Monday, July 13, 2026

Turnabout is Fair Play - N.C.U. - Part 5

Turnabout is Fair Play - N.C.U. - Part 5
 
Key: MD, FD, MF, FF, 
 
Description: The author finally gets to the turnabout part of the story that he started four chapters ago, as Rayne and the girls turn the tables on Josh.  
 
Cover Image made by HeroineArtAI.
 
        It had been a long day and Josh was on his way toward his dorm when his phone buzzed with a text. “What now?” he muttered under his breath with a sigh, holding his phone up to see a message from Rayne. 
        “Come to the dorm, I have a little surprise for you.” was all the message said. 
        Josh raised an eyebrow and looked at the phone. “Do I have the energy to wrangle Rayne and whatever she has planned?” he thought to himself. “Probably not but…YOLO, lets see what she wants.” he said, sending a reply to let her know he was on his way. 
        The stairs seemed extra high today and a lack of energy was just dragging him down as he tried to climb them. He was almost pulling himself up more by arm strength than actually using his legs. In other words, Josh was dead tired. 
        He finally made his way to the dorm and knocked on the door. Rayne opened it with a smile. “Come in.” she said with a warmth in her voice that was unusual for her. 

        The first thing Josh noticed was that Rayne was not alone, both Klaire and Laura were standing in the dark room. All of the lights were off but there were a few candles lit to make the room easier to navigate and give it a calming, relaxing feeling. “What’s all this?” he asked as he walked into the room, almost feeling as if he was walking into a trap of some kind. Not that he cared, it was more of an observation than anything. 
        Laura calmly moved a chair towards Josh without saying a word, while Klaire took Josh’s hand and walked him towards it. As she did, she leaned up to give him a rather intimate kiss before whispering “Sit down.” Her voice was soothing and calming which, again, stood out to Josh because that was not Klaire’s usual tone of voice. 
        Josh sat down looking up at Klaire first, then Laura, and then over to Rayne. “What’s going on?” His suspicions were rising by the second and he couldn’t help but direct them at the three girls. 
        Rayne giggled softly. “What, we can’t thank you for helping to relax us the other day?” she said as she made her way behind Josh and put her hands on his shoulders. “Can’t return the favor?” she continued as she started to massage his shoulders. 
        Josh was about to protest, but then something in his brain screamed “Shut the fuck up, idiot, and enjoy it!” This part of him didn’t speak very often, but he figured he should listen to it this time. I mean…I would. So instead he relaxed a bit and leaned back into the chair. “It just seems a bit, I don’t know, deviously planned?” he said, hoping to not offend. 
        “Devious?” Laura asked as she started to massage his right shoulder, allowing Rayne to work on his left. Her hands moved along the back of his neck, down his shoulder blade and down the upper part of this arm. “Would we do something devious to our hypnotist?” she said with a grin that made it almost completely certain that they would absolutely do something devious.
        Klaire knelt down in front of Josh to begin rubbing her arms along the front of his thighs, moving down to his knees and then along his shins. She continued squeezing up along his calves and along his sides before repeating the process slowly. “We didn’t think you’d mind the attention from three young women who were awake enough to show you their appreciation.” She gave him a suggestive smirk as she squeezed down his legs again. “We could stop…if you're uncomfortable?” 
        Josh was…to be completely honest…a little uncomfortable, and nervous. He’d never interacted with the girls in a way where they were awake and being kind to him without having been hypnotized. It was a new feeling and he didn’t want to ruin it by saying anything, but he was…decidedly nervous. “I…” he stuttered. “It feels really good. Thank you!” he said with a sigh. 
        Rayne leaned in next to him and kissed his neck. “Maybe we should help you relax in a different way?” she whispered playfully. 
        Josh turned beet red. It was one thing to play with the girls while they were hypnotized, but the idea of playing with them while they were awake was making him very nervous, very fast.. “I…um…” he stuttered again, “what did you have in mind?” 
        He felt Laura lean in and whisper in his ear. “We just thought we’d help you relax a bit more…” she trailed off, kissing his cheek. 
        Josh was now blushing profusely. If the room had been better lit you would see his face was completely red. Even in the candle light it wasn’t exactly hard to see. But before he could answer a pocket watch lowered down in front of his eyes, dangled there by Rayne. “And I have just the way to do it.” Rayne whispered in his ear as she started to make the pocket watch sway from side to side in front of his eyes. 
        The watch wasn’t very ornate, it had a grooved pattern on the front and a smooth shiny pattern on the back. But the pattern mixed with the candles in the room seemed to make the watch come alive with a blending of warm soothing colors that reflected off of it as it moved back and forth in front of his eyes. Josh shook his head for a moment but found that no matter how hard he tried he just couldn’t look away. Maybe it was the pull of the watch, or the feeling of the three young women’s hands on his body. Or maybe it was that he hadn’t taken a day to rest in nearly three months. The world may never know. 
        Rayne spoke softly into the room. “Just relax now, and watch the watch as it moves slowly in the candle light. The reflection of the candles glistening off of the watch face as it moves, back and forth, so slowly, so gently. It’s ok to relax here…now….you're with friends. You're with people that you trust, people that you have an intimate connection to now. No one will know what happens here tonight. This is all our little secret, so you can just relax. You can just rest. And let go…and enjoy the trance that is washing over your body now.” 
        Rayne noticed that Josh’s body was starting to tense up a bit, his shoulders were rising and the muscles in his arm were flexing. He was getting nervous and starting to fight it. “It’s ok to let go. It’s ok to relax…” she continued in a soft voice that seemed to fill the otherwise silent room. “Just let your mind wander. And focus on how good it feels to just watch the watch, and let everything else fade away. Let yourself breathe slowly, gently, easily. Nothing else matters right now, just the massage, just the watch, and just the idea that you need to simply let go…you need to simply relax. That is what you need more than anything. Just…let…go.” she whispered seductively. 
        Rayne smiled as she felt Josh’s shoulders slowly relax and sink. She could feel the tension drifting out of him. As she looked at the other two women in the room she couldn’t help but grin. Her devious plan was working perfectly. 
        “That’s it…doing so well. Nothing else matters, just the massage. Just the watch. Just the sound of my voice. Breathing in naturally, and exhaling just as easily. No need to think about it. No need to think about anything. You are simply here to relax, to rest, to let go, and to just…slip away. Down to a nice relaxing sleep. And all you have to do is just listen to my count down, and then just…relax. Three…” Her voice hung in the room. “Two…” She felt Josh tense up ever so slightly. “One…” His shoulders rose almost as if he was nervous. “Zero…right to sleep now.” she finished in a slightly commanding tone. 
        Josh’s sigh filled the room for a brief moment, and then his shoulders sank and his head tilted back against the chair. His eyes had long since closed and Rayne knew that he was, finally, in a trance. She grinned as she watched his head fall back while, in front of him, Klaire’s head fell to her chest. Her hands had stopped roaming up and down Josh’s legs and were instead slowly moving along the tops of his thighs, mindlessly stuck in a loop as she sank. 
        Rayne turned to Laura with a bit of a smirk, and as expected, found the blonde woman standing with her mouth open and her eyes struggling to focus. She laughed softly and leaned in, whispering into Laura’s ear. “Keep massaging…but sleep.” Laura let out a sigh as her eyes closed and her shoulders visibly sagged. For a moment her hands stopped moving but then they gently started to continue along Josh’s shoulders and neck.
        Rayne looked at the room in front of her and smiled. “This worked better than I planned.” she mused. 
        Rayne looked around the room and began whispering. “If you are in a trance, you need only listen to what is going on if I say your name. Otherwise, what is said is not for you, from this point forward. If you understand, give me a nod.” 
        She watched with a smile as the three hypnotized college students slowly nodded in unison and then relaxed again. 
        “Good. Klaire, you will keep massaging his lower half…all of his lower half. Make sure to be as pleasurable as you can be.” 
        Klaire’s head tilted up a bit and her eyes opened halfway. Her mouth was still hanging open as she looked at the sleeping form of Josh and noticed the bulge in his pants. Without much thought, or effort, she started to massage his legs again. This time, however, as she went higher up she made sure to run her hands along his bulge, slowly, seductively. Her expression remained completely blank and emotionless. But her hands told a different story. She was enjoying this, enjoying the pleasure she was giving him. She could feel his body react to her touch, react to her hands. It was intoxicating and she wanted more. 
        “Laura…” Rayne said with a smile, “do be kind enough to take over rubbing his head, neck and shoulders, please.” 
        Laura also opened her eyes just a bit and slowly moved behind Josh. She started at his upper arms and squeezed slowly up along his shoulders, pressing into his shoulder blades and along the top of his shoulders until she reached his neck. Then she started to slowly move her thumbs along his spine up his neck while her hands moved through his short, curly hair. Her hands gently scratched and massaged his scalp as if she were washing his hair, then slid down the sides of his face, the front of his neck and out to his shoulders again. The whole time her face was expressionless, mouth open and eyes completely glazed. No hint of muscle tension anywhere in her body. 
        Rayne smiled as she watched Laura massage, and then she heard something…it was the sound of a zipper. She turned with a smile to see Klaire unzipping Josh’s jeans and sliding his bulge out. Rayne just smiled as she watched Klaire take the suggestion to give Josh as much pleasure as possible in the exact way she intended her to take it. It was subtle enough that it would be thought of subconsciously as her own idea, but direct enough that it was really Rayne who had given the idea to her. 
        Josh gasped in surprise as Klaire began pleasuring him more intimately, while Rayne moved her hands along his chest and down the top of his stomach. “Josh…” she whispered. “Just relax…just let the pleasure…the relaxation move through your body. No need to worry, no need to think about anything, anything at all. Just feel the pleasure.” She loved seeing him like this, his usually calculating eyes completely closed. His confident, almost playful. smile replaced by a slack jawed, gently panting maw of a mouth. There was something strangely sexy to her about being on the other side of the hypnotic power dynamic. “Just relax…” she whispered as she leaned closer to him. “We all want this…and you…you need this.” she finished as she started to kiss him. Her lips pressed to his as her tongue slid into his mouth and along the tip of his own tongue. And yet there was next to no response at all. Just a deep inhalation and then a slow, deep sigh. He was helpless. And that sent a shiver down Rayne’s body. 
        The girls continued their tasks, their individual ways of relaxing Josh, for the next few minutes. Somewhere in his head there was a voice screaming…not in pain, not in terror, but in absolutely masculine pleasure. If he could have high fived himself he would have. But instead he just laid there, the feeling of one girl's mouth wrapped around his manhood, another's tongue sliding along his, and a third’s hands moving through his hair and his shoulders. It was the most relaxing thing he’d ever experienced. 
        Rayne smiled in the kiss as her hands made their way up and down his body. She had almost forgotten about the other girls entirely. She was so wrapped up in what she was feeling herself. It was a new experience for her, hypnotizing a guy. But at the same time she loved the turnabout of it. And she couldn’t help but smile as she felt his body shudder and tense for a moment before he started to climax under the careful attention that Klaire had been paying to his groin. She let him continue until she felt him completely relax again and then broke the kiss, smiling down at him. “Josh, just sleep…and relax. We’ll take care of cleaning up. You…just sleep.” 
        Josh sighed and relaxed back into the chair a bit more. His head rolled softly to one side and his breathing moved into a slow, steady rhythm. 
        Rayne looked down at Klaire to see that her tongue had taken care of the cleaning process all on its own. How nice of her. “Klaire…” Rayne said with a confident smile. “Nap time!” she snapped her fingers at her roommate and watched as Klaire’s body came to a stop and went limp. Her head landed right next to Josh’s groin on his thigh and her body sagged as she slowly drooled on the hypnotized young man’s jeans. 
        Rayne giggled and then looked up at Laura before moving over to her. “You can stop now.” she said softly. Laura’s massage came to a stop,and she was easily moved back towards the bed by Rayne. The smaller woman moved Laura right next to the bed and then put a single finger on her forehead and pushed her head back. “Laura…Naptime.” she said with a smile as she gave her a bit of a push and watched as Laura fell backwards onto the bed, her breasts and hair bouncing softly as she did so. 
        Rayne took a moment to survey the room. Her usually snobby and stuck up roommate was passed out and drooling next to the slowly relaxing manhood of a man that had hypnotized all three of them, and probably slept with all of them as well. Although her memory was hazy on the events of the past, that…just felt right. The man in question was completely relaxed in the middle of the room, deeply hypnotized and unaware. And their mutual bubbly friend that had helped introduce her to hypnosis was completely passed out on her bed, also deeply in a trance. 
        “Yep.” Rayne said in her own soft but sarcastic tone. “That went well!”
 
To be Concluded…
 
Curious what might have happened had things gone a different way in the girl’s dorm? Say if Rayne had a bit more of an intimate idea in mind? Something involving the girls also enjoying a bit of pleasure with their hypnotized young man? There is an alternate ending covering that topic that you can find here: Turnabout is Fair Play - Part 5 Alt Ending.
 
Real life context: 
        One of the things I was REALLY good at in college, aside from hypnosis, was shoulder massages. I have big, strong, very warm hands. And I am trained in how to give shoulder massages through a class I took. So…It wasn’t uncommon for me on a normal weekend to give at least one, if not several of the girls in our group of friends a shoulder massage. Most of them had boyfriends, but their boyfriends weren’t around all the time, and when they weren’t the girls would ask for a shoulder rub and I was more than happy to oblige! 
        One day, just before the semester started I was helping my brother's girlfriend move into her dorm. Her roommate (who is my future wife), and another girl were there (it wasn’t real life Laura, it was another girl). And as they were taking turns unpacking their crap and talking about things. I was giving the one that wasn’t occupied at the time a shoulder rub. I was super shy, but it was one of the few ways I could talk to a girl and feel confident about it. (this was before they knew I was a hypnotist. That happened a few weeks later…I think.) 
        Well when I got done, my future wife (who had a boyfriend who hadn’t returned to campus yet), decided I deserved a shoulder rub. So she started rubbing my shoulders. And then my brother’s girlfriend started rubbing my left arm, and their other friend started rubbing my right arm. So here I am, about 20, super shy, just broke up with my first girlfriend about a month earlier, very awkward and nervous, getting a massage from three 19 year old college girls, all three of which have boyfriends. For that moment… life… was good! Life was very very good! My brother's girlfriend, and the other girl would both go on to marry their respective boyfriends. My future wife would break up with her boyfriend a few months later. We started hanging out on more ‘personal’ terms not long after that, but things take time, we didn’t end up seriously dating until 15 years later.  I’m slow, and very stupid. Give me a break!
 
Thanks to Sleepygirl for doing the editing for me. If you would like to see her editing reactions to this story, and how it affected her while she was editing you can find that here: Turnabout is Fair Play - Part 5 - Editing Banter.
 
Thank you so much for taking the time to read this! If you have any comments I would love to hear them! You can follow more adventures at Spirals Nightclub! You can also find bonus content on my Patreon page!
 
Featuring: Josh, Rayne, Klaire and Laura

Turnabout is Fair Play - N.C.U. - Part 6 Alt Ending (Patreon Exclusive)

 

 

 

 

 

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