Wednesday, June 25, 2025

Queens are Wild - N.C.U. - Part 12

Queens are Wild - N.C.U. - Part 12

Key: FD, MC, FF

Description:  The girls hatch a plan to turn the tables on Rayne, but they’ll need a distraction. Fortunately Laura is more than willing to fill that role!

Cover Image made by HeroineArtAi

         As the girls all started their days bright and early the discussion turned to going into town to grab a few supplies for dinner. Rayne had slipped away into the bathroom to clean up and get dressed for the morning while the rest of the girls were sitting in the dining area discussing what they needed when Klaire spoke up. “I have a plan…” she said ominously. 

        “For…going into town?” Eve asked, a bit confused. 

        “No, for Rayne. I have a plan. Well maybe not a plan but an idea, but I need her to stay here. I need her out of the way when we go into town. Any ideas?” she asked quietly, listening to the sound of Rayne in the middle of her shower. 

        “I mean…” Trisha started, equally confused, “one of us could stay here with her?”

        “She’d get suspicious if someone just asked her to stay! I’m her roommate, I know her! She’s paranoid!” Klaire insisted. 

        As the girls looked back and forth between one another Laura’s face lit up. “Oh! I know!” she said, reaching into her pocket and dropping the two cards Rayne had left under her door last night onto the counter. She carefully examined them and then quickly turned around and showed the girls the card with a louder than needed “Ah ha!” 

        The three other girls all gasped in surprise as one of the queens was displayed, each stuck in a state of shock for a moment until they got a closer look. 

        “Umm… Laura…” Eve said as politely as she could, “that’s not one of our trigger cards. That’s your trigger card, honey.”

        Laura’s face beamed with excitement as the sound of the shower came to a stop. “I know!” she whispered. “I’ll be a distraction! It will make her want to stay here and you guys can go get whatever Klaire needs.” 

        The three girls looked at one another in confusion. “You realize what you're doing, right?” Klaire asked, pretty confident that Laura hadn’t thought this entire idea through. 

        “Absolutely!” Laura said confidently as she lowered the card and winked playfully. “Nighty night ladies!” she said with a smile before dropping the card on the table in front of her, face up. 

        Trisha, Eve and Klaire all looked down at the card then back up to Laura, watching as the excited blonde's smile faded as her shoulders slowly began to sag. The light slowly faded from her eyes as she stood there and stared at the card as the light went out of her eyes, her mouth gently falling open. Soon her face was completely slack, her body gently swaying on its feet as she slipped deeper into a hypnotic trance. Completely unaware of everything else around her…just the card. She had literally jumped on a hypnotic grenade…of course, it was one she had thrown herself but it was still fitting for her.  

        “Girls committed, I'll give her that!” Trisha said in awe of Laura’s…dedication. Yeah, we’ll go with that. 

        Before any of the others could say anything Rayne stepped into the room looking a bit more refreshed than when she had woken up. “Are we all ready to…go…” she trailed off as she noticed Laura standing there. She stood there in silence for a few moments as the pieces clicked into place, realizing that Laura was staring at her own trigger card. “Did one of you do this to her?” she asked, looking between everyone in confusion. 

        “No…” Klaire replied as an idea formed in her head. “She did it to herself!” she finished. 

        “Yeah,”  Eve took over, “she pulled one out of her pocket. I’m not sure where she got it, but she dropped it on the table. And then…bam!  Down she went!” 

        Rayne looked at the card, then at the other card that she recognized as Klaire’s, sitting on the counter. “She must have been trying to hypnotize Klaire.” she thought to herself. “She accidentally triggered herself! Damn, that’s hot!” 

        The three girls gave each other subtle glances as they watched Rayne slowly flush while she looked over Laura’s hypnotized form. “You know what…” Rayne started, not looking away from Laura, “I think I’ll stay here, if you don’t mind.” 

        “No, that's fine!” Klaire said quickly, grabbing Eve and Trisha and pulling them towards the door. “We’ll be back later. Have fun!” she said, closing the door behind her. 

        “Oh…” Rayne said as a devious smile formed on her face, “I will.” She trailed a finger along Laura’s chin and tilted her face toward her own, leaning up to kiss the hypnotized blonde tenderly. “I will indeed…” 

 

        Meanwhile, the girls arrived at a local store in town. It was a little smaller than a normal convenience store that you’d see on any suburban corner, but with the aisles more densely packed with everyday items that you might need. Everything was made of wood, giving it a rustic feel and making it feel, somehow, more inviting than it looked. 

        Despite the close quarters, Klaire pushed by Trisha and Eve and headed directly towards the back of the store. “Do you know what she’s up to?” Eve asked Trisha. 

        “Not a clue.” Trisha replied, rolling her eyes as the two grabbed a small basket and started to gather the groceries. A few moments later Klaire ran past them excitedly and came to a sliding stop at the counter, holding something she had picked up from the game section. It was bigger than a deck of cards but too small to be a board game. “I guess she found it?” Trisha asked, grabbing a jar of pickles. 

        “Looks like.” Eve said with a smile. 

 

        The girls emerged from the store a few minutes later and saw Klaire eagerly sitting on the hood of the car with a cheshire cat grin. “Well…” Trisha started, “you look pleased with yourself.” 

        “Find what you were looking for?” Eve asked as she put the groceries in the back of the car. 

        “I did!” Klaire said proudly, holding up two boxes, or four full decks, of a card game called Five Crowns. 

        “You found cards?” Trisha asked. “How does that help us?” 

        Klaire smiled and opened one of the decks, then pulled out a Queen. One the others had never seen before, the queen of stars, and held it up in front of the girl’s faces. “This game…” Klaire said proudly, “has five suits. One for each of us…AND Rayne!” 

        “Huh.” Trisha mused. “So your plan is to get Rayne to let us hypnotize her?” 

        “Not really.” Klaire shrugged. “But I assume if we work together we can turn it on her and do something similar to what she did to us. Mention something about what would happen if there was a queen associated with her, and…well…show her and drop her!” 

        Eve and Trisha looked at one another and then back at Klaire. “How do you know this will work?” Trisha asked with a smug disdain. “The queens won’t be the same as the deck she’s currently using.” 

        Klaire’s expression of excitement turned to one of annoyance almost instantly. Without so much as a hint of foreshadowing, she raised up a card directly in front of Trisha’s eyes and held it there. 

        Eve glanced at the card, the queen of spades, and then glanced over to Trisha. Despite her previous attitude she was completely transfixed on the card as her arms slowly uncrossed and fell to her sides. Her mouth opened just a bit as she tried to respond, but nothing ever came out. Eve thought she could almost hear Trisha’s mind ‘Ping’ itself into a trance. 

        Klaire’s annoyance turned to a smirk of dominance. “Is that good enough for you?” she asked the now hypnotized Trisha

        “Yes.” came the soft, subtle reply. 

        “Good, get into the passenger seat.” Klaire demanded. “And then fall into a completely deep, SILENT sleep until we arrive back at the cabin.

        Eve watched as Trisha slowly moved around to the passenger side of the car, opened the door and plopped down into the seat. She buckled herself in and then, as if a switch had been turned off, all at once her entire body went limp. Her head fell to her chest and her arms slid into her lap. And there she sat. Motionless, peaceful, and most importantly for Klaire, quiet. 

        “Well…” Eve said with a smile as she looked away from Trisha toward Klaire. “That seemed to woorrrrrr….” her sentence trailed off as her eyes widened for a moment, then glazed over. Her face slowly relaxed as her mouth hung open and her arms fell limp at her sides as she leaned in to stare at the queen of diamonds that Klaire was holding in front of her. 

        “Yep.” Klaire said with a deviously dominant smile “These will work just fine.” She handed Eve the keys to the car. “I trust you can drive in this state?” she asked. 

        “Yes.” came Eve’s monotone reply. 

        “Good.” Klaire said, shoving the keys into her hands. “Wake up enough to drive, but remain completely silent. Get in the car!” she demanded. She didn’t wait for Eve to get into the car, instead she climbed into the back seat, buckled herself up in a sideways fashion and spread her legs out along the back seat, leaning against the door. 

        Eve sat down a moment or two later in the driver's seat and started the car. “Drive around for an hour or two. Say nothing. Take the scenic route, just enjoy the drive for a bit before taking us back to the cabin. But say…nothing!” Klaire ordered. 

        Eve nodded and backed out of the spot before gently pulling out into the main road. The act of accelerating the car made Trisha’s head flop back against the seat, although not enough to wake her up.

        In the back seat Klaire waited a moment, looking back and forth between the two hypnotized young women, waiting for someone to say something, but both remained completely silent. “Finally!” Klaire said to herself under her breath while she pulled out one of her romance novels and flipped it open. Finally, she had peace and quiet for the first time this weekend. 

 

        Back at the cabin, Rayne had taken the opportunity to remove her clothes and stretch herself out on the couch in the living room. She pulled the hypnotized Laura along slowly by the hand and let her stand there as she undressed. And now Rayne, who was feeling rather smug and confident, sat comfortably and completely naked, on the couch while she looked up at her helpless friend. “Strip for me Laura.” she said with a smile. 

        The hypnotized blonde slowly started to move, swaying her hips and her shoulders while she moved her hands along her thighs and up to her shirt. Her eyes opened just enough to see where she was facing but her face remained slack and relaxed, without any hint of an expression. Her hands grabbed the bottom of her shift and started to lift it up, revealing her stomach as she turned around and showed off her back, pulling the shirt the rest of the way up and off. 

        Rayne watched with a bit of a smile as she let her eyes wander over Laura’s back. She had seen her naked several times this weekend alone, but yet there was still something very naughty about seeing her strip down while hypnotized. 

        Laura unzipped her jeans and started to wiggle them down her body, revealing her legs inch by inch as she slid them down, bending over to give Rayne a better view. Once her jeans were on the floor she stepped out of them and slid them away with her foot, before she began to sway to music that only she could hear once again. Spinning around to face Rayne, her expression still completely neutral, she cupped her breasts and pulled her bra down to reveal her nipples one after another, then moved her hands behind her back to unhook it and let it slide down her arms to the floor. 

        Rayne couldn’t help but blush, a mix of embarrassment and arousal, as she watched her friend stick her thumbs into the waistband of her panties and wiggle them down her body. Once she had slid them aside and stood back up, her body came to a stop as her head gently fell towards her chest and her arms fell to her sides. Her task being completed made her simply shut down like a robot whose programming was complete. 

        Rayne wasn’t aware that she had started playing with her clit while watching her friend, but as soon as the little strip tease was over she realized what she was doing. With a bit more of an embarrassed smile she motioned for Laura to come closer and to kneel. Laura responded in a slow, languid motion and knelt down in front of Rayne, the younger woman's legs on either side of her. Rayne leaned forward and cupped the older girl’s face in her hands and kissed her before pulling back while a devious smile formed. “I have a use for you, Laura.” she said as she leaned back and lowered her friend's head directly between her legs. “I’m sure you know what to do.”  

        A moment later Rayne’s eyes flew open as Laura’s tongue slid along her the folds of pussy and up along her clit. The gasp she let out was sharp and loud as her body shivered with pleasure. She let her eyes slowly close and relaxed back into the couch with a smile. “Oh yeah, that's a good girl!” she said as she settled in to enjoy the pleasure her friend was about to give her. 

To be continued…. 

        Curious what might happen when Laura wakes up from her trance, naked and cuddling with Rayne? There is a bonus scene covering that very outcome that you can find here: Queens are Wild - N.C.U. - Part 12 Bonus Scene

Thanks to Sleepygirl for doing the editing for me. If you would like to see her editing reactions to this story, and how it affected her while she was editing you can find that here: Queens are Wild 12 - Editing Banter.

Thank you so much for taking the time to read this! If you have any comments I would love to hear them! You can follow more adventures at Spirals Nightclub! You can also find bonus content on my Patreon page!

Featuring: RayneKlaireEveLaura, and Trisha

Queens are Wild - N.C.U. - Part 14
Queens are Wild - N.C.U. - Part 14 Alt Ending (Patreon Exclusive)
Queens are Wild - N.C.U. - Part 15
Queens are Wild - N.C.U. - Part 15 Alt Ending (Patreon Exclusive)


And many many more chapters to come!

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