, giving it a quick tap so a light puff came out of it. She blinked a few times but otherwise didn’t seem affected, so he tapped it again. This time she yawned and wobbled on her feet a bit but still kept watching the others. Finally the guy just tapped her on the shoulder and sprayed a puff of it straight in her face...and I need to pause for a moment until my giggling stops because the image of this is frickin’ hilarious (you just have to know her...being this oblivious is not out of character). 

     Anyway! She and Klaire were dragged into the room with the others, and after a moment Krissy, Eve and Jesse came out in the clothes I’d seen piled next to them earlier. They moved out into the club with the others and I kept a close eye on the way they were acting after seeing Julie, who was still waitressing. Laura was acting like...well, kind of a hillbilly, Krissy was being very flirty verging on slutty, Eve was practically pole dancing against a guy (not that he seemed to be complaining) and I think Jesse was in an active competition against no one to see how many guys she could get to buy drinks for her. In the meantime, the three men had come out of the room and were starting to make their way through the crowd again. While I was trying to decide what to do next, one of them came up to me and started making small talk. He offered me his hand to shake and, not really thinking, I took it. When I did he took my hand and started kind of twirling it in front of me slowly, looking right into my eyes and talking to me softly. I knew he was trying to hypnotize me, and even though I was trying to fight it it was still working on me, he clearly noticed this because in addition to twirling my hand he started tugging on my arm when he was saying certain words (I believe that's anchoring or something like that...see, I pay attention). In the middle of all this he made some comment about how I'd enjoy being part of the entertainment tonight, this confused me enough for my guard to drop the rest of the way and when he saw this he tugged on my arm and sent me to sleep. 

     Now, as I'm writing this, I can't help but wonder how well this would all actually work. Ok no not ALL of this, just the inductions. I've already told you I'm on the fence about how well a pocket watch would put me under (not because I have doubts about the induction itself, more about my attention span). Now I'm curious about how well the hand/arm thing would work, too. Even just the arm waving thing (that happened to Julie), although that I'm a little skeptical about...but I guess I could see it working, in a way, I don't know. Anyway, sorry, that was a random musing but I'm in a mood, apparently.

[Hypnotists Note: This email was written many many years ago, in that time Sleepygirl has been hypnotized by every induction listed above at one point or another.]

     After he hypnotized me the next thing I remembered was walking out into the club, just like the others, except I felt different. Much more confident and sexy, I'd even go so far as to say powerful. I felt like I could have any guy in the club, no questions asked, that I could just walk up to them and take them. Strange. As was the case with the others, my clothes were different, too. I was wearing a dark blue halter dress that was very form fitting and somewhat low cut,that  stopped around the knee, and black knee high boots to go with it. Kind of added to the mood, I guess. Case in point, I was walking around the club and just stopped at some random guy, sat on his lap, and started kissing him. While I was doing that they started dimming the lights for the show, I stayed on his lap but turned around to watch a bit and kind of started grinding on him in the process. The hypnotist came out, did his usual spiel, and then said that they weren't asking for volunteers but were instead going to magnetically pull the most attractive and sexy women in the room up to the stage, and how those women were going to feel their breasts pulling them toward the stage from a tingling in their nipples, etc. Not quite what I expected but nonetheless I started feeling a pull to go up on stage, and as I was looking around I saw several other women obviously feeling the same effects (should be noted that since I was under the same effects as the others I didn't recognize them, just like Julie didn't recognize me earlier). Once everyone was on stage he went down the line, one by one and put everyone to sleep by tugging on their arms, tilting their head to the side, and kissing them, just to name a few. He got to me and asked me to follow his finger while he kept one hand on my back and he kept raising it, until finally he tapped my forehead and told me to sleep. The next thing I knew I was waking up in a chair, as were the others, and music was starting to play. As it started we all got up and started dancing seductively while he moved in front of each girl and snapped his finger in front of their eyes, which froze them mid dance. Eventually he got to me and did the same thing, and after he froze me he tapped a finger to my forehead again, which apparently sent me back to sleep. After that I woke up in the chair again, except this time I didn't remember anything after talking to the man in the club and shaking his hand. So obviously I had no idea why I'd changed clothes or was up on stage. Laura was awake as well and seemed to be just as confused as I was, but then the hypnotist moved over to her, smiled, and tapped her behind the ear. When he did that her eyes and demeanor changed and she was back to being the other personality that I saw earlier, the farm girl. At that point he walked over to me and asked how I was enjoying the show, so of course I commented that I didn't really remember much of it. I don't really remember what he said to that but he moved his hand behind my ear and tapped just like he had with Laura, and I was back to feeling sexy and confident. But before I could do anything he tapped my head and sent me back to sleep.

     When I woke up again I was in a room with a few couches, along with everyone else, who were all still asleep. There were footsteps coming so I pretended to be asleep like the others, and a man walked in with Eve, who was still obviously under the suggestions given by the fact that she was all but grinding on him and kissing him. He told her to stay where she was and snapped his fingers in front of her eyes, she froze in place and he snuck in a kiss before he left the room. I got up and moved over to Laura and tapped her on the forehead to wake her up, except when I woke her up she still had the playful grin of the farm girl on her face so I quickly tapped her behind the ear to put her back to normal. She was, understandably, very confused about what was going on. I tried explaining it as best as I could but she stood up and was going to go look for the hypnotist. I didn't want her to blow my cover or get herself in more trouble so I tested out the trigger I saw the guy use on Eve and snapped my fingers in front of her face. Luckily that froze her in place. There were other men outside at that point, and I heard them talking about how they needed seven of the women in the room to be frozen and posed for some sort of display over the weekend, and another griping about how they needed another assistant as well, then mentioning they only had 20 minutes before they needed to pack up the girls. I decided that freezing and posing the other girls was my best bet, hoping that doing so might get me a job as this other assistant they needed since the girls would be pre-posed. So with that in mind I went around to the rest of them and, one by one, woke them up and froze them, putting them in various poses. 

     I started with Jesse, I tapped her forehead first to wake her up. She had a brief moment of confusion about where she was at but I snapped my fingers in front of her eyes before she could ask questions, leaving her frozen on the chair she was sitting in. Then I posed her so that she was sitting normally on the chair, but left one of her hands resting on the back of her head with her chest pushed forward a bit. I moved over to Krissy next and tapped her forehead, she woke up looking agitated like Laura and immediately got up out of the chair to head towards the door, but before she could get far I snapped my fingers in front of her eyes and she froze like the others. I moved her away from the door but otherwise left her posed as she was. Finally, I moved to Nicole and tapped her forehead, immediately after tapping her I snapped my fingers in front of her eyes, leaving her frozen with a dazed and confused look on her face. I posed her so that she was leaning forward in the chair, exposing the low cut of her dress. Next I moved to Julie and tapped her forehead, she woke up still in her altered demeanor of being a waitress and stood up, ready to get more drinks to serve. I snapped my fingers in front of her eyes, freezing her in place so that she was in somewhat of a waitress pose, whatever you might actually call that. And then I moved to Klaire, once she was awake and had gotten her bearings I snapped my fingers to freeze her too, standing her and arching her back ever so slightly so that her chest pushed forward, placing a hand on her hip to accentuate the look on her face. 

     Not long after I finished, one of the men opened the door and blinked a few times, looked around, looked at me, and asked what was going on. When he asked why I did this I explained it was in hopes of getting the job as the assistant that they needed. He stuck his head out of the door and shouted for the others to get down to the room, that they wouldn't believe what they were going to see. Before I could question him about anything he tapped me on the forehead aaaand everything went black from there. So I don't know if that was a good plan in hindsight or not.

     Anyway, that was my long ass dream, sorry that turned out to be like a small novel but you should be used to this by now. I'd say it was interesting, to put it mildly. Hopefully you enjoyed it, too (though I'm guessing you did). Like I said, this was a strangely vivid one, and was definitely longer than the ones I've been having lately which, although I don't really remember much of them now, seemed mostly centered on me finding new uses for various new years related props. Go figure. I don't remember much about those, honestly, it was earlier in the week. Though I do remember noise makers that sent sort of a hypnotic sound at the person they were aimed at or opened in the direction of. There were some other strange things, too, like confetti with hypnotic properties. Nothing overly imaginative, just, you know...shiny confetti that induced a trance as it came down. There was something chloroform or gas related too but I don't remember what it was, at this point. Oh well, on that note I have to leave to go to a movie, ironically with Krissy. Anyways now it's time for me to forget.

Thanks to Sleepygirl for doing the editing for me. [and in the case of this story, writing it]

Thank you so much for taking the time to read this! If you have any comments I would love to hear them! You can follow more adventures at Spirals Nightclub! You can also find bonus content on my Patreon page!

Featuring: Sleepygirl, Julie, Laura, Krissy, Eve, Jesse, Nicole, Klaire

Wednesday, June 12, 2024

Insurrection - N.C.U. - Part 4

Key: FD, MC, FF

Description: Rayne makes her final move to take over the sorority with a sexy little twist!

Cover Image made by HeroineArtAi

In the top floor lounge that was used as the meeting location for the S.L.E.E.P. sorority, Eve and Jackie walked in to find Cheyenne, Carly, Jessy, and Christine all sitting on the couches talking to one another. Each of them was trying to figure out why their meeting had been called early.  

“Do you know what’s going on?” Christine asked as the other two walked into the room. 

Everyone looked at Eve, given that she was technically one of the officers for the sorority. “No. I got a text from Laura asking me to show up early, but she didn’t say that everyone else would be here, too.” Eve responded with a shrug. 

“That’s the text we all got.” Cheyenne replied, holding up her phone.

“But so far you're the first person who is in charge that’s shown up.” Jessy said, using air quotes as she answered. 

Eve shrugged just as Laura walked into the room, bubbly as ever. “Hello everyone!” she said, smiling as she took a seat in the large armchair that was usually reserved for Trisha. “Thank you all for coming in early!” she beamed. 

“What’s up?” Carly asked, nervousness in her voice.

“And where are Trisha and Rayne?” Eve asked as she took her seat on the couch. 

“Trisha was delayed due to a project.” Laura said as her face suddenly seemed much more relaxed. “And Rayne is helping her so that she can be here on time.” Laura continued as her eyes glazed over. “Everyone is here who should be here now.” Laura’s tone dropped as her shoulders and face both relaxed even more. 

“Umm, Laura…” Jessy began, concern on her face, “You alright?” 

“Yes…” Laura responded, sounding even more relaxed as she stood up and took out her cell phone. “I called you here today because I wanted to show you something…special.” As she touched her phone, a flashing light started to reflect off of her face while she aimed the phone at the rest of the group. On the screen was a spiral, half of the arms were black as you might expect, but each of the other arms was a different color. It created a very captivating and overwhelming pattern, since one of the other colors would flash every few seconds. 

“Oww!” Shouted Jackie as she shielded her eyes. 

“That is a bit bright Laura.” Cheyenne muttered as she squinted at her friend. 

“I know, just give your eyes a moment to adjust.” Laura said in a very soothing tone. One that meant she was trying to hypnotize the group, or was already hypnotized. Or both. “I know it’s bright. I know it takes a moment to adjust, but just…relax. And focus on the spiral. Just let the flashing, the intricate little pulse of color and light, help you just, clear your mind. Every flash is another thought that just disappears and fades away. While the swirling colors pull you in ever so gently into a nice relaxing trance. It’s ok to just watch the spiral now ladies, to just let it pull you in, more deeply, making you more relaxed and calm.” 

Back on the couches, the others were all in different levels of trance. Cheyenne was still struggling to adjust her eyes, while Carly was blinking rapidly as she strained to look at the spiral. Next to her, Jackie sat completely transfixed on the spiral, her jaw hanging open slightly.  On the other couch, Christine was more or less already gone and leaning against Eve, whose eyes were fluttering in an effort to stay open and watch the spiral, Jessy’s eyes were also blinking, but more in an attempt to clear out the fuzzy feeling that was starting to drift into her mind. 

“Just follow the spirals and the flash…and let your mind and body start to drift away.” Laura said, starting to snap her fingers softly in time with the flashes. “Every flash helps you to just…” Snap. “sink…and let go.” Another snap. “To surrender to sleep.” she said as Eve’s eyes rolled up into her head and she fell back against the couch. Next to her, Christine followed her down as her head landed softly against Eve’s chest. “Every flash,” Snap. “makes your mind empty,” Snap. “blank.” She snapped again as Cheyenne’s eyes rolled into her head next. Another snap and she sank back into the couch, sighing softly. 

Laura continued her induction as the lights displayed across the girls’ faces. Every few seconds, the soft, gentle snap of her fingers would align perfectly with one of the flashes of the spiral. Meanwhile, in the hallway, Rayne watched with a pleased smile. She couldn’t hear what was going on, and she couldn’t see the spiral, but she could see Jackie’s eyes flutter closed as she leaned over and fell against Carly. The impact made Carly turn, only to see Jackie completely asleep and resting against her. A well timed snap, along with that realization caused her eyes to widen for a split second, just before they fluttered closed as she fell back against the couch. 

Laura’s expression was still completely blank, even as all of the girls laid against the couch, deeply asleep. Everyone, that is, except for Jessy, who was completely transfixed on the spiral before her. Her face was completely slack, her eyes glazed and empty. Slowly, Laura moved to face Jessy, letting the flashes of light play across her face as she moved closer to her friend. Once she was close enough, she gently placed her hand on Jessy’s forehead and slid her hand down across her eyes. “Sleep…” she whispered, aiming the command at both Jessy and the rest of the room. When her hand moved away from Jessy’s face, the young woman’s eyes were completely closed. A few moments later gravity caught up with Jessy and her hand started to slide from her lap, landing softly on the couch, but she didn’t stop there. Her body followed and slowly fell to her side, until she landed gently onto Eve’s lap.

Laura didn’t seem to be phased by any of this. She simply turned the screen of her phone off and lowered her arm to her side. “We are all deeply hypnotized now. Deeply relaxed. Deeply open now.” Laura whispered to the room of hypnotized girls. “I want you to listen very carefully to what I am about to tell you…” she said, starting a preprogrammed set of instructions.

Rayne continued to watch through the window to the room, smiling to herself as she disappeared down the hallway.  


Trisha, as usual, was running late. Actually she had completely lost track of time due to reading a trashy romance novel. A knock on the door snapped her out of her novel-based hypnotic trance. “Yes?” she answered softly. 

The door opened slowly as Rayne peeked her head in. “Umm, are you ok?” she asked, mildly concerned. 

“Yes.” Trisha asked, sitting upland giving her a confused look. “Why?”

Rayne had to fight to keep from rolling her eyes. “Umm, it’s 8:05…” she said, watching Trisha for any sign of recognition as to what that would mean. There was none. “The sorority meeting started five minutes ago?” she finished expectantly. 

“Oh my gosh!” Trisha screamed as she shot up out of her chair and charged for the door. Rayne barely had time to get out of the way before she blew through the door and started to speed walk down the hallway. “Don’t just stand there! We’re already late!” she shouted over her shoulder, rounding the corner and heading towards the lounge. 

Rayne took a deep breath and rolled her eyes, shaking her head and casually pulling the door to Trisha’s room closed. “Yep, kind of what I expected.” Rayne said as she started to follow Trisha’s path down the hallway, albeit at a much slower pace. She arrived a few moments later, only to find Trisha standing outside the door to the lounge, motioning for Rayne to hurry up. Rayne shook her head, smiling to herself. “This should be interesting.” she said, following the taller girl inside. 


Inside, Laura and Eve were standing at the head of the room just behind the lounge chair, while everyone else stood between the couches talking with one another. Everyone seemed to be awake, alert, and acting completely normal. “Well, nice of you to join us!” Laura said with a teasing smile. “We were beginning to worry about you.” 

“I am SO sorry!” Trisha said in an exaggerated but honest tone. “I lost track of time!  It was a really good trashy novel!” she admitted without the slightest hint of embarrassment. 

Several of the girls laughed, including Laura. “That’s alright!” she said with a big smile “But…” Her smile turned devious. “Since you were late I think it’s only fair that you be tonight's volunteer, don’t you all agree?” She said, looking at the group that was spread out throughout the room. 

The girls all responded in a mix of nodding heads and verbal agreements. Trisha couldn’t help but blush before she felt Rayne’s tiny hand on her back softly pushing her towards the front of the room. 

“Alright, alright!” Trisha said, finally showing some signs of embarrassment “I submit…” she said before realizing the wording she had just used. “I mean volunteer!” she corrected with a laugh. 

Laura smiled and stepped back from where she was standing. “Well then,” she beamed, “take your spot!” She pointed to the spot between her and Eve. 

Trisha walked to where Laura had pointed and took a deep breath. “What kind of induction were you planning tonight?” she asked.

Laura gave her a devious look. “Oh, we have something very special in mind for you tonight, Trisha.” 

Trisha blushed much more deeply this time and looked around the room. “Oh, what’s that?” she asked nervously. 

“Oh, just...this. Now!” Laura shouted as she grabbed Trisha’s right arm and pulled it straight out. Not to hypnotize her, but to immobilize her. 

Trisha jerked out of reflex and looked at Laura in shock, trying to understand what she was doing, only to have her left arm grabbed by Eve a moment later. Both girls pulled Trisha’s arms straight out to lock them in place and then Eve, without so much as a hint of expression on her face, swung around and placed her left leg behind Trisha’s knees. “Now!” Eve said confidently as she and Laura both pushed Trisha back as hard as they could. 

Trisha let out a high pitched scream as she fell back, tripping over Eve’s leg and falling back onto the floor. “What are you doing!?” she shouted as her body began thrashing to escape whatever plan they had in mind. But both of her arms were pinned to the ground and both Eve and Laura were using all their body weight to lock her arms to the floor. In turn, she began to struggle again, this time with her legs. She didn’t get far before she felt Carly and Jessy each grab one of her legs and press down as hard as they could to pin them to the floor. 

“What ARE you doing?” she asked again as her curiosity took over. 

"Following orders.” Eve whispered seductively in her ear. 

“What?! Whose orders?” Trisha asked, feeling very confused and more than a little aroused. 

“Mine.” Rayne replied matter-of-factly as she pulled the shade down over the window of the doorway. 

“Yours?” Trisha asked, more confused than ever. “I…I don’t understand?”

“I know.” Rayne said as she slowly walked towards Trisha. But there was something different about her walk. There was a seductive danger to it, almost like a cat stalking its prey. When she was close enough, she stepped over Trisha’s stomach and lowered her body down onto it, then moved her legs into a kneeling position, one on either side of Trisha’s torso. She put just enough weight on her stomach to stop her thrashing, but not enough to hinder her breathing. “But you will understand.” Rayne said as she took out what looked like an old antique necklace with a crystal bauble on the end and dangled it over Trisha’s eyes. “I trust you know what this is for.” Rayne said with a devious smile. 

Trisha’s expression was one of defiance, despite not really feeling threatened. She wanted to struggle because it was part of the fun. But despite that defiance, she couldn’t help but stare up at the bauble that was hanging above her eyes. “I’m not that easy.” she said defiantly, even as her eyes slowly began to follow the sway of the bauble. 

“I knew you would say that.” Rayne said with a smile as she snapped her fingers. 

Trisha blinked for a split second, almost expecting a hypnotic command to come with the snap. But nothing happened. She scrunched up her face and was about to tell Rayne that it didn’t work. But before she could, she felt someone’s hands sliding along her inner thighs and noticed Jackie and Cheyene each move to either side of her, kneeling down between Rayne and the others who held Trisha’s arms down. Trisha looked up at them in confusion before the two women, almost at the exact same time, reached out and started to caress Trisha’s breasts. “OOOhhh!” Trisha shouted in surprise as she closed her eyes and then quickly opened them again, only to watch the bauble swinging slowly. “What are you…what are you doing?” she asked, trying to hide her rapidly spiking arousal. 

Rayne leaned in just a bit, letting the bauble spin and swing over Trisha’s face while the light from the room refracted across her face gently. “I’m taking over, Trisha.” She said bluntly. “I think you’d enjoy yourself…enjoy the sorority and all of the things it has to offer,” She paused to the sound of Christine unzipping Trisha’s jeans, “if you would just…give in, Trisha,” Another pregnant pause fell over the room. “and submit…to me.” Rayne’s voice was seductive yet somehow almost power hungry. 

Trisha could feel Christine’s hands sliding along her inner thighs very seductively. She gave a half-hearted attempt at struggling, but with at least one girl pinning down each of her limbs and another surprisingly bulky young woman sitting right on her stomach, she knew there was no way she was going to break free. And she didn’t want to. She wanted to give in. But she wanted the struggle to last as long as it could. She stared up at the bauble as her body slowly started to stop writhing from the struggle and instead began to writhe from the pleasure of feeling three young women massaging her erogenous zones. “I can…hold out…” she said, noticeably distracted. “I won’...” she trailed off as her moans began to increase.  

Rayne just smiled down at her. “I thought you might say that.” she said as she lifted her hand and snapped her fingers again. 

Trisha paused again, expecting a trigger or command to accompany the snap. She almost expected the snap itself to put her under. But, again, nothing happened. She was trying to clear her head enough to wonder what that finger snap was for, until she felt Christine’s tongue slide along her panties. Then she forgot pretty much everything else as she let out a loud moan. “OHMYGAWD!” she screamed as her eyes widened in surprise and pleasure, locking right onto the bauble. 

“The more you struggle…” Rayne whispered seductively as she leaned in and started to kiss Trisha’s neck, “the deeper you will go…when you finally…surrender, Trisha.” 

“I…I…wonnn….uuuuggggh!” Trisha tried to be defiant, but she felt her panties being moved out of the way and felt the tongue of her longtime friend slide slowly between the folds of her sex, and all she could do was moan loudly in response. Her eyes fixated on the bauble above while sweat dripped off of her body. Whether it was from her own exertion, the body heat of the girls around her, or her own arousal, she didn’t really care. 

“Surrender… and sleep.” Rayne whispered as she leaned up and licked Trisha’s ear. “You’re mine Trisha. You are all…mine!” Rayne said in an almost sadistic tone. 

“You…you…yourrrr…” Trisha visibly jerked as she felt herself orgasm under the constant arousal of the girls around her. She shuddered and moaned for several seconds, even closing her eyes nice and tight. And then her body went completely limp on the floor. She looked as though she had completely fainted from the pleasure. 

But Rayne knew better.  She turned Trisha’s head to face hers and slowly licked Trisha’s lips. “You're mine now Trisha. Say it.” she commanded. 

“I’m…yours…” Trisha responded quietly, betraying that she was, in fact, hypnotized and not unconscious. A slight difference, but an important one. 

“The sorority is mine, isn’t it Trisha.” Rayne said as more of a command than a suggestion. 

“Yes…yours…” Trisha responded as her body started to shake again in pleasure. The others hadn’t let up simply because Trisha had surrendered. 

Rayne gave her a devious smile and leaned in closer to Trisha. “I am now the president… the mistress…in charge of the sorority.” she said, tilting her head up and addressing the whole room. “Isn’t that right?” 

“Yes mistress.”  Came the reply from everyone in the room, including Trisha. 

Rayne leaned in and kissed Trisha passionately.. She couldn’t believe her plan had worked. She had taken over! The sorority and all of the girls in it were completely under her control. She broke the kiss and sat up with a smile. “Now, you all know you won’t remember any of this in the morning. But you will follow the suggestions and obey without question. Isn’t that right?” She asked, almost gloating. 

Another chorus of “Yes mistress” echoed through the room.

“Perfect.” she said, smiling confidently. “Just a few more suggestions. But first,ladies…strip!” 


Several hours later a completely exhausted Rayne staggered down the hallway to her dorm. Despite her exhaustion, both physically and mentally, she still managed to have quite the smile on her face. Not only did she manage to take over the sorority, but the evening’s activities after that were…completely exhausting, you might say. 

She stopped outside of her room and took a deep breath to compose herself. She turned the key and opened the door to find a completely dark room. As she moved inside and let her eyes adjust, the image of Klaire, fast asleep in her bed, slowly came into view. 

Rayne smiled down at her roommate. “She looks so peaceful, so pretty when she is asleep.” She thought to herself, tempted to reach out and stroke the young woman’s cheek. 

But she stopped herself, realizing that would probably wake her and ruin her plans. She needed to be patient, needed to make this work, all in due time. She moved to her own bed and sat down, watching her roommate slowly breathing in her sleep. “I have them now.” Rayne whispered softly, mostly to herself, but also, hopefully, to Klaire’s sleeping mind. “Now all I need…is you!” 

The End…for now. 

There is an Alternate Ending of this chapter available on my Patreon Page: Insurrection - N.C.U. - Part 4 Alt Ending!

Thanks to Sleepygirl for doing the editing for me.  

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Featuring: Klaire, Rayne, Laura, Eve, Christine, Trisha, Jackie, Cheyenne, Carly, and Jessy