Among Us - Alt Ending - Tie! (N.C.U./Spirals)

 Key: MC, FD, FF, Hypno

Description: What would have happened if Abigail had decided not to vote, and left the final attempt to eliminate the hypnotist at a tie?

Note: Early on in the final poll to decide this story, Rayne had a commanding lead. But a few days later it was neck and neck and the very real possibility started to emerge that I may be dealing with a tie! I hadn’t even considered that possibility, but as soon as I did a bunch of story ideas started to run through my mind as to how I would end it if it truly was tied. These are some of those ideas. 

The Bathroom: 

Rayne and Laura stood on opposite sides of the bathroom, and both looked like they were ready for a fight. Between them was the deeply hypnotized Jessy, sprawled out on the floor, completely unconscious and unaware of the scene happening around her. In the doorway stood Abigail, who was staring between the two girls, fully aware that they were waiting for her to make a decision. It was all up to her. And all she could do was sigh as she looked from Rayne to Laura and back again. “Fuck.” 

“That’s not good enough!” Rayne growled in frustration. “You know as well as I do that you have to choose. Do you believe me…or her?”

“Think about it Abigail.” Laura said softly. “Rayne has been sus this entire time! Every single person that’s been hypnotized, she’s either been seen in the area or didn’t have an alibi! Every. Single. One. It has to be her!” Laura pleaded to the older woman.

“Not every one...” Rayne said, looking very suspiciously at Laura. “Eluran. She was found hypnotized in the pantry, and you were found outside.” Rayne pointed out. “And then somehow you were spared, and just happened to sleep through the sound of a two pound bag of flour falling on her head. How does that work exactly?”

Among Us - Alt Ending - Rayne voted off (N.C.U./Spirals)

 Key: MC, FD, FF, Hypno

Description: In this alternate ending, Rayne is eliminated, leaving Laura victorious and free to celebrate however she chooses. 

Note: Since the story was decided by a poll, I didn’t really know how it would end until the poll finished. But five days into the polling Rayne had a commanding lead, so I started to write the last chapter with her being voted off. Only to discover that Laura had won the vote! No sense in letting all that hard work go to waste!

The Bathroom: 

Rayne and Laura stood on opposite sides of the bathroom, and both looked like they were ready for a fight. Between them was the deeply hypnotized Jessy, sprawled out on the floor, completely unconscious and unaware of the scene happening around her. In the doorway stood Abigail, who was staring between the two girls, fully aware that they were waiting for her to make a decision. It was all up to her. And all she could do was sigh as she looked from Rayne to Laura and back again. “Fuck.” 

“That’s not good enough!” Rayne growled in frustration. “You know as well as I do that you have to choose. Do you believe me…or her?” 

“Think about it Abigail.” Laura said softly. “Rayne has been sus this entire time! Every single person that’s been hypnotized, she’s either been seen in the area or didn’t have an alibi! Every. Single. One. It has to be her!” Laura pleaded to the older woman. 

“Not every one...” Rayne said, looking very suspiciously at Laura. “Eluran. She was found hypnotized in the pantry, and you were found outside.” Rayne pointed out. “And then somehow you were spared, and just happened to sleep through the sound of a two pound bag of flour falling on her head. How does that work exactly?”

“Rayne...I choose Rayne.” Abigail interrupted with a defeated sigh.

Among Us (N.C.U./Spirals) Alt Ending: Uber Midnight

 Key: FD, F/F, MC

Description: In this alternate scene from Round 3, Midnight is used to drain the other hypnotized girls as a safety measure. I mean, seriously, what could possibly go wrong with loading up a hypnotized succubus with energy?

[Author’s Note: When I first found out that Midnight would be voted off, I started coming up with ideas of how to drain the others. I came up with the following idea in my head which I thought was super sexy! But the more I thought about it the less sense it started to make narratively. Yeah, yeah, I know narrative cohesion in porn is an oxymoron, but I couldn’t find a way to make it work. But the scene was stuck in my head so I figured I’d put it here as a bonus scene. Enjoy!]

Midnight was completely still, slumped in the chair after being deeply hypnotized by Rayne. Even her tail was completely unmoving on the ground next to her, as if it too had been entranced. “So what do we do with Eve and Eluran?” asked Jessy nervously. “If she really did hypnotize and program them, we can’t just leave them in the other room. We would have to do something to them like we did with Katheryn and Stacy…” she trailed off, hoping the others would connect the dots.

“What we did with Katheryn and Stacy…” Rayne started, casting a disappointed look over to Midnight, “was let the succubus drain them.” 

“Can we do that again?” Abigail asked curiously.

Among Us (N.C.U./Spirals) How Round 3 Really Happened

 Key: FD, F/F, MC

Description: The girls believed that they had managed to subdue the hypnotist, only to find two more girls hypnotized. All fingers pointed to Midnight, but was it really her? Here is what really happened to Jessy. 

Round 3: Jessy

Laura left the sitting area and started to walk down the path. She had come so far already, she didn’t want to just give up. But she knew she would have to be quick and stealthy, while also being careful. She was still outnumbered. 

She followed Rayne down the path, taking the fork towards the sauna and pool area, and watched the younger freshman head into the cafeteria. She didn’t want to run the risk of having someone walk in on her while she went after Rayne, so she hid by the sauna for several minutes. She was finally about to follow her into the cafeteria when she spotted Jessy leaving the seating area. 

“Shit.” Laura thought to herself as she watched the sophomore closely. If she didn’t change her path soon, Laura would have to move or risk being found near the sauna without the proper attire. That would look…suspicious, to say the least, and everyone was already on high alert.  

But then. to her delight, Jessy changed directions and began to move towards the bathroom. “Perfect!” she thought to herself as she snuck out of her hiding place and headed after her. Laura knew that of all the girls, Jessy was the least likely to see a hypnotic induction coming, and she also happened to be the most passive. All she needed was a few minutes alone and she could take care of Jessy, and then it would just be a matter of picking off the others, one by one. 

Among Us (N.C.U./Spirals) How Round 2 Really Happened

 Key: FD, F/F, MC

Description: In Among Us: Round 2 (N.C.U./Spirals) Found here: The girls, believing that Nadia had hypnotized Stacy and Katheryn, elected to let Midnight hypnotize and drain her. But later, Eluran and Eve were found hypnotized after Nadia was already incapacitated. What happened to the girls? More importantly, who did it? Well…I’ll show you!

Round 2: After the vote. 

Laura left the sitting room with the rest of the girls, casting only a quick glance into the room that now held the three drained young women. Including Nadia…her mistress. At least for the weekend. The hypnotic suggestions that Nadia had implanted in Laura’s mind were still active, and she had no choice but to obey. She needed to hypnotize the other girls. Needed to make them obey so that Nadia could have her relaxing weekend. The fact that Nadia was currently in a succubus-induced coma didn’t even register in her hypnotically influenced mind. And as the others began to split up, Laura concocted a plan. 

Round 2: Eluran

As everyone split up, Laura noticed Eluran moving rather hurriedly down the path towards the kitchen. She didn’t want to attract any attention so she quietly, and casually, began to follow behind her. It wasn’t long before the rest of the group had split up. Abigail had broken off to head towards the pool while Eve and Jessy had moved into the locker rooms to change, probably on their way to the sauna. 

She continued to follow Eluran from a distance and watched as the annoyed elf made her way into the kitchen. She looked around cautiously to make sure no one was following her and then sped up her pace to get to the kitchen faster. When she arrived, she noticed that the lights were off. It didn't really matter since, between the window and the skylights, there was more than enough light for her to see. But what she didn’t see was Eluran. “Where the hell did she go?” she thought to herself. 

Among Us (N.C.U./Spirals) How Round 1 really happened

 Key: FD, F/F, MC

Description: In Among Us: Round 1 (N.C.U./Spirals) Found here: The girls came across two of their own who were hypnotized by mysterious hypnotists in their midsts. This is the story of how Stacy and Katheryn both ended up falling prey to them, and reveals who the hypnotists really were all along. 

Round 1: Dr. Stacy

Stacy walked into the utilities room and flipped on the lights...or at least she tried to. Only two of the bulbs actually lit up, the rest were either burned out, or in the case of one bulb, flickering on and off. “Great.” she sighed as she looked over the list of tasks they had all been given. “Lights…lights…lights…are not my job! Sweet!” She said with a smile as she put the list away. “One less job to worry about. Now where the hell is that sauna filter?” she asked herself. 

She moved further into the utility shed and spotted the filters behind a rather large cart. “Aha! There you are!” she said with a smile. With some effort, she managed to push the cart out of the way and knelt down to unscrew the filter housing. She missed the sound of footsteps slowly approaching behind her. 

Among Us (N.C.U. / Spirals) - Round 4

 Key: MC, FD, FF, Hypno

Description: It’s come down to Laura or Rayne as the secret hypnotist, and the choice is all up to Abigail. Will she make the right decision?

The Bathroom:
    Rayne and Laura stood on opposite sides of the bathroom, and both looked like they were ready for a fight. Between them was the deeply hypnotized Jessy, sprawled out on the floor, completely unconscious and unaware of the scene happening around her. In the doorway stood Abigail, who was staring between the two girls, fully aware that they were waiting for her to make a decision. It was all up to her. And all she could do was sigh as she looked from Rayne to Laura and back again. “Fuck.”

    “That’s not good enough!” Rayne growled in frustration. “You know as well as I do that you have to choose. Do you believe me…or her?”

    “Think about it Abigail.” Laura said softly. “Rayne has been sus this entire time! Every single person that’s been hypnotized, she’s either been seen in the area or didn’t have an alibi! Every. Single. One. It has to be her!” Laura pleaded to the older woman.

    “Not every one...” Rayne said, looking very suspiciously at Laura. “Eluran. She was found hypnotized in the pantry, and you were found outside.” Rayne pointed out. “And then somehow you were spared, and just happened to sleep through the sound of a two pound bag of flour falling on her head. How does that work exactly?”

    “Rayne...I choose Rayne.” Abigail interrupted with a defeated sigh.

Among Us (N.C.U./Spirals) - Round 3

 Key: MC, FD, FF, Hypno

Description: With all fingers pointed at Midnight, the remaining girls need to figure out how to incapacitate the centuries old succubus. Is this the end of the game?

The Sitting Room
    Midnight had cast her vote for Rayne, even though she still wasn’t convinced that she was behind any of this. Jessy had also cast a much more nervous vote for Rayne…but, to Midnight’s surprise, Rayne, and Laura both raised their hands to vote against Midnight. And finally, a very nervous Abigail slowly raised her finger…and pointed it at Midnight. The succubus looked at the row of girls with a disbelieving smirk, raising her eyebrow. “You’ve got to be kidding me.” She said, more to herself than the others.  

    Abigail cleared her throat. “I...I don’t think so. I guess it’s you, Midnight. I’m sorry”

    Midnight shook her head. “It’s alright, but now you have a very…interesting problem before you.” She said as her smirk turned into a devious grin. “How exactly…DO...four mortal women subdue a succubus?”

    “Get her!” Abigail shouted as she charged the much taller woman. Unfortunately for her, everyone else was too lost in their own thoughts or nervousness to notice Abigail’s call to arms. As a result, no one joined in and the amateur hypnotist ran face first into Midnight as she attempted to tackle her.

Among Us (N.C.U./Spirals) - Round 2

 Key: MC, FD, FF, Hypno, Freeze

Description: The people have spoken, and Nadia has been selected to be removed from the group. But was she really the hypnotist? And if so, who was her accomplice?

Note: To help you follow along a bit better a map of the camp grounds can be found here: https://www.patreon.com/posts/42493367
There is also a link to a poll at the end of the story where you can help to decide who gets voted out, and change the course of the next chapter!

The Sitting Room:
    As Nadia sat down and glared confidently at Rayne, she heard the nervous, hesitant voices of the girls around her cast their votes, one by one.

    “Nadia.” Eve said. Even though she was confident in her answer, she couldn’t hide her nervousness about how the older, and much more aggressive, hypnotist was going to respond.

    Nadia shot a glare in Eve’s direction, only to hear Abigail respond with “Nadia” next. Unlike Eve, Abigail wasn’t worried about any repercussions from her mentor. She would have voted for Nadia regardless, just to see her get hypnotized and drained by the succubus.

    “What?!” Nadia shouted as her eyes widened in shock and rage. “What the fuck are you thinking!”

    “Nadia…” came a very timid, almost whispered response from Jessy. She seemed to be trying to hide behind Eve as she gave her answer.

Among Us (N.C.U./Spirals) - Round 1

 Key: FD, MC

Description: This is an interactive story that will be written based on poll responses from the readers! A group of young women from New Chicago head out for a relaxing, hypnosis free weekend, but …two of the girls have decided they have other plans. Can you help the girls figure out who the hypnotists are…before everyone is entranced?

    Camp Spirals, a former scout camp, was recently acquired by the mysterious owner of the Spirals Nightclub. Although the camp was renovated and in good shape as a result, it still needed some minor work to be done; after being abandoned for some time, the floors needed sweeping and mopping and there were some other small tasks that needed to be accomplished. Nothing that the girls couldn’t handle. In order to get a nice quiet weekend away from the city, ten young women who worked at or were patrons of the Spirals Nightclub had been selected to complete those tasks. The trip was all expenses paid, provided they finish all of the assigned tasks before the end of the weekend. (A map of the camp can be found HERE).

    Included in the group of young women were: Nadia, the assistant manager from the Spiral’s Nightclub, a fiery redheaded hypnotist with a devious streak about her. Abigail, Nadia’s protege, a brunette in her mid twenties who was constantly trying to one up her mentor. Dr. Stacy, a dark haired Elven surgeon, and her friend Eluran, a curly haired blonde elf who had just recently joined her friend for a visit to Spirals. Midnight, a seductive succubus who was acting as a hypnotized messenger for the mysterious owners of the club and, by extension, the camp, and Katheryn, a bubbly redhead who worked in the city's museums. Joining them were four students from New Chicago University’s Hypnotic Sorority, S.L.E.E.P. Eve, a grad volunteer with long flowing brown hair. Laura, a bubbly and excitable blonde. Jessy, an outgoing but ultimately nervous young woman with shoulder length brown hair. And finally Rayne, a short, muscular red headed freshman who was determined to control the girls of S.L.E.E.P.

    On the way to the camp, the young women came to a three part agreement. First, they would divide the tasks up at random to ensure that all of the duties were spread out evenly among them. Second, upon arrival they would set out to complete all of the tasks as quickly as possible, ideally before dinner, to give them plenty of time to relax and enjoy the rest of the weekend. And finally, they agreed that in order for the weekend to be completely free from stress, they would abstain from hypnotizing anyone during the trip so everyone could relax. All of the girls agreed. Two of them lied.

There are two hypnotists remaining.