Spirals Nightclub: Queens are Wild - N.C.U.

Queens are Wild - N.C.U. - Part 10

Key: FD, MC, FF

Description: Rayne slips out of the shower to discover Trisha hypnotizing her roommate in the backyard. Well that just won’t do, now will it?

Cover Image made by HeroineArtAi

Rayne slowly exited the shower and started to dry herself off, slowly rubbing the towel along her curves while taking a moment to close her eyes and feel just how soft, just how fresh the towel felt. And of course there was always that special smell. It was a little pleasure of hers.

Sitting in the tub next to her were Eve and Laura, each on either end of the tub. Eve’s head was leaning against the wall to her left, her wet hair stuck to her chest and shoulders while her hands floated gently in the water that had pooled in the tub. On the opposite end, Laura leaned against the wall with one arm on the side of the tub and the other across her lap. Her mouth hung open ever so slightly as her soaked hair created a bit of a pillow behind her. Both girls were completely asleep, allowing their chests to rise and fall gently with each breath. Which was, of course, a rather lovely sight given that both of them were still completely naked.

Rayne admired her handiwork as she got herself dressed, a pleased smile on her lips as she took a moment to dry her hair before turning to her friends.

She moved to the side of the tub and knelt down, speaking to both Eve and Laura soothingly. “You two will stay here to sleep and rest for a while. When you do wake up you will wake the other, if you are the first to awaken. You will stay in a deep, hypnotic sleep, finish your shower, get nice and clean, and then get yourselves dressed and go into the bedroom. Once you are there you will awaken and amuse yourselves in whatever way you might like. But you will not even think about leaving the room until I come and get you later. Understand, ladies?”

Rayne watched as the two girls gave her sleepy nods and continued to relax, sinking even deeper as they did. Laura’s head rolled softly to the side, resting against her shoulder, as Eve’s head bobbed and fell forward gently to rest on her chest.

Satisfied with her most recent conquests Rayne exited the bathroom quietly, careful not to wake her slumbering victims, and moved into the living room to see what Klaire and Trisha had found to amuse themselves. She found the two of them sitting outside facing away from the glass door leading to the back yard, both sitting on lawn chairs and enjoying a small fire that was going in the firepit. Instead of heading out immediately she decided that she would sit back and see how things unfolded.

“So…” Trisha started with a playful and energetic grin, “now that you’ve had a chance to be hypnotized a few times, what do you think of it?” She was genuinely curious but also trying to start up a conversation that might lead to something a bit more…playful.

Klaire rolled her eyes at first, but couldn’t stop herself from blushing. “It’s been…interesting, I have to admit, I never thought I’d enjoy hypnosis.” she added, leaning back in her chair and crossing her legs.

“Oh, and why is that?” Trisha asked, leaning in closer, eager to hear her answer.

“Well, you know, it has a kind of pop culture feel of being something that only affects those who are weak minded. Who are stupid, I guess.”

Trisha smiled. “And you're not stupid.” she said playfully.

Klaire tilted her head and glared at Trisha. “No, Trisha, I’m not stupid. I’ve always gotten straight A’s and always been in control!” she said with a huff.

“But there is something about it that gets to you, isn’t there?” Trisha said with a very teasing and knowing smile. “It’s the power…it’s the control. It’s the ability to be taken by someone even though you are in control of yourself.”

Klaire blushed and turned her head, attempting to hide her smile. “Something like that, yeah.” She took a moment to center herself before responding. “What about you? What is it that attracts you to this…hobby.”

Trisha smiled as she sat up in her chair and turned to look at Klaire. “Oh it’s the control for me as well. Only I can be on both sides. I can be the one to fall…” her voice trailed off as she twisted her body and reached into her pocket, “or the one to make you fall.” she finished with a devious smile.

With a smooth, gentle motion Trisha held a small crystal necklace directly in front of Klaire’s eyes. It wasn’t all that fancy, just one of those lucky crystals they sell just about everywhere for a few dollars. But Klaire didn’t know that. All Klaire knew was that someone who knew how to hypnotize her was holding a pendant in front of her eyes, and despite herself she focused on it. “What are you doing?” Klaire asked with a hint of nervousness in her voice.

“What do you think I’m doing, Klaire?” Trisha said, failing miserably to hide a smile. “I’m hypnotizing you.” The crystal pendant started to sway back and forth slowly before Klaire’s eyes.

Inside the cabin Rayne’s heart skipped a beat as she slowly positioned herself to see Klaire through the window, but not the pendant. After all, she didn’t really want to go under herself. At least not right now.

Klair’s eyes naturally started to follow the crystal pendant as it swung gently before her. “Why would you…” she trailed off, letting her eyes move side to side with the pendant for a moment. She shook her head to clear it, closing her eyes for a moment and then opening them, only to instantly start following the pendant again. “I’m stronger than you…” she said defiantly, despite the relaxation creeping into her voice.

“That’s why you're going to fall for me Klaire.” Trisha said in an excited but melodic tone. “Because you are strong…because you are smart…because you are independent. You see, Klaire, society…pop culture…has it all wrong. Being hypnotized doesn’t mean that you're stupid, a stupid person can't really be hypnotized. They have no imagination, no creativity, no agency. Hypnosis requires imagination, requires intelligence, and requires the will to use it. You have those things don’t you Klaire?” Trisha said with a knowing smile. She had backed Klaire into a corner, she had to either admit she had everything that would allow Trisha to hypnotize her, or admit to being too stupid to be hypnotized. I think we all know how this is going to end.

Klaire scrunched up her face for a moment as if the thoughts wrestling in her head were causing her physical pain. She knew Trisha had trapped her. Under normal circumstances she’d be able to find a loophole. After all, it was what she did best. But as her eyes followed the crystal side to side, her thoughts struggled to form. And as her face relaxed she slowly admitted that yes…she was smart. And yes, she did have an imagination. And as she did she felt as if a weight had been lifted from her and felt her shoulders sag ever so slightly.

Trisha smiled. “I knew that would be your answer. I know that this not only makes you relax, but it also excites you…doesn't it Klaire?”

Klaire blushed as she struggled to tense her body, but despite her best efforts the most she could manage was to slightly shrug her shoulders before they simply sagged even further than they had before. “Yes.” she whispered. And in the back of her mind she felt as if something had turned off, some part of her stubborn nature had been put to sleep with that admission.

Trisha smiled. “Of course it does.” she said confidently. “I’ve seen those books that you brought, the ones you thought you had hidden. Vampire novels, other romance novels where the heroine…the person you take on the role of as you read…is always controlled, compelled by someone stronger than she is. It’s not that she’s weak, it’s that she found someone else who was stronger. And that strength breeds submission, just like you are submitting to me…now, aren’t you Klaire?”

From inside the cabin, Rayne watched as Klaire swallowed just before her mouth fell open, all while her eyes still followed the crystal that was swinging side to side before her. But her eyes were starting to droop. They seemed unfocused, they seemed just a bit glazed. She was falling into a trance. And that realization sent a shiver through Rayne’s body as she slowly reached into her pocket and felt her fingers slide along the playing cards that were still hidden there. She watched as her normally gruff and obnoxious roommate slowly nodded while she slipped even deeper into a trance. A sight that Rayne was very much discovering that she was enjoying, even more than she had originally anticipated.

“That’s right Klaire, there is something so sexy, so arousing, so deeply, completely compelling about simply slipping away for someone that you find to be strong and confident. Someone that arouses you. Someone that you feel could simply put you under their spell, like a vampire or a wizard…and no matter how strong you were…you simply couldn’t resist. It’s what you always fantasized about, isn’t it Klaire?”

Klaire’s mouth moved as if she was going to respond, but nothing came out. So she just nodded her head in response, eyes still locked on the pendant swaying back and forth before her eyes.

Trisha leaned in with a very confident, very devious smile. “Time for you to fall under that spell Klaire…right…now.” She snapped her fingers between Klaire’s face and the pendant she was holding.

Rayne watched as Klaire gasped in surprise while her eyes widened and her body tensed for just a split second, just before she completely collapsed back into her chair. Her body went completely limp and her head fell to her chest and the gentle impact of her back hitting the chair sent her long brown hair fluttering around her face, framing it nicely. To her surprise, Rayne’s own head bobbed and her eyes closed as she drifted into a light trance for a moment before catching herself and snapping out of it. “You might be stronger than her…” Rayne started as she stood up and pulled the queen of spades from her pocket, “but you’re not stronger than me!” She stood up and moved to the glass door and slid it open, stepping out into the back yard.

Trisha jumped in surprise at the sound of the glass door sliding open and Rayne stepping outside, of course Klaire didn’t so much as flinch. “You’re just in time!” Trisha exclaimed with a grin. “I just put her out!” She motioned to Klaire’s hypnotized form on the chair next to her.

“I know.” Rayne said, striding confidently up to Trisha. Rayne’s close proximity made the normally taller woman have to look up at her, giving Trisha a feeling of being small, being… weak. “I was watching from inside. I liked the part about her wanting to submit to someone stronger, someone more…confident and powerful.” Her tone was almost dominant in the way she spoke.

Trisha blushed. “I knew she had a thing for magic and monsters, so…I figured why not use it to put her under a spell.”

Rayne smiled, “Oh I couldn’t agree more.” She glanced down at Klaire and then quickly over to Trisha, fast enough to make her red hair splay out around her and creating a rather impressive display. “Your turn!” she said, holding up the queen of spades directly in front of Trisha’s eyes.

As the card filled her vision, Trisha’s eyes widened and she struggled to look away. The more she tried, the more the card drew her in, pulling at her mind. “Oh…that’s not…” she started before her eyes rolled up into her head. Her eyelids fluttered for a moment before she let out a sigh and went completely limp all at once. Had it not been for Rayne’s quickness Trisha would have fallen off of her seat. Fortunately, Rayne managed to grab her friendly rival's shoulder and give her a gentle pull so she ended up flopping onto the chair behind her. Much like Klaire was on her other side.

“Alright ladies…” she began with a very devious smile, “time to show you who’s really in charge!”

Some time later the sound of a high pitched moan echoed through the small forest. In the back of the cabin, nestled in the middle of nowhere, stood Rayne, her head tipped back as she moaned softly. Before her were Klaire and Trisha, both topless and on their knees, with their heads between her legs, slowly sliding their tongues along either side of her vagina. “Who is in charge?“ she moaned.

“You are, mistress…” the two girls responded in almost perfect unison.

And then another moan echoed through the forest, a much louder moan of pleasure from a very aroused Rayne, who, it seemed, was very much the most powerful woman in the cabin. At least for now.

To be Continued…

Curious what might have happened had Trisha gotten the upper hand on Rayne? You can find an alternate ending for this chapter here: Queens are Wild - N.C.U. - Part 10 Alt. Ending

Thanks to Sleepygirl for doing the editing for me. If you would like to see her editing reactions to this story, and how it affected her while she was editing you can find that here: Queens are Wild - Editing Banter.

Thank you so much for taking the time to read this! If you have any comments I would love to hear them! You can follow more adventures at Spirals Nightclub! You can also find bonus content on my Patreon page!

Featuring: Rayne, Klaire, Eve, Laura, and Trisha