Monday, June 22, 2026

Turnabout is Fair Play - N.C.U. - Part 4

Turnabout is Fair Play - N.C.U. - Part 4
 
Key: MD, FD, MF, FF, 
 
Description: Deciding he wants a little fun, Josh sets an ambush for Rayne. 
 
Cover Image made by HeroineArtAI.
 
        A few days had passed since Josh’s little adventure in the girl’s dorm room. He had managed to slip out of Laura’s room unnoticed, and a few little suggestions left in her mind made it so that she didn’t remember much of the evening. Just that she knew Josh and that they seemed to have a connection. The few times he had encountered her on campus since then, she would simply smile and wave but didn’t seem to have any lingering memories that would complicate things going forward. 
        The same was true of Klaire. She had been busy most of the week studying for an exam, but the few times he had seen her she didn’t mention anything at all about him having hypnotized the three of them. And she never brought up anything that happened between her and Rayne once he had left them alone. 
        Rayne, on the other hand, clearly remembered what had happened. Although they hadn’t really crossed paths since that evening, the few times he noticed her in the common areas she would make eye contact and blush profusely before diving back into whatever she was doing, or simply make a strategic exit before he could talk to her. 


        Now that exams were over and it was a quiet Saturday afternoon, Josh decided that he would pay the roommates a little visit. He knew from talking to Klaire that she was planning to hide out and read in her room for the afternoon, and that Rayne liked to go to the gym on Saturdays to try and burn off the tension from the week. This gave him an opportunity to intercept her on her way back to the dorm, when she was already tired and worn out. 
        His plan was simple. He hung out by the door to the girls dorm and waited for someone else to put in the code to get inside. Security at the door was so laughably bad that he simply walked past the young woman who was manning the desk without her so much as even acknowledging his existence. The women that he had followed in also didn’t seem to notice or care that he was there. Once inside, he made his way down the first floor hallway to the far end where the stairs were. Lucky for him the stairs were open to everyone, and, more importantly, had their own door that was unlocked and soundproof. Once he was inside the stairwell it was an easy two flights of stairs up to the third floor and, wouldn’t you know it, Klaire and Rayne’s door was exactly across the hallway from the stairs. The entire process took less than five minutes and all he had to do was crack the door open just a bit and use the reflection of the window at the end of the hallway to see down the entire hall. From there all he had to do…was wait patiently. (and for those of you reading this going “this is oddly specific” see the note at the bottom of the story!)
        A few minutes, and three false alarms later, he heard the familiar ding of the elevator and the sound of the door opening. He glanced through the door into the window’s reflection and down the hall to see a very tired Rayne slowly trudging her way back to her room. She was clearly exhausted but her wet hair implied that she had showered after her work out…or she was just super sweaty. He hoped it was the first. 
        As predicted, she didn’t even notice that the door to the stairway was open since she was too focused on getting into the room so she could lay down. She stood in front of the door and went to pull her keys out of her pocket when Josh made his move. With a speed and grace that was unusual for him, he opened the door enough to slip through, moved right up behind the young woman, put one hand around her waist to support her and one hand up to her forehead, pulling her head back and whispering “Right to sleep now Rayne!” into her ear. 
        The entire move lasted only a few seconds. Rayne barely had time to gasp before she felt herself falling back against Josh’s chest and being slowly dragged backwards with her heels dragging along the floor and into the stairway. Out of instinct she kept hold of her keys to avoid any unnecessary noise. Once they were in the stairwell he gently closed the door and then balanced Rayne against the wall so he could hold her in place. “Gotcha.” he whispered with a smile as he tilted Rayne’s head up and kissed her. 
        From Rayne’s perspective the entire thing was a blur, she had been dragging herself back to her dorm to rest and fumbling with her keys when all of a sudden she felt like she was grabbed from behind! She tried to struggle but then she heard a very familiar voice tell her to sleep…and everything just faded away. On some level she knew it had to be Josh, and that sent a shiver through her body as she leaned back against his chest and let him drag her backwards. She wasn’t even really aware of where she was being taken, the whole scene was just so…exciting in a strange way. The next thing she knew she felt herself being kissed and was more than happy to respond in kind. As she felt her tongue slide along the mystery attacker’s tongue she heard a finger snap echo through the room around her and her body came to life. One hand wrapped around the man’s torso to support herself while the other one moved behind his head to pull him closer into the kiss. There was a passion in her response. She’d been hypnotized numerous times over the course of the semester, but this…something about this was different and she liked it. 
        Josh felt her wake up from her induced slumber and respond to the kiss with an eager passion. He kept the kiss up for a few more moments before pulling back, but kept his forehead pressed against Rayne’s. “Well hello there.” he said in his best Obi-Wan impression. 
        Rayne just chuckled and rolled her eyes. “Don’t ruin the moment with bad impressions.” she snarked before giving him another soft kiss. “I was wondering if I was going to see you again.” She looked into his eyes with a warmth that Josh hadn’t experienced from Rayne since meeting her. 
        “Exam week is always a bitch,” he sighed. “Plus it took me time to figure out how to get in here without being seen.” 
        Rayne pulled back a bit in surprise. “Have you seen how bad the security is here?” she asked in confusion. 
        “Yes. Yes I have. Hence why I am here and you are my prisoner!” he said with a smirk. “Or perhaps…accomplice?” 
        Rayne raised an eyebrow curiously. “What did you have in mind?” she said as a smile formed on her face.  
        Klaire was comfortably snuggled up in her chair reading her book. Next to her was an empty coffee cup from the local store and she was wearing fuzzy pink bunny slippers and red button up pajamas, it was the perfect way to relax on a Saturday afternoon. That is, until there was a knock on the door. Her slow, frustrated inhale followed by a long, angry exhale completely changed the atmosphere of the room. She casually reached over and grabbed her bookmark, gently placed it inside the page she was on, and then forcefully slammed the book closed and set it on the bed next to her. “This had better be fucking good!” she muttered, pulling herself up and out of her chair and moving to the door. She took another breath to solidify her angry face and then turned the knob, opening the door with a very aggressive “What!?” 
        Before she could answer Josh jumped forward and wrapped one hand around Klaire’s waist and placed three fingers on her forehead, tilting her head back while dipping her body slightly backwards to make her feel off balance. As he did, he simply but commandingly said “Sleep!” 
        Klaire gasped in surprise as he rushed into the room and grabbed her. Her hands instinctively flew up to defend herself but she was too late to stop his free hand from pressing three fingers to her forehead and tilting her back. The simple but forceful command to sleep slipped into her mind without even an ounce of hesitation as she sighed and went limp in his arms. Her arms fell to her sides and swayed next to her and her head lulled back as her long brown hair swayed from the rapid movement. Finally, her head tilted to the side and her mouth fell open ever so slightly. She was, for all intents and purposes, gone.
        Rayne walked in and closed the door behind her, then whispered “Gotcha” into Klaire’s ear as she winked at Josh.
        Josh smiled and shook his head, mouthing “That’s my line!” to her silently before leaning in and whispering to Klaire. “Klaire, we’ve captured you…you are our prisoner. We have a few things we want to do with you…nothing you haven’t done before. It’s ok for you to be our captive…our helplessly sleepy captive this afternoon isn’t it?” 
        Klaire’s eyes didn’t open, she just whispered a soft, almost excited “yes” in agreement. 
        Josh smiled. “Good girl. Now you are going to stand up, still deeply hypnotized, blank and asleep.” he tilted her back up to her feet and watched as her eyes opened slightly, looking ahead but seeing nothing. “Klaire, you know that Rayne here has a crush on you. You might not know it consciously, but you do know it don’t you.” 
        Another soft yes slipped from her lips. 
        Josh leaned in and kissed Klaire as he started to unbutton her pajama top. “We’re going to leave you hypnotized…leave you blank and unaware and do things to your body. Things that I think we will all enjoy. You want that too, don’t you Klaire?” he asked as he pulled her top off of her shoulders and let it fall to the ground. 
        Klaire’s body shivered as she let out a much more audible yes, her voice almost trembling with excitement. 
        Josh smiled and turned Klaire towards Rayne as he began to slide down Klaire’s pajama pants. Rayne leaned in close and looked into her eyes. “You had fun with me last time, didn’t you?” she asked with a devious smile as Klaire answered in agreement. “Now we are going to repay the favor.” Rayne whispered before kissing Klaire deeply. 
        Klaire’s mind was, more or less, off. She was simply an observer of her own body, only feeling what was being done to her, and the pleasure that she was feeling was making her shudder inside. The idea of having been captured by her “not-boyfriend” and her roommate was exciting beyond anything she had fantasized about. And there was no way she was going to let this opportunity pass her by. She felt herself let out a soft sigh as she felt her pajama bottoms, and her panties slowly slide down her legs. 
        “Ready?” Josh asked Rayne, who nodded in reply as he tilted Klaire back and gently lifted her off the ground, grabbing her under each arm. A moment later Rayne reached down and grabbed Klaire’s ankles and lifted her legs off the ground, leaving Klaire completely suspended in the air.         
        Klaire felt herself being carried off the ground, completely helpless, no say in the matter, and completely free in a way she had always dreamed about. No input, no say, just pure pleasure. She felt herself being lowered onto her bed and then felt a pair of large, warm hands and a pair of soft, smaller hands starting to massage her body. 
        Rayne leaned in and began to kiss Klaire, sliding her tongue along her lips and gently over the tip of her tongue. Klaire, meanwhile, was in complete shutdown mode, her mind was so overloaded by the stimulation that her body didn’t even respond, she only started to pant a bit more deeply. Next to her Josh was busy massaging Klaire’s legs, moving slowly up between her legs and deeply rubbing along the inner part of her hip to stimulate her. And the flush that followed showed it was working. 
        Rayne broke the kiss and took a moment to remove her clothes. There was no sensuality to it, there was only rapid urgency as her shirt went flying, her shoes were kicked off and her shorts followed in an instant. No words were said and no time was wasted before she was right back to making out with the hypnotized Klaire. 
        Josh just smiled and simply started to unzip his pants. "It's so much easier being a guy.” he said with a smile, even though Rayne was too preoccupied to acknowledge his comment. 
        Klaire’s body was shaking now, the stimulation between her legs and the feel of her roommate's tongue along her lips was more than she could take. She was shuddering with excitement, and then she felt her legs being spread as a familiar feeling slid between them…and then slid into her. She let out a gasp and a moan, the first real sound she’d made since she had been captured. 
        Rayne broke the kiss and looked down with a smile to see Josh slowly thrusting into Klaire and squeezing along her inner thighs to stimulate her. She looked up to see him wink down at her and a devious grin formed on her face. She turned back to her now panting roommate and whispered “Klaire, I want you to stick out your tongue and lick anything…everything that is put in front of you.” 
        They both watched as Klaire swallowed hard and nodded slightly before her tongue slid between her lips. Rayne smiled at Josh and started to crawl onto the bed above Klaire and slowly crawled on all fours forward towards Josh, getting closer and closer to his face, before she met his lips and began to kiss him deeply. Her body slowly moved into position as she lowered her groin down to meet Klaire’s waiting tongue. 
        Klaire felt something warm and moist lower in front of her and, almost as if possessed, started to move her tongue along the edges of Rayne’s folds and then as deep inside as she could. Her own panting was getting deeper and she could feel her heart racing as she bucked back against Josh’s thrusts between her legs. Every thrust made her tongue move faster as her heart raced. 
        Josh was surprised by Rayne’s move, they hadn’t exactly coordinated much but this was…really exciting for him. The kiss from Rayne encouraged him to push faster into Klaire, stimulating her as much as he could so that her own passion would be transferred to Rayne. A few moments later Rayne broke the kiss, eyes fluttering from the pleasure while only the whites of her eyes were visible. She was panting and started to lean back a bit, but Josh wasn’t done with her. He grabbed her face and pulled her hard into a deep kiss. 
        The shock of the motion and the kiss made Rayne’s eyes fly open in surprise and then roll up into her head. She was too dazed to actually return the kiss and a moment later her body began to spasm as she started to orgasm and moan into Josh’s kiss. 
        Klaire felt a rush of moisture and felt Rayne’s body spasm on top of her face. She licked and sucked as hard as she could, but in the depths of her mind she realized her roommate had just orgasmed. That knowledge was like a light switch flipping in her mind as her own arousal spiked and she began to cum moments later. She moaned loudly into Rayne’s sex and then responded even more aggressively as her tongue flicked deeper inside of Rayne. 
        While Rayne moaned in mid climax Josh let her go so she could lean back and be more stable while her body spasmed. A moment later he felt Klaire spasm around his manhood and realized she was also cumming. The added pressure, the sensations and the sight of two women orgasming in front of him put him over the edge and he started to cum into Klaire. 
        Soft moans echoed through the room as all three lovers writhed in pleasure while they all tried to stay as quiet as they could at the same time. The entire fantasy had pushed so many buttons on the three of them that that was nearly impossible and a soft orgasmic moan could be heard echoing down the dormitory hallway. 
        After a few moments Rayne began to slow down and laugh a bit, releasing some of her tension. She opened her eyes and looked at Josh while she continued to gyrate over Klaire’s mouth. She opened her mouth to make an undoubtedly snarky comment but was immediately cut off. 
        “Sleep!” Josh commanded as he snapped his fingers in front of Rayne’s eyes and the redhead’s face instantly went slack while her head fell forward to her chest. Her arms fell to her sides and left her unbalanced, sending her falling to the left and moving her pelvis away from Klaire. She landed softly on the bed, dripping and naked directly above her hypnotized roommate. 
        Klaire’s tongue moved for a few more seconds after Rayne fell off of her, she tilted her head up like she was trying to find her groin to keep licking but was met with only air. She let out a long, slow sigh and lowered her eyes to look at Josh, who was still inside of her. 
        “Sleep!” Another command, another finger snap, this time in front of Klaire’s eyes. Her eyes rolled up showing off the whites of her eyes as her eyelids slid closed slowly. She just seemed to sink into the bed like she’d fallen under a spell and drifted off to sleep. 
        Josh pumped into Klaire a few more times before letting out a deep sigh and pulling out, then moving himself back to sit on Rayne’s bed on the other side of the tiny room. 
        “Well…” he said with a sigh as he relaxed for a moment, “that went well.” 
 
To Be Continued…  
 
Curious what might have happened had things gone a different way in the girl’s dorm? Say if Rayne had resisted being an accomplice and instead ended up the captive? There is an alternate ending covering that topic that you can find here: Turnabout is Fair Play - Part 4 Alt Ending.
 
Note of Stupidity: 
        So yeah… that dorm room entry plan is completely based on the real life path that I would use to sneak into the dorm room of my brother's girlfriend and my future wife (who were roommates at the time). A college that neither me, nor my brother actually attended as students. Now my brother would just call his girlfriend (who is now his wife) and she would meet him at the door. Me… Nah! I’m gonna do some spy level shit! What is described in the story is exactly how bad the security in the building was. I would just stand out by the door, wait for a group of people to come to the door and enter the door code and then just follow them in. I’d act like I was with them until we were past the usually empty security desk and then duck down the hallway to the far end where the stairs were, and then up the stairs I went. Usually I would knock on the door of my future wife's dorm room, but if she wasn’t there I would just hang out in the stairway peeking through the door at the reflection in the window to see when she was coming, usually surprising her in the same way I described Josh surprising Rayne. (Which was way easier on the girl Rayne is inspired by who was five feet tall, then it was on my five foot eleven inch tall future wife.) It was wild to say the least and never once was it lost on me that this was horrible for me to do, and the lack of security actually left the girls in the dorm very vulnerable to bad people… but since I wasn’t a bad person I would just shrug and keep doing it. 
        Sadly, September 11th happened later that year and after that it kind of felt wrong to circumvent the security like this, and I started to go through the correct guest process to come visit on campus, and pointed out the blatantly massive security hole that they had at the girls dorm.  A security hole that remained there until everyone I knew on that campus had graduated and that I have heard from other students currently living in that dormitory is still very much a ‘well known secret’. Apparently, if they close this massive security hole, then the girls can’t sneak their boyfriends in, which is strictly prohibited to have boys in the girls dorm after 9pm. 
And no, I am not going to tell you what college my wife went to. 
 
Thanks to Sleepygirl for doing the editing for me. If you would like to see her editing reactions to this story, and how it affected her while she was editing you can find that here: Turnabout is Fair Play - Part 4 - Editing Banter.
 
Thank you so much for taking the time to read this! If you have any comments I would love to hear them! You can follow more adventures at Spirals Nightclub! You can also find bonus content on my Patreon page!
 
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