Wednesday, April 30, 2025

Queens are Wild - N.C.U. - Part 9

Queens are Wild - N.C.U. - Part 9

Key: FD, MC, FF

Description:  With the game of Truth or Dare over, the girls split up to enjoy their afternoon while Rayne sets out to enjoy them.

Cover Image made by HeroineArtAi

        Rayne sat in one of the bedrooms quietly taking stock of where everyone had gone. She glanced out the window to see Klaire and Trisha outside, talking on the porch, while Trisha struggled to light a small fire in the firepit. Klaire laughed in her usual superior way as she watched the older woman struggle with basic survival skills. “That should keep you two occupied for a while.” she thought to herself as she moved to the bedroom door and slowly peeked out. 

        The hallway was empty and dark since the lights were all off, but in the distance she could see Eve sitting on the couch, engrossed in a book. She had the usual look of an intent reader, the kind that would render her oblivious from noticing anything else happening around her. It was an ideal situation. 

        “Now where is…” she started, just as the other bedroom door opened and Laura emerged, wearing nothing but a bathrobe and shaking out her hair as she stepped into the bathroom and closed the door behind her. “Perfect!” Rayne thought with a grin as she palmed her stack of cards and smiled. “Time for a little fun.” she whispered. 

        Rayne made her way to the bathroom door, carefully keeping an eye on Eve to make sure she was still engrossed in her book, and waited for the sound of the water to come from the shower. She grinned to herself as she listened carefully and finally heard the sounds of a person climbing into the shower and pulling the curtain closed behind them. And as an added bonus, Laura started to sing softly to herself. It wasn’t really words so much as vocalizations, notes sung without structure, Rayne had to admit it was actually quite beautiful to listen to. 

        Rayne bit her tongue and carefully twisted the doorknob as quietly as possible. The door slowly pushed open and she started to sneak in, unfortunately for her she wasn’t quiet enough. “Is someone there?” Laura asked from inside the shower. 

        “Hey, it’s me.” Rayne said, cursing under her breath and pulling out Laura’s queen of hearts card, ready to pounce. But to her surprise Laura was remarkably calm. 

        “What’s up?” she asked as her silhouette moved against the shower curtain and the shadow of her arms began to wash her chest. 

        “I was…”  Rayne hesitated, she hadn’t bothered to come up with a reason she would be in there. She had assumed she wouldn’t need one. “I was…”  she glanced at the countertop and saw Laura’s brush and hair ties as an idea formed  in her mind. “I was hoping I could snag my brush, my hair is kind of messy.” she said sheepishly.

        “Go for it!” Laura responded energetically as her silhouette bent down to wash her legs. 

        Instead of pretending to reach for the brush, Rayne found that she couldn’t look away from Laura’s silhouette. She had never really seen a woman shower like this before and it was much more…captivating than she expected. She shook her head to regain her composure. “Thanks!” she said, opening a drawer as a distraction, then slowly closing it. She took a few steps to make it sound like she was leaving the room, then closed the door and crouched down so her own silhouette wouldn’t give her away. 

        Laura didn’t skip a beat and continued to wash herself, sliding her hands along her legs and up along her torso and breasts, stretching out and showing off her figure in the process.  All while Rayne stared, transfixed on the silhouette in the shower. 

        And then Laura started to wash her hair, running the water over her face and her head, and turning around to let the water flow down her back. “This is my shot.” Rayne thought to herself, as she moved closer to the shower, Laura’s singing gently echoing through the room and over the sounds of water splashing down onto the floor beneath her. She reached out to grab the curtain only to realize that she was…well…dressed. Like, completely dressed. And if she didn’t want to end up soaked, she should probably change that. So, as quietly as she could, she slowly pulled her top over her head, exposing her fitted sports bra. She dropped her shirt to the floor while Laura’s singing stopped as she stuck her face under the water and let it flow down her face and chest. 

        Her jeans were next as she carefully unbuckled them and lowered them quietly to the floor, careful to not let the belt or one of the buttons hit the floor and give her away. She knelt on the floor and slid the card out of her jeans pocket and placed it on the counter. She then grabbed her sports bra and pulled it over her head, freeing her breasts and taking a slow, deep breath to calm herself. 

        Laura pulled her head out from under the water and began singing again as she slowly continued to lather, rinse, and repeat. Meanwhile, Rayne gently hooked her thumbs into the waistband of her panties and slowly pulled them down her legs. She was ready to strike. She scooped up the card and moved quietly to the shower, crouching low to the ground to avoid being seen, and waiting for just the right moment. 

        After a few tense moments, she noticed that Laura had begun to rinse her hair, she could see her head tipped back as the water flowed down the back of her head and down her long blonde hair before hitting the ground. Her singing had stopped and she seemed to be completely relaxed and at peace in the shower. It was the perfect opportunity to strike. 

        In a quick, fluid motion Rayne grabbed the curtain and stood up, pulling it aside and holding the card up in front of Laura’s face, careful to make sure it didn’t get wet. 

        Laura’s eyes snapped open in shock and she was about to let out a scream when her eyes locked onto the card before her. Her attempt at a scream faded away and was replaced by a long, drawn out sigh. Her hands fell limply to her sides as her shoulders slumped and her expression faded to nothing while she stared vacantly at the card. 

        Rayne couldn’t help but smile. “Gotcha!” she said arrogantly as she quickly deposited the card on the counter and slid into the shower with Laura, pulling the curtain closed behind her. 

        In front of her was a gorgeous sight. A completely naked Laura, her breasts completely exposed as the water trickled off of her skin and dripped gently down her form. Rayne didn’t know what to do first, but ultimately just let herself relax while her hands slid over Laura’s warm, wet body. Finally, she leaned in and slid her tongue slowly along the older woman’s nipple, kissing up her neck as she whispered “You’re beautiful.” into Laura’s ear. 

        Laura didn’t respond, she just stared vacantly ahead as her mouth slowly fell open and the sound of the water gently dripping down her body echoed in the shower. Rayne smiled. “I love seeing you like this. Helpless and open.” she whispered before pulling her entranced friend into a slow, deep kiss. Laura didn't really respond to the kiss, she was too deeply hypnotized, too blank. But that didn’t really matter to Rayne. Seeing her face and body completely slack the whole time made things even sexier than if she had responded. 

        But then a devious thought crossed her mind. “You know what we're missing here?” she asked, knowing Laura wouldn't respond. “A little…company.” She looked around at just how spacious the shower was for a small cabin. “Wait right here…” she said with a smile as she stepped out of the shower and moved to her jeans, slowly removing the queen of diamonds from her pocket. 

        She opened the door quietly and poked her head out. She could still see Eve on the couch, engrossed in her book, and her smile widened. “Umm, Eve?” she called out, hoping no one else would hear. But there was no response from Eve, she just turned the page of her novel. “Hey, Eve!” she called out a little bit louder. 

        Eve snapped out of her trance and looked up at Rayne. “Huh?” she asked, trying to figure out what was going on. “Oh, hey, what's up?” she asked politely. 

        Rayne did her best to look embarrassed. “I kinda…got in the shower and forgot to bring a towel. Could you grab one for me out of the linen closet please?” she asked as innocently as she could. 

        Eve smiled and slipped a bookmark into her book. “Sure!” she said with a smile as she stood up from the couch and made her way to the small closet in the hallway. The door opened in such a way that it obscured Eve’s view of Rayne and the bathroom door. And this was exactly what Rayne wanted. 

        Eve reached up and grabbed a towel. “Here you go…” she started as she closed the closet door and turned to Rayne, only to gasp in surprise. In front of her stood Rayne with one hand on her hip and a confident smile on her face, completely naked. And in her hand was the queen of hearts. Eve gasped at the sight and unconsciously slid her eyes up the naked young woman's body, until she saw the card. “Hey…” she said as her face took on a very dreamy, tired look, “that one’s….miiinne….” she trailed off as her face went slack and her shoulders slumped to her sides, limp and deeply relaxed. 

        “Ya don’t say?” Rayne said with a devious grin as she placed the card on the bathroom counter next to Laura’s before hopping back out into the hallway, grabbing Eve’s belt and pulling her into the bathroom. “Come’ere!” she said aggressively, closing the door behind her. 

        Inside the bathroom, Rayne pulled Eve close and kissed her aggressively while her hands moved down Eve’s form and undid her belt as quickly as she could, letting her jeans drop. Breaking the kiss, she hooked her fingers into Eve’s panties and slid them down in one quick motion. 

        As she stood up she grabbed Eve’s shirt and pulled it over her head, causing the hypnotized woman’s arms and hair to both be pulled up with the shirt and then slowly fall to her sides. Rayne smiled at the nearly naked young woman and put a finger into the front of her bra, using it to pull her closer to the shower where Laura still waited blankly for them. Rayne leaned in and kissed Eve’s breast as she worked her hands behind the taller woman, finally unclasping her bra and tossing it aside. 

        Rayne gently guided Eve into the shower and pulled the curtain behind her, giving the three of them just a little extra feeling of privacy. She took a moment to look at the two young women, both completely helpless and blank, and let her hands slowly run up and down their bodies. She started at their legs, and let her hands glide up, very slowly and tenderly as she slid up their thighs and over the curve of their butts. She couldn’t help but let out a soft giggle, which was muffled by the sound of the warm water spraying around them. 

        She smiled at Eve and then at Laura while her hands moved up and down their bodies, caressing their breasts as she leaned in to steal a kiss from Eve, and then from Laura. Her hands moved down their bodies and, slowly, she began to tease each of their clits. “Ladies…” she said in a husky voice, “let’s have a little fun.” She slid one finger into each of the hypnotized women, causing them to let out a moan that was completely covered but the sound of the water hitting the shower floor.

To be continued. 

        Curious what might have happened in the shower between Rayne and her hypnotized companions? You can find an extended ending for this chapter here: Queens are Wild - N.C.U. - Part 9 Ext. Ending

Thanks to Sleepygirl for doing the editing for me. If you would like to see her editing reactions to this story, and how it affected her while she was editing you can find that here: Queens are Wild 9 - Editing Banter.

Thank you so much for taking the time to read this! If you have any comments I would love to hear them! You can follow more adventures at Spirals Nightclub! You can also find bonus content on my Patreon page!

Featuring: RayneKlaireEveLaura, and Trisha

Queens are Wild - N.C.U. - Part 10
Queens are Wild - N.C.U. - Part 10 Alt Ending (Patreon Exclusive)
Queens are Wild - N.C.U. - Part 11
Queens are Wild - N.C.U. - Part 11 Alt Ending (Patreon Exclusive)
Queens are Wild - N.C.U. - Part 12
Queens are Wild - N.C.U. - Part 12 Alt Ending (Patreon Exclusive)
Queens are Wild - N.C.U. - Part 13
Queens are Wild - N.C.U. - Part 13 Alt Ending (Patreon Exclusive)
Queens are Wild - N.C.U. - Part 14
Queens are Wild - N.C.U. - Part 14 Alt Ending (Patreon Exclusive)
Queens are Wild - N.C.U. - Part 15
Queens are Wild - N.C.U. - Part 15 Alt Ending (Patreon Exclusive)


And many many more chapters to come!

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