Key: MD, FD, MF, FF,
Description: Rayne decides she needs to let Josh know who is in charge, which of course leads to a duel!
Cover Image made by HeroineArtAI.
Rayne sat in the lounge of the boys dormitory pretending to read a book while she covertly watched the hallway outside of the lounge. She knew Josh was due back from his shift at the computer lab and she intended to pay him a visit. For the last few days she had been thinking about everything that had happened between him, her, and her friends. One day he was hypnotizing the three of them, and the next, they were hypnotizing him. The situation was…most interesting. At least to her.
As she sat contemplating the week's events she noticed a very weary looking Josh trudge down the hallway. For some unknown reason he had volunteered to work a 14 hour shift in the computer lab twice a week. While it did get the better part of his work week out of the way, the mental and physical toll it took was quite evident on him. His eyes seemed bloodshot, his hair was a mess and his shoulders were visibly slouching. His usually neat shirt was untucked and he looked like he was going to faceplant any second.
Rayne smiled to herself. “Perfect.” she thought as she laid down the magazine she had been holding and moved into the hallway behind Josh. He had just managed to swipe his key to unlock the door when she decided to pounce! She ran down the hallway behind him as quickly as she could, caught him off guard and shoved him hard into the now open door of his dorm room.
“The fuck?!” Josh exclaimed as he fell into his dorm and, in a surprisingly graceful maneuver, did a shoulder roll and landed on his feet, crouched. He was clearly expecting to defend himself against what he could only assume was an attacker.
To his surprise Rayne, who had also fallen to the floor but far less gracefully, pulled herself back up to her feet and closed the door, locking it behind her. “Hello Hypno-Boy…” she said with a devious grin. “Ready to go back to sleep.” It was less of a question than a command.
“Rayne?” Josh asked in complete confusion “What the fuck are you doing? You could have killed me!” He slowly relaxed a bit and took stock of the room around him. To say that Josh lived a spartan lifestyle in college would be an understatement. All he really had in his dorm was a small bed that was unmade, a stool in the corner with an old laptop on it, and a pile of laundry in the corner that was either clean or dirty…he was never sure which. There was also a small nightlight in the outlet on the far wall. The entire room was only about eight feet wide and twelve feet long. “I really should have cleaned up.” he thought to himself, somewhat embarrassed. In all the time he’d been on campus he had never had anyone come to his dorm, he always met them somewhere else…for good reason.
Rayne, however, didn’t seem to care about the state of his room in the slightest. She just gave him a cocky grin as she adjusted her stance into something that made her seem like she was about to tackle him. “What’s the term they call it? Turnabout?” she asked just before charging Josh.
Josh barely had time to realize what she was doing before she slammed her shoulder into his chest and pushed…hard! “Holy shiiii!” he exclaimed as his entire body slammed down onto his bed. Rayne quickly moved her leg over his torso to straddle him and then grabbed his wrists and pinned them over his head.
“Gotcha!” she said with a devious grin. “Now who's captured whom, hmmm?” she asked, trying to hide a satisfied smile.
Josh’s expression changed to one of determination and slight annoyance as he pushed back with everything he had against Rayne’s grip. His expression quickly shifted to one of surprise and confusion. “You are freakishly strong!” he commented as he realized that he was barely able to get his arms off of the bed, and even then only for a few seconds before she pushed them back down.
Rayne grinned and leaned in to Josh, exerting her dominance in the situation. “Did you think I spent all that time in the gym jogging?” she asked playfully before giving him a small little kiss on the lips. While she did, she shifted her weight to push his arms down a bit harder and used the leverage to force his pelvis, that she was straddling, down into the bed as well.
Josh struggled against Rayne a bit more, trying to shift his pelvis up off the bed to loosen her grip, but damn was she strong! “I never really paid attention.” he admitted as he relaxed a bit to conserve his strength and think through the situation. “I’m guessing it was more the weight room, huh?”
Rayne giggled a bit as she relaxed just enough so that she wasn’t using all of her strength to pin him down. Of course it was still more than enough that if he tried to move too much she could easily stop him. “Aww, are my efforts not showing?” she teased, giving him a mocking pout before leaning down and kissing his neck softly.
Josh blushed at the attention. He was used to initiating any of his encounters with women, so this was a pleasant albeit confusing surprise. “I mean…I noticed…” he said with a smile. “But I guess I never quite thought about just how strong that would make you.” he trailed off a bit as he continued to think. “How much do you bench press?” he asked, genuinely curious but also buying himself more time in the process.
Rayne was genuinely taken aback by the question. No one had ever bothered to ask before. “Umm..bench press..I am currently at 165 lbs but I’m hoping to make 170 by the end of the month.” she admitted, slightly embarrassed.
Josh blinked in surprise. “One hundred…and seventy! Pounds?!” he asked in shock. “Holy shit! I can barely make 110!”
Rayne blushed and looked away. “Is…is that okay?” she asked, starting to feel self conscious. Not all guys could handle a girl being stronger than them. Of course other guys seem to gravitate to it…like the author *wink*.
“Are you joking?” he asked in surprise.“That’s fucking awesome!”
“Really?” Rayne said, her grip unconsciously relaxing a bit as they moved from playful banter into a semi-serious conversation.
“Hell yeah! That’s really impressive and…admittedly…kind of hot!” Josh answered before realizing what he had just said and blushing.
“Oh…” Rayne said with a smile, “I can tell you like it.” She wiggled her butt along his groin and easily along the hard on that he didn’t realize he currently had. She couldn’t help but laugh as Josh’s blush deepened, enjoying the control she had of the situation as she leaned in and kissed him again. This time it was a more intimate, slow but teasing kiss, one that let him know she was in charge of what happened this evening. “And what is it about a girl that is stronger than you…that you like? Little hypno-boy.” she asked and teased at the same time.
Josh laughed, despite being pinned to the bed he could feel Rayne’s grip loosening. “I mean…the feel of your body, strong and toned. The way you look when you're not hiding your form under baggy clothes, the confidence that comes from it… and most importantly the challenge.” he admitted honestly, leaning up lick the tip of Rayne’s nose. “Kind of like why I like smart, intelligent women as hypnotic subjects. The smarter they are, the harder it is to take them by surprise.” His smile shifted from one of nervous attempts at flattery, to a devious grin…and then he struck.
In one quick burst of energy he bucked his hips straight up and then to his left, sliding his right foot up as close to his butt as he could and then used his leg to push as hard as he could to his left in an effort to throw Rayne off of him. At the same time he jerked both of arms, which were still pinned above his head, hard to the right in an effort to throw Rayne completely off balance in an effort to turn the tables on her.
Rayne’s eyes flew open and she let out a gasp of surprise as she felt her arms being pulled one way while her torso was rapidly shifted in the other. Fortunately for her she was able to extend her right leg out and brace it against the side of the dormitory wall, preventing herself from being tossed off of her prey. “Oh, nice try!” she said with a grin before shoving her body back down onto his torso and slamming it down into the bed using her right leg for leverage. Once he hit the bed she shifted her weight to the left and used her leverage to pull her hands,and his, back into the pinned position above his head. This left her stretched over him with her butt and hips pinning and squeezing Josh to the bed, her arms extended above his head.
She had regained the physical advantage but it was clear that she needed to put an end to his struggling. “Nice try.” she repeated, glaring into his eyes. “But now it’s time you went to sleep, little hypno-boy.” Her voice lowered into its soothing, hypnotic tone. “All of your struggling, all of your resistance, has left you drained…left you tired, and relaxed. You need to let go…you want to let go. I can feel it, you can feel it.” She moved her head a bit closer to hers. “You were so tired when you got home…it was such a long…long day…and now you just want to relax. Just want to sleep.”
Josh struggled against Rayne even as she pinned him more aggressively this time. He looked up at his wrists to see if he could figure out a way to pull out of her grip, but then she started talking, low and gentle. He blinked and looked at Rayne and found his eyes locking onto hers and listening, partly out of confusion, partly out of a desire to just relax. After all, she was right, he had had a very, very long day.
Rayne felt him start to relax, the confusion on his face made the whole situation all the more exciting for her. “You thought you would throw me off, thought you could turn the tables…but part of what you really enjoy is when…you simply can’t. When no matter how much you struggle, or how much you fight, you simply can’t win.” She leaned in and began to whisper in his ear. “Give in, my little hypno-boy. You deserve to lose this one…deserve to just relax, and be captured for a while.”
Josh blinked and tried to refocus himself. He wasn’t planning on going down without a fight, but that fight was quickly draining from him. “I don’t go down.” he tried to struggle again, but she refused to budge. “Not this easily.”
Rayne kissed his cheek with a smile and looked down into his eyes. “Oh, this wasn’t easy.” she said softly as she gave his lips a soft little peck. “I had to follow you…I had to watch you…I had to learn your schedule. I had to wait…and sneak up on you…” she said seductively. All of which was technically true, but also only took her a total of about five minutes. It’s not like any of it was a secret, or that she was waiting for hours. She knew when to show up.
Her soothing voice made Josh relax just a bit more as he was distracted by the kiss.
“And it’s not like…any girl…could overpower you.” she said with a smile, continuing to stare directly into his eyes. “I worked my ass off for two years to get to this strength. No one else could do this…no one else could pin you down, and make your resistance just… fade away. But I have one more ace up my sleeve. Do you want to know what that is… little hypno-boy?” she asked as she teasingly leaned in closer to him.
Josh blinked, trying to readjust his eyes to focus on Rayne. With her being so close he was struggling to keep his vision clear, or maybe he was just more tired than he realized. “What’s… what's that?” he stammered.
Rayne’s face took on a slightly more stern but somehow still gently seductive look as she smiled and whispered. “I know how to hypnotize… you.”
Josh’s eyes opened a little wider as he struggled to form a reply, but he was more out of his element than he realized. His reply, of course, was cut off.
“Shhhhh.” Rayne whispered with a smile. “Just take a nap…just got to sleep, little hypno-boy. No need to think, just sink…down to sleep…Three…” she started to count in a slow, seductive tone. “Two…” she leaned in a bit closer to him. “One…” she pressed her lips to his for a moment to add in one last distraction, before pulling back and whispering. “Sleep… deep… deep… Sleep now Josh.” she whispered, and in a very quick motion let go of Josh’s wrist with her left hand and moved it in front of his face to snap her fingers. “Sleep!” she commanded.
Josh’s mind was a blur. The counting, the kiss, all of it had taken him completely by surprise, so much so that he barely heard what Rayne had said. And then there was a finger snap and his attention was fully focused on that, and then the word ‘sleep’ slipped right past his defenses. He let out a soft sigh and relaxed into the bed, his eyes rolling up into his head as he simply went loose with Rayne on top of him.
Rayne smiled as she watched and felt him slip away into a trance beneath her. “Such a good little hypno-boy.” she whispered as she loosened her grip and sat up, leaning her butt onto his groin and rubbing her butt along the hard-on that would soon be released from his jeans. “I have a few…” she paused to wiggle against his groin again, “things…I want to do with you. But you don’t mind…you want this…don’t you, Josh?” she asked in a seductive voice as she started to slide her hands along his chest.
“Uh… huh.” came the very timid and shy response from Josh.
Rayne smiled as she moved backwards and started to undo his jeans. “Oh I know you do.” she said with a giggle as she slipped her hand into his jeans. “After all, turnabout is fair play!”
The End… For now.
Curious what might have happened had Josh managed to turn the tables on Rayne? If he would have been able to make her end up in a helpless trance on his bed? There is an alternate ending covering that topic that you can find here: Turnabout is Fair Play - Part 6 Alt Ending.
Thanks to Sleepygirl for doing the editing for me. If you would like to see her editing reactions to this story, and how it affected her while she was editing you can find that here: Turnabout is Fair Play - Part 6 - Editing Banter.
Thank you so much for taking the time to read this! If you have any comments I would love to hear them! You can follow more adventures at Spirals Nightclub! You can also find bonus content on my Patreon page!
Featuring: Josh, Rayne,
To his surprise Rayne, who had also fallen to the floor but far less gracefully, pulled herself back up to her feet and closed the door, locking it behind her. “Hello Hypno-Boy…” she said with a devious grin. “Ready to go back to sleep.” It was less of a question than a command.
“Rayne?” Josh asked in complete confusion “What the fuck are you doing? You could have killed me!” He slowly relaxed a bit and took stock of the room around him. To say that Josh lived a spartan lifestyle in college would be an understatement. All he really had in his dorm was a small bed that was unmade, a stool in the corner with an old laptop on it, and a pile of laundry in the corner that was either clean or dirty…he was never sure which. There was also a small nightlight in the outlet on the far wall. The entire room was only about eight feet wide and twelve feet long. “I really should have cleaned up.” he thought to himself, somewhat embarrassed. In all the time he’d been on campus he had never had anyone come to his dorm, he always met them somewhere else…for good reason.
Rayne, however, didn’t seem to care about the state of his room in the slightest. She just gave him a cocky grin as she adjusted her stance into something that made her seem like she was about to tackle him. “What’s the term they call it? Turnabout?” she asked just before charging Josh.
Josh barely had time to realize what she was doing before she slammed her shoulder into his chest and pushed…hard! “Holy shiiii!” he exclaimed as his entire body slammed down onto his bed. Rayne quickly moved her leg over his torso to straddle him and then grabbed his wrists and pinned them over his head.
“Gotcha!” she said with a devious grin. “Now who's captured whom, hmmm?” she asked, trying to hide a satisfied smile.
Josh’s expression changed to one of determination and slight annoyance as he pushed back with everything he had against Rayne’s grip. His expression quickly shifted to one of surprise and confusion. “You are freakishly strong!” he commented as he realized that he was barely able to get his arms off of the bed, and even then only for a few seconds before she pushed them back down.
Rayne grinned and leaned in to Josh, exerting her dominance in the situation. “Did you think I spent all that time in the gym jogging?” she asked playfully before giving him a small little kiss on the lips. While she did, she shifted her weight to push his arms down a bit harder and used the leverage to force his pelvis, that she was straddling, down into the bed as well.
Josh struggled against Rayne a bit more, trying to shift his pelvis up off the bed to loosen her grip, but damn was she strong! “I never really paid attention.” he admitted as he relaxed a bit to conserve his strength and think through the situation. “I’m guessing it was more the weight room, huh?”
Rayne giggled a bit as she relaxed just enough so that she wasn’t using all of her strength to pin him down. Of course it was still more than enough that if he tried to move too much she could easily stop him. “Aww, are my efforts not showing?” she teased, giving him a mocking pout before leaning down and kissing his neck softly.
Josh blushed at the attention. He was used to initiating any of his encounters with women, so this was a pleasant albeit confusing surprise. “I mean…I noticed…” he said with a smile. “But I guess I never quite thought about just how strong that would make you.” he trailed off a bit as he continued to think. “How much do you bench press?” he asked, genuinely curious but also buying himself more time in the process.
Rayne was genuinely taken aback by the question. No one had ever bothered to ask before. “Umm..bench press..I am currently at 165 lbs but I’m hoping to make 170 by the end of the month.” she admitted, slightly embarrassed.
Josh blinked in surprise. “One hundred…and seventy! Pounds?!” he asked in shock. “Holy shit! I can barely make 110!”
Rayne blushed and looked away. “Is…is that okay?” she asked, starting to feel self conscious. Not all guys could handle a girl being stronger than them. Of course other guys seem to gravitate to it…like the author *wink*.
“Are you joking?” he asked in surprise.“That’s fucking awesome!”
“Really?” Rayne said, her grip unconsciously relaxing a bit as they moved from playful banter into a semi-serious conversation.
“Hell yeah! That’s really impressive and…admittedly…kind of hot!” Josh answered before realizing what he had just said and blushing.
“Oh…” Rayne said with a smile, “I can tell you like it.” She wiggled her butt along his groin and easily along the hard on that he didn’t realize he currently had. She couldn’t help but laugh as Josh’s blush deepened, enjoying the control she had of the situation as she leaned in and kissed him again. This time it was a more intimate, slow but teasing kiss, one that let him know she was in charge of what happened this evening. “And what is it about a girl that is stronger than you…that you like? Little hypno-boy.” she asked and teased at the same time.
Josh laughed, despite being pinned to the bed he could feel Rayne’s grip loosening. “I mean…the feel of your body, strong and toned. The way you look when you're not hiding your form under baggy clothes, the confidence that comes from it… and most importantly the challenge.” he admitted honestly, leaning up lick the tip of Rayne’s nose. “Kind of like why I like smart, intelligent women as hypnotic subjects. The smarter they are, the harder it is to take them by surprise.” His smile shifted from one of nervous attempts at flattery, to a devious grin…and then he struck.
In one quick burst of energy he bucked his hips straight up and then to his left, sliding his right foot up as close to his butt as he could and then used his leg to push as hard as he could to his left in an effort to throw Rayne off of him. At the same time he jerked both of arms, which were still pinned above his head, hard to the right in an effort to throw Rayne completely off balance in an effort to turn the tables on her.
Rayne’s eyes flew open and she let out a gasp of surprise as she felt her arms being pulled one way while her torso was rapidly shifted in the other. Fortunately for her she was able to extend her right leg out and brace it against the side of the dormitory wall, preventing herself from being tossed off of her prey. “Oh, nice try!” she said with a grin before shoving her body back down onto his torso and slamming it down into the bed using her right leg for leverage. Once he hit the bed she shifted her weight to the left and used her leverage to pull her hands,and his, back into the pinned position above his head. This left her stretched over him with her butt and hips pinning and squeezing Josh to the bed, her arms extended above his head.
She had regained the physical advantage but it was clear that she needed to put an end to his struggling. “Nice try.” she repeated, glaring into his eyes. “But now it’s time you went to sleep, little hypno-boy.” Her voice lowered into its soothing, hypnotic tone. “All of your struggling, all of your resistance, has left you drained…left you tired, and relaxed. You need to let go…you want to let go. I can feel it, you can feel it.” She moved her head a bit closer to hers. “You were so tired when you got home…it was such a long…long day…and now you just want to relax. Just want to sleep.”
Josh struggled against Rayne even as she pinned him more aggressively this time. He looked up at his wrists to see if he could figure out a way to pull out of her grip, but then she started talking, low and gentle. He blinked and looked at Rayne and found his eyes locking onto hers and listening, partly out of confusion, partly out of a desire to just relax. After all, she was right, he had had a very, very long day.
Rayne felt him start to relax, the confusion on his face made the whole situation all the more exciting for her. “You thought you would throw me off, thought you could turn the tables…but part of what you really enjoy is when…you simply can’t. When no matter how much you struggle, or how much you fight, you simply can’t win.” She leaned in and began to whisper in his ear. “Give in, my little hypno-boy. You deserve to lose this one…deserve to just relax, and be captured for a while.”
Josh blinked and tried to refocus himself. He wasn’t planning on going down without a fight, but that fight was quickly draining from him. “I don’t go down.” he tried to struggle again, but she refused to budge. “Not this easily.”
Rayne kissed his cheek with a smile and looked down into his eyes. “Oh, this wasn’t easy.” she said softly as she gave his lips a soft little peck. “I had to follow you…I had to watch you…I had to learn your schedule. I had to wait…and sneak up on you…” she said seductively. All of which was technically true, but also only took her a total of about five minutes. It’s not like any of it was a secret, or that she was waiting for hours. She knew when to show up.
Her soothing voice made Josh relax just a bit more as he was distracted by the kiss.
“And it’s not like…any girl…could overpower you.” she said with a smile, continuing to stare directly into his eyes. “I worked my ass off for two years to get to this strength. No one else could do this…no one else could pin you down, and make your resistance just… fade away. But I have one more ace up my sleeve. Do you want to know what that is… little hypno-boy?” she asked as she teasingly leaned in closer to him.
Josh blinked, trying to readjust his eyes to focus on Rayne. With her being so close he was struggling to keep his vision clear, or maybe he was just more tired than he realized. “What’s… what's that?” he stammered.
Rayne’s face took on a slightly more stern but somehow still gently seductive look as she smiled and whispered. “I know how to hypnotize… you.”
Josh’s eyes opened a little wider as he struggled to form a reply, but he was more out of his element than he realized. His reply, of course, was cut off.
“Shhhhh.” Rayne whispered with a smile. “Just take a nap…just got to sleep, little hypno-boy. No need to think, just sink…down to sleep…Three…” she started to count in a slow, seductive tone. “Two…” she leaned in a bit closer to him. “One…” she pressed her lips to his for a moment to add in one last distraction, before pulling back and whispering. “Sleep… deep… deep… Sleep now Josh.” she whispered, and in a very quick motion let go of Josh’s wrist with her left hand and moved it in front of his face to snap her fingers. “Sleep!” she commanded.
Josh’s mind was a blur. The counting, the kiss, all of it had taken him completely by surprise, so much so that he barely heard what Rayne had said. And then there was a finger snap and his attention was fully focused on that, and then the word ‘sleep’ slipped right past his defenses. He let out a soft sigh and relaxed into the bed, his eyes rolling up into his head as he simply went loose with Rayne on top of him.
Rayne smiled as she watched and felt him slip away into a trance beneath her. “Such a good little hypno-boy.” she whispered as she loosened her grip and sat up, leaning her butt onto his groin and rubbing her butt along the hard-on that would soon be released from his jeans. “I have a few…” she paused to wiggle against his groin again, “things…I want to do with you. But you don’t mind…you want this…don’t you, Josh?” she asked in a seductive voice as she started to slide her hands along his chest.
“Uh… huh.” came the very timid and shy response from Josh.
Rayne smiled as she moved backwards and started to undo his jeans. “Oh I know you do.” she said with a giggle as she slipped her hand into his jeans. “After all, turnabout is fair play!”
The End… For now.
Curious what might have happened had Josh managed to turn the tables on Rayne? If he would have been able to make her end up in a helpless trance on his bed? There is an alternate ending covering that topic that you can find here: Turnabout is Fair Play - Part 6 Alt Ending.
Thanks to Sleepygirl for doing the editing for me. If you would like to see her editing reactions to this story, and how it affected her while she was editing you can find that here: Turnabout is Fair Play - Part 6 - Editing Banter.
Thank you so much for taking the time to read this! If you have any comments I would love to hear them! You can follow more adventures at Spirals Nightclub! You can also find bonus content on my Patreon page!
Featuring: Josh, Rayne,
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