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Description: As Rayne and Klaire follow their hypnotic commands, Josh walks a very hypnotized, but not very compliant, Laura back to her dorm room.
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Josh closed the door to Rayne and Klaire’s room and smiled as he turned back to his other prize for the evening. Standing next to him with her shoulders slumped and a glazed, blank expression was Laura. She was shorter than he was by a few inches, and her curly blonde hair was messy from the rigors of her day..,and behind hypnotized. She was wearing a pair of denim shorts with a white t-shirt that was just a slight bit too tight to be proper. A royal blue sports bra was visible beneath that, supporting her mounds. All in all she was gorgeous. She was also hypnotized…and under his control.
Of course he was also standing in the middle of a college dormitory hallway with a hypnotized woman, which meant they should probably find somewhere more private. He gently took Laura by the arm, just above the elbow, and began to lead her down the hallway towards the elevator. “What floor is your room on?” he whispered quietly. The doors were notoriously thin, despite the walls being unusually thick. Funny how architecture works, isn’t it?
“Fourth floor, B-wing.” she whispered quietly as she slowly walked next to him. Her body swayed side to side, almost like she was sleep walking, without her arms up of course.
“Do you have a roommate?” he asked as they neared the central area of the dormitory, where the two wings of the building connected in a lobby and common area.
“No, single room.” she whispered.
He paused for a moment, there was an R.A. sitting at the desk by the lobby. He didn’t recognize the girl and didn’t want to risk raising any kind of suspicions as he walked a woman that looked slightly inebriated out of her dorm room. “In a moment…” he started as he leaned in to Laura to whisper into her ear, “I’m going to snap my fingers and you are going to enter a waking trance. You’ll look and act awake, but you’ll still be hypnotized. You won’t call attention to yourself. And you won’t say anything unusual that you wouldn’t normally say. But you will continue to follow my instructions, understand?”
Laura gave a very relaxed, almost passive nod. “I understand.” she whispered.
Josh sighed. “Here goes nothing.” he whispered to himself, snapping his fingers in front of Laura’s eyes.
At the snap her head jerked back a bit and then looked up at him as a devious grin formed on her face. “Oh, that was sneaky.” she said with a grin as she looked around Josh at the R.A., who was sitting at the desk reading a book. “Worried you might be caught trying to sneak a hypnotized girl back to your dorm room?” she giggled.
“Shhh!” he whispered, glancing at the R.A. and then back at Laura. “We need to get you back to your room without raising any suspicion!”
Despite her playful demeanor the words sunk into Laura’s mind like a command and she nodded slowly, looking serious for the first time. “I can handle her, don’t worry.” she said confidently as she walked towards the elevator, taking Josh’s hand as she began to pull him along.
Josh tried to act as casual as he could, which is to say he looked extremely nervous and the complete opposite of normal. And then Laura spoke up loudly. “Hey Jackie!” she said with a smile, waving at the girl at the desk.
Jackie glanced up from her book and looked at Laura. “Hey Laura. Done studying?” she asked, clearly uninterested as she went back to her book.
“Yup!” Laura said with a warm smile as she pushed the elevator button. “Also got hypnotized by Josh here, he’s taking me back to my room!” she said with a playful giggle as her eyebrows wiggled.
Josh visibly, audibly, and literally facepalmed. Hard enough to leave a red mark on his face for a few moments afterwards. He was about to explain himself to Jackie until they were both cut off with a simple “That’s nice, have fun.” as she flipped the page of her book.
The look of confusion on Josh’s face was worthy of a cartoon. He didn’t even notice as the elevator dinged and opened next to him. It was only when Laura pulled him into the elevator and the doors began to close that he was able to snap out of his shock and confusion. He looked at Laura with an expression of annoyance. “What the hell was that!?”
Laura shrugged. “She was reading. I could have walked through here naked and she wouldn't have noticed or even cared.” She gave Josh a playful, almost flirty smile.
Josh sighed in relief and then pushed Laura gently against the wall of the elevator and stared down into her eyes. “You’re going to have to pay for that, you know?” he said as his devious grin returned.
“I’m counting on it.” she replied as her expression relaxed back into a blank, hypnotic stare.
“When we get to your room, you’re going to invite me in. It will seem like the most natural thing for you to do. Understand, Laura?” Josh asked, moving his hand along the side of Laura’s face and down her neck.
“Yes…” she replied, staring back up into his eyes.
Josh tilted his head and moved in to kiss Laura… only to be interrupted by the elevator dinging as the doors opened. They were on Laura's floor, and of course there was another young woman sitting at an identical desk, reading a book.
Josh sighed as Laura quickly moved past him, holding his hand to pull him along. “Evening Cheyenne!” she shouted, way louder than necessary to say hello to someone that was ten feet away.
“Evening Laura…” came Cheyenne’s bored response. She never even bothered to look up from her book.
Josh just stared at Cheyenne in confusion as he was pulled down the hallway by Laura. He waited until they were about halfway down the hall before muttering, “The security in this place is shit.”
Laura didn’t respond. She had slipped back into her trance as they made their way down the fall. On autopilot, she pulled a key from her pocket as they reached her door and unlocked it with ease. After taking a few steps inside her room, she turned around to face Josh. He could see that her eyes were still glassy and her posture was more relaxed than he would expect, but to the untrained eye she appeared to be awake. “Thank you for walking me home.” she said with a smile.
Josh wasn’t sure if the suggestion he had given her in the elevator was going to stick or not, and he didn’t want to cause a scene so he simply smiled and nodded. “You're welcome,” he said warmly.
Laura smiled back but neither moved to enter her dorm or to invite him in. So Josh moved a bit closer to Laura and leaned into her. “I suppose…I should say good night.” he said as he leaned in to kiss her.
Laura held her position until he was just about to meet her lips and then stepped back into her room. “Why don’t you come in.” she said playfully, giving him another flirty smile.
Josh growled under his breath at being denied a second time. He was, however, at least happy that his suggestion had worked. “I’d like that.” he said in a slightly annoyed tone as he stepped into her room and closed the door behind him.
Laura stayed put, giving him a big smile as she put her hands on her hips confidently. A pose that was slightly betrayed by the glassy look in her hypnotized eyes. “I might be following a hypnotic suggestion,” she started, “but that doesn’t mean I can’t play hard to get.”
Josh gave her a slightly nervous smile. “I hope what I suggested to you is ok. I know we kind of just met and all.”
Laura shifted her position as she looked up and smiled. “Oh it’s more than ok. I've heard a lot about you, and I’m happy I got to experience your skills first hand.” she said teasingly.
“You’re still under those suggestions…aren’t you Laura?” he said, phrasing the statement as more of a command than a question.
“Yes.” Laura responded in a blank, monotone voice before it returned to her playful tone. “I am. I have been since you first put me under. Now what would someone like you…do with someone like me?” she said, taking a step closer to him.
“I have a few ideas.” he said, leaning in to Laura, yet again, to try and steal a kiss.
Laura let him get close enough that their noses were about to touch before spinning away and moving to the bed. With another playful smile she sat down on the mattress. “Is that so?” she asked, knowing how much she was driving him nuts.
Josh almost fell forward as Laura stepped away and glared at her. “Yes,” he said as he moved closer to her. Since she was now sitting he was towering over her despite not being all that much taller than she was. “Would you like a demonstration?” he asked in a tone that was becoming increasingly annoyed.
Laura continued to look up at Josh, seeming both defiant and helpless at the same time. “Oh…” she started, “thinking you can hypnotize me again…make me obey…make me do all the things that you want to do.” she said, raising an eyebrow with a slight smirk on her face, all while her glazed eyes looked up at Josh.
Josh leaned down to meet Laura’s gaze, eye to eye. “Yes. Everything…I want you to do. And I think you know what that is. It’s why you're playing hard to get, isn’t it Laura?” his voice was slipping back into its hypnotic tone.
Laura’s expression went slack for a moment as his voice tone started to echo into her mind, but she regained composure for a little bit longer. “Oh I know exactly what you want…” she said as her devious smile returned slightly. “I’m just waiting to see if you'll come and take it.”
Josh pressed a finger into Laura’s forehead, cutting her off as he whispered “Back to sleep Laura!” commandingly.
Laura’s playfully defiant expression faded instantly while her eyes slammed shut and her shoulders noticeably sagged. The only thing keeping her upright was Josh’s hand which he had moved to her shoulder to prevent her from falling over.
Josh took a long moment to admire his prize for the evening, cupping her face in his hands and pulling her closer…closer…closer…and then finally succeeding in the kiss he had been wanting for so long. He felt Laura respond to the kiss, very slowly, sluggishly, clearly hypnotized but also excited and aroused. Her tongue slowly crept between his lips to meet his, and his hands moved down her body, grabbing her white t-shirt and starting to pull it up, breaking the kiss to remove it.
Laura’s arms came up with the shirt and as it was pulled over her head and off of her body, then fell to her sides with a gentle thump while her head fell forward softly. Josh smiled and slid a finger under her chin to tilt her head up towards him. He took a moment to admire her soft, relaxed features before whispering “Good girl.” With that, he tilted her head all the way up and then gave it a slight push, letting her flop backwards onto the bed.
He watched as her chest jiggled from the fall before her body became still and passive. With a smile he moved his hands down her body, along her stomach and down to her jean shorts. He slowly undid them and slid them off of her, caressing her legs as he did so.
Laura felt a tingle go through her body as his fingertips moved along her skin, slowly caressing up her legs to her panties. She couldn’t tell what was happening, she wasn’t awake so it was more like the memory of a touch than an actual sensation. But it was enough to make her flush and moan softly as she felt her panties being pulled down her legs before they were simply… forgotten.
Josh moved up her body again, caressing and massaging her thighs, and her stomach, up to her bra. It was a sports bra and she was too deeply hypnotized for him to want to pull it off of her completely. Instead he simply pulled it up to expose her breasts. Her soft, tender mounds emerged from behind the bra and he felt her shiver as he moved his fingers around her slowly stiffening nipple.
Laura felt her body shiver in pleasure and let out a soft moan. Her entire body was tingling and excited. She was barely aware of her legs being spread tenderly. A gasp escaped her lips and she felt something, something she had desired all night, slowly slide inside of her. As soon as she felt it, what was left of her consciousness began to spiral down into pleasure, and her last conscious thought of the evening was a simple, solitary word.
“Finally!”
To Be Continued…
Curious what Klaire and Rayne were up to while all of this was happening? There is a bonus chapter dealing with their evening that you can find here: Turnabout is Fair Play - Part 3.5 Bonus Chapter.
Thanks to Sleepygirl for doing the editing for me. If you would like to see her editing reactions to this story, and how it affected her while she was editing you can find that here: Turnabout is Fair Play - Part 3 - Editing Banter.
Thank you so much for taking the time to read this! If you have any comments I would love to hear them! You can follow more adventures at Spirals Nightclub! You can also find bonus content on my Patreon page!
Laura gave a very relaxed, almost passive nod. “I understand.” she whispered.
Josh sighed. “Here goes nothing.” he whispered to himself, snapping his fingers in front of Laura’s eyes.
At the snap her head jerked back a bit and then looked up at him as a devious grin formed on her face. “Oh, that was sneaky.” she said with a grin as she looked around Josh at the R.A., who was sitting at the desk reading a book. “Worried you might be caught trying to sneak a hypnotized girl back to your dorm room?” she giggled.
“Shhh!” he whispered, glancing at the R.A. and then back at Laura. “We need to get you back to your room without raising any suspicion!”
Despite her playful demeanor the words sunk into Laura’s mind like a command and she nodded slowly, looking serious for the first time. “I can handle her, don’t worry.” she said confidently as she walked towards the elevator, taking Josh’s hand as she began to pull him along.
Josh tried to act as casual as he could, which is to say he looked extremely nervous and the complete opposite of normal. And then Laura spoke up loudly. “Hey Jackie!” she said with a smile, waving at the girl at the desk.
Jackie glanced up from her book and looked at Laura. “Hey Laura. Done studying?” she asked, clearly uninterested as she went back to her book.
“Yup!” Laura said with a warm smile as she pushed the elevator button. “Also got hypnotized by Josh here, he’s taking me back to my room!” she said with a playful giggle as her eyebrows wiggled.
Josh visibly, audibly, and literally facepalmed. Hard enough to leave a red mark on his face for a few moments afterwards. He was about to explain himself to Jackie until they were both cut off with a simple “That’s nice, have fun.” as she flipped the page of her book.
The look of confusion on Josh’s face was worthy of a cartoon. He didn’t even notice as the elevator dinged and opened next to him. It was only when Laura pulled him into the elevator and the doors began to close that he was able to snap out of his shock and confusion. He looked at Laura with an expression of annoyance. “What the hell was that!?”
Laura shrugged. “She was reading. I could have walked through here naked and she wouldn't have noticed or even cared.” She gave Josh a playful, almost flirty smile.
Josh sighed in relief and then pushed Laura gently against the wall of the elevator and stared down into her eyes. “You’re going to have to pay for that, you know?” he said as his devious grin returned.
“I’m counting on it.” she replied as her expression relaxed back into a blank, hypnotic stare.
“When we get to your room, you’re going to invite me in. It will seem like the most natural thing for you to do. Understand, Laura?” Josh asked, moving his hand along the side of Laura’s face and down her neck.
“Yes…” she replied, staring back up into his eyes.
Josh tilted his head and moved in to kiss Laura… only to be interrupted by the elevator dinging as the doors opened. They were on Laura's floor, and of course there was another young woman sitting at an identical desk, reading a book.
Josh sighed as Laura quickly moved past him, holding his hand to pull him along. “Evening Cheyenne!” she shouted, way louder than necessary to say hello to someone that was ten feet away.
“Evening Laura…” came Cheyenne’s bored response. She never even bothered to look up from her book.
Josh just stared at Cheyenne in confusion as he was pulled down the hallway by Laura. He waited until they were about halfway down the hall before muttering, “The security in this place is shit.”
Laura didn’t respond. She had slipped back into her trance as they made their way down the fall. On autopilot, she pulled a key from her pocket as they reached her door and unlocked it with ease. After taking a few steps inside her room, she turned around to face Josh. He could see that her eyes were still glassy and her posture was more relaxed than he would expect, but to the untrained eye she appeared to be awake. “Thank you for walking me home.” she said with a smile.
Josh wasn’t sure if the suggestion he had given her in the elevator was going to stick or not, and he didn’t want to cause a scene so he simply smiled and nodded. “You're welcome,” he said warmly.
Laura smiled back but neither moved to enter her dorm or to invite him in. So Josh moved a bit closer to Laura and leaned into her. “I suppose…I should say good night.” he said as he leaned in to kiss her.
Laura held her position until he was just about to meet her lips and then stepped back into her room. “Why don’t you come in.” she said playfully, giving him another flirty smile.
Josh growled under his breath at being denied a second time. He was, however, at least happy that his suggestion had worked. “I’d like that.” he said in a slightly annoyed tone as he stepped into her room and closed the door behind him.
Laura stayed put, giving him a big smile as she put her hands on her hips confidently. A pose that was slightly betrayed by the glassy look in her hypnotized eyes. “I might be following a hypnotic suggestion,” she started, “but that doesn’t mean I can’t play hard to get.”
Josh gave her a slightly nervous smile. “I hope what I suggested to you is ok. I know we kind of just met and all.”
Laura shifted her position as she looked up and smiled. “Oh it’s more than ok. I've heard a lot about you, and I’m happy I got to experience your skills first hand.” she said teasingly.
“You’re still under those suggestions…aren’t you Laura?” he said, phrasing the statement as more of a command than a question.
“Yes.” Laura responded in a blank, monotone voice before it returned to her playful tone. “I am. I have been since you first put me under. Now what would someone like you…do with someone like me?” she said, taking a step closer to him.
“I have a few ideas.” he said, leaning in to Laura, yet again, to try and steal a kiss.
Laura let him get close enough that their noses were about to touch before spinning away and moving to the bed. With another playful smile she sat down on the mattress. “Is that so?” she asked, knowing how much she was driving him nuts.
Josh almost fell forward as Laura stepped away and glared at her. “Yes,” he said as he moved closer to her. Since she was now sitting he was towering over her despite not being all that much taller than she was. “Would you like a demonstration?” he asked in a tone that was becoming increasingly annoyed.
Laura continued to look up at Josh, seeming both defiant and helpless at the same time. “Oh…” she started, “thinking you can hypnotize me again…make me obey…make me do all the things that you want to do.” she said, raising an eyebrow with a slight smirk on her face, all while her glazed eyes looked up at Josh.
Josh leaned down to meet Laura’s gaze, eye to eye. “Yes. Everything…I want you to do. And I think you know what that is. It’s why you're playing hard to get, isn’t it Laura?” his voice was slipping back into its hypnotic tone.
Laura’s expression went slack for a moment as his voice tone started to echo into her mind, but she regained composure for a little bit longer. “Oh I know exactly what you want…” she said as her devious smile returned slightly. “I’m just waiting to see if you'll come and take it.”
Josh pressed a finger into Laura’s forehead, cutting her off as he whispered “Back to sleep Laura!” commandingly.
Laura’s playfully defiant expression faded instantly while her eyes slammed shut and her shoulders noticeably sagged. The only thing keeping her upright was Josh’s hand which he had moved to her shoulder to prevent her from falling over.
Josh took a long moment to admire his prize for the evening, cupping her face in his hands and pulling her closer…closer…closer…and then finally succeeding in the kiss he had been wanting for so long. He felt Laura respond to the kiss, very slowly, sluggishly, clearly hypnotized but also excited and aroused. Her tongue slowly crept between his lips to meet his, and his hands moved down her body, grabbing her white t-shirt and starting to pull it up, breaking the kiss to remove it.
Laura’s arms came up with the shirt and as it was pulled over her head and off of her body, then fell to her sides with a gentle thump while her head fell forward softly. Josh smiled and slid a finger under her chin to tilt her head up towards him. He took a moment to admire her soft, relaxed features before whispering “Good girl.” With that, he tilted her head all the way up and then gave it a slight push, letting her flop backwards onto the bed.
He watched as her chest jiggled from the fall before her body became still and passive. With a smile he moved his hands down her body, along her stomach and down to her jean shorts. He slowly undid them and slid them off of her, caressing her legs as he did so.
Laura felt a tingle go through her body as his fingertips moved along her skin, slowly caressing up her legs to her panties. She couldn’t tell what was happening, she wasn’t awake so it was more like the memory of a touch than an actual sensation. But it was enough to make her flush and moan softly as she felt her panties being pulled down her legs before they were simply… forgotten.
Josh moved up her body again, caressing and massaging her thighs, and her stomach, up to her bra. It was a sports bra and she was too deeply hypnotized for him to want to pull it off of her completely. Instead he simply pulled it up to expose her breasts. Her soft, tender mounds emerged from behind the bra and he felt her shiver as he moved his fingers around her slowly stiffening nipple.
Laura felt her body shiver in pleasure and let out a soft moan. Her entire body was tingling and excited. She was barely aware of her legs being spread tenderly. A gasp escaped her lips and she felt something, something she had desired all night, slowly slide inside of her. As soon as she felt it, what was left of her consciousness began to spiral down into pleasure, and her last conscious thought of the evening was a simple, solitary word.
“Finally!”
To Be Continued…
Curious what Klaire and Rayne were up to while all of this was happening? There is a bonus chapter dealing with their evening that you can find here: Turnabout is Fair Play - Part 3.5 Bonus Chapter.
Thanks to Sleepygirl for doing the editing for me. If you would like to see her editing reactions to this story, and how it affected her while she was editing you can find that here: Turnabout is Fair Play - Part 3 - Editing Banter.
Thank you so much for taking the time to read this! If you have any comments I would love to hear them! You can follow more adventures at Spirals Nightclub! You can also find bonus content on my Patreon page!
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