Key: FD, MC, FF
Description: Rayne slips out of the shower to discover Trisha hypnotizing her roommate in the backyard. Well that just won’t do, now will it? But this is the Alt ending, so Trisha might just get the upper hand.
You can find the full story on my Patreon Page: Queens are Wild - N.C.U. - Part 10 Alt Ending
Key: FD, MC, FF
Description: Rayne slips out of the shower to discover Trisha hypnotizing her roommate in the backyard. Well that just won’t do, now will it?
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Rayne slowly exited the shower and started to dry herself off, slowly rubbing the towel along her curves while taking a moment to close her eyes and feel just how soft, just how fresh the towel felt. And of course there was always that special smell. It was a little pleasure of hers.
Sitting in the tub next to her were Eve and Laura, each on either end of the tub. Eve’s head was leaning against the wall to her left, her wet hair stuck to her chest and shoulders while her hands floated gently in the water that had pooled in the tub. On the opposite end, Laura leaned against the wall with one arm on the side of the tub and the other across her lap. Her mouth hung open ever so slightly as her soaked hair created a bit of a pillow behind her. Both girls were completely asleep, allowing their chests to rise and fall gently with each breath. Which was, of course, a rather lovely sight given that both of them were still completely naked.
Rayne admired her handiwork as she got herself dressed, a pleased smile on her lips as she took a moment to dry her hair before turning to her friends.
She moved to the side of the tub and knelt down, speaking to both Eve and Laura soothingly. “You two will stay here to sleep and rest for a while. When you do wake up you will wake the other, if you are the first to awaken. You will stay in a deep, hypnotic sleep, finish your shower, get nice and clean, and then get yourselves dressed and go into the bedroom. Once you are there you will awaken and amuse yourselves in whatever way you might like. But you will not even think about leaving the room until I come and get you later. Understand, ladies?”
Key: FD, MC, FF
Description: With the game of Truth or Dare over, the girls split up to enjoy their afternoon while Rayne sets out to enjoy them. This is the extended ending to the story featuring a bit more of the play between the girls in the shower. You can find that chapter here: Queens are Wild - N.C.U. - Part 9 Extended Ending
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Featuring: Rayne, Klaire, Eve, Laura, and Trisha
Queens are Wild - N.C.U. - Part 9
Key: FD, MC, FF
Description: With the game of Truth or Dare over, the girls split up to enjoy their afternoon while Rayne sets out to enjoy them.
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Rayne sat in one of the bedrooms quietly taking stock of where everyone had gone. She glanced out the window to see Klaire and Trisha outside, talking on the porch, while Trisha struggled to light a small fire in the firepit. Klaire laughed in her usual superior way as she watched the older woman struggle with basic survival skills. “That should keep you two occupied for a while.” she thought to herself as she moved to the bedroom door and slowly peeked out.
The hallway was empty and dark since the lights were all off, but in the distance she could see Eve sitting on the couch, engrossed in a book. She had the usual look of an intent reader, the kind that would render her oblivious from noticing anything else happening around her. It was an ideal situation.
“Now where is…” she started, just as the other bedroom door opened and Laura emerged, wearing nothing but a bathrobe and shaking out her hair as she stepped into the bathroom and closed the door behind her. “Perfect!” Rayne thought with a grin as she palmed her stack of cards and smiled. “Time for a little fun.” she whispered.
Rayne made her way to the bathroom door, carefully keeping an eye on Eve to make sure she was still engrossed in her book, and waited for the sound of the water to come from the shower. She grinned to herself as she listened carefully and finally heard the sounds of a person climbing into the shower and pulling the curtain closed behind them. And as an added bonus, Laura started to sing softly to herself. It wasn’t really words so much as vocalizations, notes sung without structure, Rayne had to admit it was actually quite beautiful to listen to.
Rayne bit her tongue and carefully twisted the doorknob as quietly as possible. The door slowly pushed open and she started to sneak in, unfortunately for her she wasn’t quiet enough. “Is someone there?” Laura asked from inside the shower.
“Hey, it’s me.” Rayne said, cursing under her breath and pulling out Laura’s queen of hearts card, ready to pounce. But to her surprise Laura was remarkably calm.
“What’s up?” she asked as her silhouette moved against the shower curtain and the shadow of her arms began to wash her chest.
“I was…” Rayne hesitated, she hadn’t bothered to come up with a reason she would be in there. She had assumed she wouldn’t need one. “I was…” she glanced at the countertop and saw Laura’s brush and hair ties as an idea formed in her mind. “I was hoping I could snag my brush, my hair is kind of messy.” she said sheepishly.
“Go for it!” Laura responded energetically as her silhouette bent down to wash her legs.
Instead of pretending to reach for the brush, Rayne found that she couldn’t look away from Laura’s silhouette. She had never really seen a woman shower like this before and it was much more…captivating than she expected. She shook her head to regain her composure. “Thanks!” she said, opening a drawer as a distraction, then slowly closing it. She took a few steps to make it sound like she was leaving the room, then closed the door and crouched down so her own silhouette wouldn’t give her away.
Laura didn’t skip a beat and continued to wash herself, sliding her hands along her legs and up along her torso and breasts, stretching out and showing off her figure in the process. All while Rayne stared, transfixed on the silhouette in the shower.
And then Laura started to wash her hair, running the water over her face and her head, and turning around to let the water flow down her back. “This is my shot.” Rayne thought to herself, as she moved closer to the shower, Laura’s singing gently echoing through the room and over the sounds of water splashing down onto the floor beneath her. She reached out to grab the curtain only to realize that she was…well…dressed. Like, completely dressed. And if she didn’t want to end up soaked, she should probably change that. So, as quietly as she could, she slowly pulled her top over her head, exposing her fitted sports bra. She dropped her shirt to the floor while Laura’s singing stopped as she stuck her face under the water and let it flow down her face and chest.
Her jeans were next as she carefully unbuckled them and lowered them quietly to the floor, careful to not let the belt or one of the buttons hit the floor and give her away. She knelt on the floor and slid the card out of her jeans pocket and placed it on the counter. She then grabbed her sports bra and pulled it over her head, freeing her breasts and taking a slow, deep breath to calm herself.
Laura pulled her head out from under the water and began singing again as she slowly continued to lather, rinse, and repeat. Meanwhile, Rayne gently hooked her thumbs into the waistband of her panties and slowly pulled them down her legs. She was ready to strike. She scooped up the card and moved quietly to the shower, crouching low to the ground to avoid being seen, and waiting for just the right moment.
After a few tense moments, she noticed that Laura had begun to rinse her hair, she could see her head tipped back as the water flowed down the back of her head and down her long blonde hair before hitting the ground. Her singing had stopped and she seemed to be completely relaxed and at peace in the shower. It was the perfect opportunity to strike.
In a quick, fluid motion Rayne grabbed the curtain and stood up, pulling it aside and holding the card up in front of Laura’s face, careful to make sure it didn’t get wet.
Laura’s eyes snapped open in shock and she was about to let out a scream when her eyes locked onto the card before her. Her attempt at a scream faded away and was replaced by a long, drawn out sigh. Her hands fell limply to her sides as her shoulders slumped and her expression faded to nothing while she stared vacantly at the card.
Rayne couldn’t help but smile. “Gotcha!” she said arrogantly as she quickly deposited the card on the counter and slid into the shower with Laura, pulling the curtain closed behind her.
In front of her was a gorgeous sight. A completely naked Laura, her breasts completely exposed as the water trickled off of her skin and dripped gently down her form. Rayne didn’t know what to do first, but ultimately just let herself relax while her hands slid over Laura’s warm, wet body. Finally, she leaned in and slid her tongue slowly along the older woman’s nipple, kissing up her neck as she whispered “You’re beautiful.” into Laura’s ear.
Laura didn’t respond, she just stared vacantly ahead as her mouth slowly fell open and the sound of the water gently dripping down her body echoed in the shower. Rayne smiled. “I love seeing you like this. Helpless and open.” she whispered before pulling her entranced friend into a slow, deep kiss. Laura didn't really respond to the kiss, she was too deeply hypnotized, too blank. But that didn’t really matter to Rayne. Seeing her face and body completely slack the whole time made things even sexier than if she had responded.
But then a devious thought crossed her mind. “You know what we're missing here?” she asked, knowing Laura wouldn't respond. “A little…company.” She looked around at just how spacious the shower was for a small cabin. “Wait right here…” she said with a smile as she stepped out of the shower and moved to her jeans, slowly removing the queen of diamonds from her pocket.
She opened the door quietly and poked her head out. She could still see Eve on the couch, engrossed in her book, and her smile widened. “Umm, Eve?” she called out, hoping no one else would hear. But there was no response from Eve, she just turned the page of her novel. “Hey, Eve!” she called out a little bit louder.
Eve snapped out of her trance and looked up at Rayne. “Huh?” she asked, trying to figure out what was going on. “Oh, hey, what's up?” she asked politely.
Rayne did her best to look embarrassed. “I kinda…got in the shower and forgot to bring a towel. Could you grab one for me out of the linen closet please?” she asked as innocently as she could.
Eve smiled and slipped a bookmark into her book. “Sure!” she said with a smile as she stood up from the couch and made her way to the small closet in the hallway. The door opened in such a way that it obscured Eve’s view of Rayne and the bathroom door. And this was exactly what Rayne wanted.
Eve reached up and grabbed a towel. “Here you go…” she started as she closed the closet door and turned to Rayne, only to gasp in surprise. In front of her stood Rayne with one hand on her hip and a confident smile on her face, completely naked. And in her hand was the queen of hearts. Eve gasped at the sight and unconsciously slid her eyes up the naked young woman's body, until she saw the card. “Hey…” she said as her face took on a very dreamy, tired look, “that one’s….miiinne….” she trailed off as her face went slack and her shoulders slumped to her sides, limp and deeply relaxed.
“Ya don’t say?” Rayne said with a devious grin as she placed the card on the bathroom counter next to Laura’s before hopping back out into the hallway, grabbing Eve’s belt and pulling her into the bathroom. “Come’ere!” she said aggressively, closing the door behind her.
Inside the bathroom, Rayne pulled Eve close and kissed her aggressively while her hands moved down Eve’s form and undid her belt as quickly as she could, letting her jeans drop. Breaking the kiss, she hooked her fingers into Eve’s panties and slid them down in one quick motion.
As she stood up she grabbed Eve’s shirt and pulled it over her head, causing the hypnotized woman’s arms and hair to both be pulled up with the shirt and then slowly fall to her sides. Rayne smiled at the nearly naked young woman and put a finger into the front of her bra, using it to pull her closer to the shower where Laura still waited blankly for them. Rayne leaned in and kissed Eve’s breast as she worked her hands behind the taller woman, finally unclasping her bra and tossing it aside.
Rayne gently guided Eve into the shower and pulled the curtain behind her, giving the three of them just a little extra feeling of privacy. She took a moment to look at the two young women, both completely helpless and blank, and let her hands slowly run up and down their bodies. She started at their legs, and let her hands glide up, very slowly and tenderly as she slid up their thighs and over the curve of their butts. She couldn’t help but let out a soft giggle, which was muffled by the sound of the warm water spraying around them.
She smiled at Eve and then at Laura while her hands moved up and down their bodies, caressing their breasts as she leaned in to steal a kiss from Eve, and then from Laura. Her hands moved down their bodies and, slowly, she began to tease each of their clits. “Ladies…” she said in a husky voice, “let’s have a little fun.” She slid one finger into each of the hypnotized women, causing them to let out a moan that was completely covered but the sound of the water hitting the shower floor.
To be continued.
Curious what might have happened in the shower between Rayne and her hypnotized companions? You can find an extended ending for this chapter here: Queens are Wild - N.C.U. - Part 9 Ext. Ending
Thanks to Sleepygirl for doing the editing for me. If you would like to see her editing reactions to this story, and how it affected her while she was editing you can find that here: Queens are Wild 9 - Editing Banter.
Thank you so much for taking the time to read this! If you have any comments I would love to hear them! You can follow more adventures at Spirals Nightclub! You can also find bonus content on my Patreon page!
Featuring: Rayne, Klaire, Eve, Laura, and Trisha
Queens are Wild - N.C.U. - Part 8 Alt Ending
Key: FD, MC, FF
Description: The final round of Truth of Dare starts out exactly that way Klaire didn’t want it to. But when life hands you lemons…throw them at someone! This is the alt ending of the story and can be found here: Queens are Wild - N.C.U. - Part 8 Alte Ending
Cover Image made by HeroineArtAi
Featuring: Rayne, Klaire, Eve, Laura, and Trisha
Key: FD, MC, FF
Description: The final round of Truth of Dare starts out exactly the way Klaire didn’t want it to. But when life hands you lemons…throw them at someone!
Cover Image made by HeroineArtAi
Klaire, coming down from the high of multiple hypnotic orgasms thanks to Laura and the others, grabbed the next card and flipped it over to reveal…a three of spades. “Fuck!” she shouted in frustration as the others laughed.
“That should be hard to beat!” Trisha laughed, revealing a nine of diamonds. “Oh look, I beat it!”
“Me too!” Eve smiled, turning over a nine of spades.
“I did too!” Laura teased as she flipped over a five of diamonds.
“Sorry Klaire.” Rayne patted her roommate's knee as she turned over a six of diamonds.
Klaire made an exaggerated show of annoyance and tried to hide her smile. “Alright, dare.” she admitted in defeat.
Trisha and Eve both looked at one another and stood up, moving to the hallway to discuss their dare. A moment later they returned, looking rather pleased with themselves. “Alright Klaire, we dare you to try your hand at hypnotizing someone here, all on your own!”
“Oh! That should be good!” Laura exclaimed with a playful smile. “You can do it! I believe in you!”
“Good…” Klaire said, turning in Laura’s direction. “Because you are going to be the one I hypnotized. I owe you, after all.”
“Go for it!” Laura exclaimed excitedly, leaning back on the couch to get more comfortable “I'm ready! Take me!”
Eve and Trisha snickered while Rayne rolled her eyes and laughed despite herself. Klaire, on the other hand, was hiding her nervousness very well and stood up so she would be standing over Laura and looking down on her. Normally it wouldn’t be possible given the six inch height difference between the two, but with Laura laying down Klaire suddenly became much taller and more imposing.
“Alright Laura.” Klaire started, keeping her voice even and calm. She had a long history in theater and was using her skills from that to make her voice soothing and smooth even though her heart was beating a mile a minute in her chest. “I just want you to focus on me. And I want you to think back, to about half an hour ago. When out of nowhere, Eve flipped over your Queen. It was just sitting there, staring up at you and you were lost in its gaze. The moment you saw it, looking back at you, you simply couldn’t look away. You just had to keep focusing on her. The queen of hearts. Such a warm and nurturing figure in the cards, but devious and powerful in fiction. Able to be both motherly and playful, while being cunning and dominant. The perfect card for you. The perfect icon to help your mind just focus, and to look into my eyes and imagine that I am the queen of hearts. Looking down on you, strong and confident. You can’t look away, you're captivated now, aren’t you Laura?”
Klaire wasn’t really sure what she was doing but managed to throw an induction together nonetheless. And although Laura was still clearly awake and smiling at her, she didn’t seem to be able to look away. Her eyes were locked onto Klaire’s and a nervous laugh was drifting out of her before she answered. “I really kind of am, aren’t I?”
“Yes you are…” Klaire said in a soothing, almost seductive tone. “You can’t look away. But more than just the queen, you taught me something today Laura. You taught me not only how to let go, how to embrace my interest in this…you taught me how…to hypnotize someone…”
Laura’s head turned a little as the other girls all watched her then glanced back up to Klaire, curious where she was going with this. “I did?” Laura replied curiously.
“Yes, you did. When you told me all I had to do was simply…count down from ten…and the person would focus on me more. Nine would make them relax…eight would have them starting to feel a tingle in their body. Seven would have their muscles loosening…six would make them feel heavy, and tired…five would see them simply drifting away…down…down…down…deeply down.”
Laura’s expression had softened dramatically. Her body was sinking slowly into the couch and her eyes were taking on a familiar glassy, almost glazed, look as she continued to stare up at Klaire. But the most telling sign of her drifting into trance was that her smile had faded slowly. You could actually watch the muscle tension in her cheeks relax and her jaw slowly start to open as she drifted down into trance. The others, meanwhile, were all focused on the scene before them. In their own, very different, kind of trance.
“Four…” Klaire continued, “Already hypnotized. Three, you taught me that…a person is… Two…hypnotized…long before…One…they get the final word. Zero, the simple word of… Sleep!” Klaire said a bit more forcefully as she snapped her fingers.
The reaction from Laura wasn’t nearly as dramatic as Klaire had hoped. Having seen everyone else go from awake and rigid to ragdoll with a single word was kind of exciting. But Laura was laying down, already calm and relaxed, and instead her eyes slowly began to close. Before they did they crossed for a moment, leaving only the whites visible. Her head stayed upright for a few moments before gravity finally caught it and her head slowly fell to her right, landing on her shoulder. It wasn’t dramatic, and she didn’t look like she had been dropped on the couch like a discarded doll. She looked like she had settled in to sleep and simply drifted off. Except, of course, that Klaire was responsible for her drifting off.
“Great!” Trisha exclaimed excitedly “You did it!”
Eve and Rayne both congratulated Klaire as the first time hypnotist hid a blush and tried to act confident instead. “Of course I did.” she said in mock arrogance. “I’m the Queen!” she finished, sticking her tongue out at Rayne playfully.
The others laughed. “Well you got her under, and that was the last hand, so…give her a suggestion or something and then we can wake her.” Rayne instructed.
“I don’t have a suggestion for her.” Klaire said flatly. “But I’ve seen enough demonstrated that I know what I want to do.”
The other three looked at one another and then back at Klaire. “Ok,” said Eve with a soft, encouraging smile. “What do you want to do?”
Klaire blushed a bit before leaning down over Laura’s sleeping form and tilting her head up. “So pretty when she sleeps.” she commented before leaning in and kissing Laura, tenderly and gently at first. However, Rayne’s suggestion to embrace her sexuality the night before began to kick in, and soon Klaire’s kiss became more passionate.
The other girls all grinned and cheered excitedly as the kiss continued, until Klaire finally pulled back with a blush. “She did kind of deserve that didn’t she?” Eve laughed.
“You’re damn right she did!” Klaire said with a chuckle as she sat back down. “Laura,” she proclaimed proudly, “you will wake up on three. One…two…three!” she said confidently, snapping her fingers.
Laura’s eyes flickered open and a warm smile, along with a deep, embarrassed blush, came over her face. “Well that was unexpected!” she said laughing playfully. “Remind me to let you do that again some time” she winked, causing Klaire to match her blush.
The other girls all smiled as Eve glanced at the table. “What are those two cards left?” she asked curiously.
“There were two left over.” Rayne explained. “You can’t really divide fifty two cards by five without it. So I just set them aside.” Without even thinking about it Rayne picked up the two remaining cards and flipped them over on the table. Nothing special, just a five of clubs and the Queen of Spades. (yes, this is how the cards actually shuffled out in real life!)
Rayne gasped as the queen of spades appeared on the table and everyone else looked on in surprise, some gasping, some laughing, and then everyone turned to look at Trisha, who was just staring blankly at her trigger card that sat on the table before her. “Holy shit!” Rayne said, grinning. “Did anyone else notice that Trisha hadn’t been triggered?”
The other girls all shrugged and shook their heads. “I guess we were all a little too occupied being triggered ourselves that we just didn’t realize it.” Eve responded with a shrug of her shoulders.
“So, who gets to give her the suggestions?” Klaire asked curiously.
Rayne glanced over at the blanked Trisha and a smile spread across her face. “Are you ladies comfortable with getting naked again?” she asked playfully.
The rest of the girls all blinked and looked at one another and then back at Rayne with a skeptical look.
Inside the main bedroom, which was to say the one with the slightly larger bed, Klaire nervously removed the last of her clothes and laid down on the bed. With a sigh she called out “Ok, I’m ready!” and then closed her eyes.
The sound of the door creaking open and then closing echoed through the room, followed by the sound of gentle footsteps on the hardwood floor. Klaire took a deep breath to calm herself as she felt warm oil being dribbled onto her back while a pair of small, but strong hands began to spread the oil around. Not really massaging just yet, just spreading it out, letting it move along all of her back at once.
Klaire let out a sigh and opened one eye to get a feel for what was happening in the room. Through the mirror she could see the reflection of Trisha standing over her, completely naked from head to toe. From head to toe she was completely naked, standing straight and somewhat rigid as she rubbed the oil along Klaire’s back. “Oooh, you're naked!?” Klaire asked in confusion.
“Yes.” came the flat reply from Trisha. “Rayne thought that me being naked would make the situation feel less unusual and more sensual.” Her voice sounded distant, like she wasn’t really paying attention to what she was saying.
Klaire felt the older grad student’s hands sliding up and along her back, slowly squeezing and pressing into the muscles as she started to smooth out the tension in her body. Klaire let out a soft, gentle moan and closed her eyes for a moment before turning her head to get a better look at Trisha.
Trisha stood over the diminutive freshman, hands moving along her back while her breasts jiggled softly. They were a bit smaller than Klaire had remembered, but were still easily C-cups. But the best part of the view was the completely blank, slack face of Trisha just staring off into the void in front of her. Not even looking at where she was massaging, just acting on autopilot without a care in the world or a single thought in her head.
Klaire let her eyes close as Trisha’s hands moved slowly up to her neck and shoulders and began to squeeze and knead them deeply. “What will you remember when this is over?” Klaire asked nervously, hoping for a specific answer.
“I have been instructed to remember only that I gave each of you a massage, but to not remember the details of that massage, or what was said or done. This will not feel unusual to me, it is natural to simply remember a massage.” Trisha said in an almost sleepy robotic voice.
Klaire smiled and whispered “Lower please” and felt Trisha’s hands start to move slowly down her body, along her back until she reached her lower back and began to massage. “Lower.” Klaire repeated as the hypnotized woman moved down further still, caressing her butt and her thighs. Klaire spread her legs just a bit and instinctively Trisha started to massage between them. Klaire’s voice cracked a bit as she swallowed nervously and whispered “higher.”
Trisha’s hands slid up along her inner thigh until they found her vagina and started to slowly, tenderly massage up and down along the folds of her sex. Klaire let out a gasp and whispered “That’s the spot… right there.”
Back in the living room, some time later, Eve, Rayne and Laura were casually talking about what they might do for the rest of the weekend when a surprised, orgasmic squeal echoed from the bedroom. The three girls looked at the room and started to laugh softly. “It’s good to see she’s loosening up!” Laura said with a smile.
Rayne just nodded and looked back in the direction of the bedroom, very eager to see just how much she could help Klaire to…loosen up this weekend.
To Be Continued…
(Author’s note: this story is ending up being WAY longer than I intended! I’m not even halfway done with my outline yet! So I hope you are enjoying this as much as I am as I still have the better part worth of two days of adventure yet to come!)
Curious what might have happened if Rayne had given Trisha a bit more of an intimate suggestion, if instead of a massage the hypnotized grad student was told to give a more personal kind of pleasure? You can find the Alt ending for this chapter here: Queens are Wild - N.C.U. - Part 8 Alt Ending
Thanks to Sleepygirl for doing the editing for me. If you would like to see her editing reactions to this story, and how it affected her while she was editing you can find that here: Queens are Wild - Editing Banter.
Thank you so much for taking the time to read this! If you have any comments I would love to hear them! You can follow more adventures at Spirals Nightclub! You can also find bonus content on my Patreon page!
